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Surgeon
MagicMind
house rules
10-12 lines
due in 30 mins
aight i'll be done then probably. so it's going down...
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(Psychotic Dream)
One by One I will make bitches choke
Like when they hit the chronic. and cant handle the smoke.
check i'll have mine done soon...make sure you up this when were done
surgeon your nothin but a wack crooked doc
only thing you do to your patients is suck their cock
dude your a bitch that needs to be taught
your currently in a battle that can't be faught
cause you got nothin on me...why can't you see
that there's no way you can beat this EmCee
so i'll use my mind and use my magic
the way i'll beat you might be tragic
this busta doesn't have the slightest clue
that i don't suck because i'm new
and if you don't believe that i'll make you proof
so i'll wave my wand and you'll go...POOF
Surgeon laughs at this bitch who claims to have "magic-minds"
finding this battle sucks for you like "tragic-finds"
I'm going to reconstruct your face the way I'm gonna make this bitch a disgrace
With my hits he'll still feel how losings tastes.
now it's time to get serious.
Surgeon has a record signing 'beautiful-flow' like a "melodic-label"
Here to spit acids that burn that are not known on a "periodic-tabel"
Surgeon's gonna crack your identity like I "split-your-fame"
so Get my scalpel cuz I'm gonna "slit-your-frame"
'Game Over' for Magic-Minds cuz you cant "Hit-dis-Game"!
Magical trying to suprise me with his "tricks-wid-twists"
but accepting this battle is like "slit-ta-wrists"
cuz he couldnt land a 'hard-punch' with "bricks-as-fists"!!
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(Psychotic Dream)
One by One I will make bitches choke
Like when they hit the chronic. and cant handle the smoke.
eh okay. nice spit. I think you might of took it. but voters vote up
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(Psychotic Dream)
One by One I will make bitches choke
Like when they hit the chronic. and cant handle the smoke.
damn you both some good rappers but surgeon magic had you this time but you still good to any of you wanna battle me
you didn't do bad yoself man.....looks pretty good now uppin for votes # 1!
naw. my shit was garbage. i could find a better rhyme in a cat in the hat book than my flows. i rushed it too quick. and didnt reread it or nothing
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(Psychotic Dream)
One by One I will make bitches choke
Like when they hit the chronic. and cant handle the smoke.
ah.....still good to me uppin for votes!!! number 2!!
Personals go to MagicMind, very basic but very solid
Flow I guess goes to MagicMind too, because his lines were easier to recite in my mind
Surgeon you complicated it a bit too much and you didn't really attack him that hard. You gave him one personal as an opening line but you didn't follow up, you just started to self glorify or attack in a general direction
Favorite line:
surgeon your nothin but a wack crooked doc
only thing you do to your patients is suck their cock
eh thanks man...lookin for feedback and votes from those who can!
surgeon got this majic was way more simplistic, and didn't really throw any tough punches. weak attempts at personals and not creative at all. surgeon verse wasn't much better though but his punches were and was more creative.
vote-surgeon
surgeon your nothin but a wack crooked doc
only thing you do to your patients is suck their cock
WEAK STATEMENT...WORK ON GOOD PERSONALS
dude your a bitch that needs to be taught
your currently in a battle that can't be faught
WEAK STATEMENT AGAIN, GOTTA BE CREATIVE WIT PUNCHES N SHIT
cause you got nothin on me...why can't you see
that there's no way you can beat this EmCee
WEAK..RHYMES ARE WACK...NEED BETTER VOCAB
so i'll use my mind and use my magic
the way i'll beat you might be tragic
PREDICTABLE AND WEAK SELF GLORY
this busta doesn't have the slightest clue
that i don't suck because i'm new
WEAK..STOP WITH STATEMENTS..PUNCH HIM DAMMIT
and if you don't believe that i'll make you proof
so i'll wave my wand and you'll go...POOF
WEAK SELF GLORY WEAK VERSE
Surgeon laughs at this bitch who claims to have "magic-minds"
finding this battle sucks for you like "tragic-finds"
GOOD PERSONAL. WORK ON UR FLOW AND WORDING
I'm going to reconstruct your face the way I'm gonna make this bitch a disgrace
With my hits he'll still feel how losings tastes.
WEAK THREATS AND STATEMENTS, WEAK SELF GLORY, FLOW WAS OFF
now it's time to get serious.
Surgeon has a record signing 'beautiful-flow' like a "melodic-label"
Here to spit acids that burn that are not known on a "periodic-tabel"
WEAK SELF-GLORY, NOOBISH FORMAT
Surgeon's gonna crack your identity like I "split-your-fame"
so Get my scalpel cuz I'm gonna "slit-your-frame"
WEAK THREAT...OK SIMILE
'Game Over' for Magic-Minds cuz you cant "Hit-dis-Game"!
LOST LINE..STICK TO ONE RHYME SCHEME
Magical trying to suprise me with his "tricks-wid-twists"
but accepting this battle is like "slit-ta-wrists"
WEAK..NO NEED TO POINT SHIT OUT TO US NAH MEAN
cuz he couldnt land a 'hard-punch' with "bricks-as-fists
PLAYED...TOO MANY TIMES...WEAK BAR....STICK TO ONE RHYME SCHEME...
ALTHOU SURGEON CAME WIT PLAYED LINES HE ACTUALLY ATTEMPTED TO PUNCH...SO HE TAKES THIS ONE
VOTE=SURGEON
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damn surgeon wanna battle me im about a lil lower tha you but ill give it a try okay you can set i up
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