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Voting Ends Sunday
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10 lines tops.
That's all I will have time for.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161210
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161213
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161211
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161207
Last edited by Telekinetic; December 25th, 2004 at 04:18 PM
Last edited by buh bye Matty :(; December 25th, 2004 at 04:26 PM
we all know who's the bitch, aint even hard to tell..
& yea, tele always drops with class... well, minus the cl..
kids been crazy with his shit.. & he thinks he's the best??
ima cuff this laughing riot.. just to give the citizens arrest..
tele its a known fact.. ya always be chokin in the crunch..
i aint much for dismissing, but u been known for it every punch.
finally steppin up to the scale.. a much anticipated weight..
tele's bound to get the win.. with extra rope 'n duct tape..
id throw ya a title wave punch.. but i decided to actually try..
& thanks to ya name in the thread, ya made it the weakest link..
..goodbye.
Im handing kids L’s on credit… so this battle is lame
Cus I got Lloyd on my Tab more than his fuckin name
Your barking up the wrong tree… ya ego needs a trim
So I’m going out on a limb…and break all four of them
This navy officer’s pathetic… he don’t wanna see war
I got this old navy laid out more than department stores
Your more shit than septic tanks…so fuck what ya write
I could cheat with your bitch an still not see affair fight
You’ll never take the title slut… an I’m not being funny
Cause ya never fucking see me… like I owe you money
Goodluck Tab.
And Merry Christmas to all of Jr.
v/ Tele
I Thought Tele came quite hard this week, Liked every bar apart from the final and came hard with some nice Wit and Wordplay. Also thought alot of Tab's verse, but thought it didnt quite match tele's in terms of punches...
so v/tele
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Close battle. Both came well but I thought Tele's verse was hitting harder. Both had good bars but Tele came with a bit more wit and good punches. I think Tab could have taken this if he had tried a bit harder.
Vote - Telekinetic
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I'm bored, so I'm actually going to break this down. Thank me, I don't often do this.
we all know who's the bitch, aint even hard to tell..
& yea, tele always drops with class... well, minus the cl..
Eh..the wordplay here is pretty weak and obvious. Like, you didn't incorporate the wordplay in any witty way, it was just sort of 'there'. You coulda used the concept much better.
kids been crazy with his shit.. & he thinks he's the best??
ima cuff this laughing riot.. just to give the citizens arrest..
Decent..this was a dope concept, but could have been worded much better.
tele its a known fact.. ya always be chokin in the crunch..
i aint much for dismissing, but u been known for it every punch.
This was cool, and your best punch so far. I've never heard it, but its probably played. However, the bad wording once again hurt the punch. Still cool though.
finally steppin up to the scale.. a much anticipated weight..
tele's bound to get the win.. with extra rope 'n duct tape..
Eh...this was another good concept, but the way that you worded it, it doesn't really hit.
id throw ya a title wave punch.. but i decided to actually try..
& thanks to ya name in the thread, ya made it the weakest link..
OMG...a weakest link punch, haha..so whack..sorry, I seriously hope you didn't try with this punch.
Overall Tab, your verse was decent, but I felt you had alot of wasted concepts that either didn't hit directly enough, or hit, but were worded badly. Work on your wording to make your punches more direct, and you'll be a force. You've pretty much got the wit down pat, you just need to be more 'agressive' with your punches.
Im handing kids L’s on credit… so this battle is lame
Cus I got Lloyd on my Tab more than his fuckin name
I like how the setup connected with the punch, but I wasn't feeling this punch as a whole. The nameplay was just sort of weak.
Your barking up the wrong tree… ya ego needs a trim
So I’m going out on a limb…and break all four of them
This was cool. The concept was sort of old..but you were agressive enough with this punch to make it work well. The wording was a little screwy, but this was decent.
This navy officer’s pathetic… he don’t wanna see war
I got this old navy laid out more than department stores
Is he actually a navy officer? If so, this was a cool punch, if not, this punch sucked. I'm just going to assume he is.
Your more shit than septic tanks…so fuck what ya write
I could cheat with your bitch an still not see affair fight
lol..I liked this.
You’ll never take the title slut… an I’m not being funny
Cause ya never fucking see me… like I owe you money
hahahah...the wit here was so bad, that it was awesome. I was feeling this purely on a comedic level.
Your verse was above average. The opener sucked, but the rest was good. You had some funny punches, as well as some hard ones. So yea, you did pretty well here.
/v Telekinetic. He came more consistent, and had the better punches. Decent battle though.
I jus think Tele came a bit more consistent and harder with his punches....Tab had decent weordplay, but some of it seemed forced.
Vote-Tele
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Tele takes it again.... i loved the break all four of em line... and some nice wit and wordplay... affair fight nice... but yeah... Tele came harder with better punches more wit... yadda yadda... not bad battle though,,,
vote - Tele
owned =(
nice job tele
^lol Thanks Tab.
Nice battle man.
Telekinetic wins by KO, closed.
Telekinetic (7-0)
Tab Lloyd (2-1)
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