16 Lines
No feeding
Feeble
SirusX
16 Lines
No feeding
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in...
damn i'm lookin' forward to this battle "feeble minded" is tight damn...
You ain't see the shit in his sig?
It's gotta stand for something...
Anyway, don't spam with shit like that because that's "swaying" in basic definition and your post might get edited...
yea, feebs is good.
in,
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Originally Posted by M16
Man, shut the fuck up you dickriding motherfucker.
Pwned....Man, shut the fuck up you dickriding motherfucker.
stop freeposting all of you
Now you know..This Year….
Feeb’s Christmas is topped off with every MOD’s vote reasoning…
But when asked…he replys “those votes I didn’t even think to bring”
This Vet drops bland…… when there’s no drama to fuel his fire
Feeb’s useless diamond mind can’t find a rhyme to fool the buyers
….who you fool’n we all know you don’t have Friends Feebie..
But you’re the shit… especially when your depends start leaking
This fool’s a liar…say’s he’s legit..but feeble minded his own rules
I smoke kids.. Feeb’s just another clown caught inside the residue
Lesson two, money’s rules & right now Feeb’s is w/o denominations
Talk’s cheep & feeb’s broke. nobody bought your wack observations
….Look here…an Internet Veteran… who actually expects props
But after the ghost-battles, he’s over-worked like Asian sweat shops
Dropping tired clichés, thinking he’s above the front lines
Still stuck in glitz of rapping around foodcarts at lunch-time
This kid’s got the touch.. to knock any art off the canvas
A zirconium intellect annexed in a land full of bandwith
I honored to expose this Diamond in the bluff…
You will loose. Even if you never get Enough
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still waiting on you
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Cheers
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i beat & banned u - but lets make up, the rhymes is done dude
cuz you'll get along... dick from all the times i've sonned you
you've been anxious to battle, hurried lines? this newbie has em
now i know.. that wackness spawns from too much enthusiasm
embarassed to face me, i gave him confidence & played this sped
this bitch is beet - and his face is that shade of red
i became an expert at reading newbies eventually..
how come your sig still doesn't make fucking sense to me?
there's been gossip about you, but u were never down to win
your name'll be floating around, the fucking river i drown you in
Sirus was sure he'd win, aint what the voters claim..
so i'll give u your hunch back, with the whole of notre dame
u know to blame me, get killed man.
y you so worried about a record on which ur still banned?
Why is my name in ur vote sirus?
Dont make me herb u.
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
define-ok flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, punches were aight...but really not too creative and needed to be harder. diamond minds line was coo
feeble-ok flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, punches were aight..lil more creative then sirus..lil more witty.
Overall-I think feeble gets this cuz he came more personal and had a lil better flow.
vote-feeble
i need one my battles ended..
one with pied piper so i can start anutha
so vote on that one if u didn't already.
1-0 you.. up
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Now you know..This Year….
Feeb’s Christmas is topped off with every MOD’s vote reasoning…
But when asked…he replys “those votes I didn’t even think to bring”
NAH.. I C YOUR POINT BUT NO
This Vet drops bland…… when there’s no drama to fuel his fire
Feeb’s useless diamond mind can’t find a rhyme to fool the buyers
NICE LIL METAPHORE THING
….who you fool’n we all know you don’t have Friends Feebie..
But you’re the shit… especially when your depends start leaking
UM OK I GUESS
This fool’s a liar…say’s he’s legit..but feeble minded his own rules
I smoke kids.. Feeb’s just another clown caught inside the residue
AVERAGE
Lesson two, money’s rules & right now Feeb’s is w/o denominations
Talk’s cheep & feeb’s broke. nobody bought your wack observations
AVERAGE
….Look here…an Internet Veteran… who actually expects props
But after the ghost-battles, he’s over-worked like Asian sweat shops
WOW OK THAT WAS GOOD.. BUT FLOW WAS OFF
Dropping tired clichés, thinking he’s above the front lines
Still stuck in glitz of rapping around foodcarts at lunch-time
GOOD
This kid’s got the touch.. to knock any art off the canvas
A zirconium intellect annexed in a land full of bandwith
GOOD
I honored to expose this Diamond in the bluff…
You will loose. Even if you never get Enough
OK FINISH... 7.5/10
i beat & banned u - but lets make up, the rhymes is done dude
cuz you'll get along... dick from all the times i've sonned you
NAH
you've been anxious to battle, hurried lines? this newbie has em
now i know.. that wackness spawns from too much enthusiasm
NICE
embarassed to face me, i gave him confidence & played this sped
this bitch is beet - and his face is that shade of red
NICE AGAIN
i became an expert at reading newbies eventually..
how come your sig still doesn't make fucking sense to me?
LOL NICE
there's been gossip about you, but u were never down to win
your name'll be floating around, the fucking river i drown you in
PERFECT
Sirus was sure he'd win, aint what the voters claim..
so i'll give u your hunch back, with the whole of notre dame
NICE
u know to blame me, get killed man.
y you so worried about a record on which ur still banned?
OK FINISH... 8.5/10
v/feeble.. better punches. THIS IS NOT A D/R OR HATE.. IM BEING REAL
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