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Thread: ~~Mental Capacity~~

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    Lightbulb ~~Mental Capacity~~

    This is my verse from a collaborative tracc i'll be dropping soon...let me know what ya think...


    An Attempt To Augment Gen Is Apparently Made In Haste…
    All Knowledge Of tha Brain’s Defaced Since Making Tha Same Mistakes…
    Repeatedly Time After Time Tha Legend See’s Tha Greats Embraced…
    As All But One Gem Of Intellect Is Absorbed Before Tha Snake Can Taste…
    Tha Flavour Knowledge Offers From Behind A Mask Renounced Tha Bravest Face…
    Monitor How Life Craves Disgrace By Increasing Its Intensity In Order To Create More Waves…
    Of Which A Mind Rides Tha Crest In Its Daily Chase To Ensure That Hate’s Replaced…
    With A Sincerity Once Sought Which Only A Gifted Brain Can Take…
    To Recognise Tha Full Potential Capacity Tha Mind With-Holds Amid An Amazing Fate…
    Yet Tha Two-Faced Individuals Do Nothing But Keep Their Namesakes Delayed…
    Unaware Of Tha Plain Dismay They Bring To Tha Table On What Is Now A Wasted Day…
    Summoned Thoughts Are Misunderstood As Emotions Are Held In A Latent Daze…
    Voyaging Through A Confusion What Is Labelled As A Blatant Phase Judgments Shift To Make A Play…
    Turns Round Only To Race Away To Unknown Regions Trying To Escape Tha Maze…
    Trying To Visualise Tha Fake Through Tha Haze Over Which Apathy Graciously Grazed…
    Tha Sane Have Been Saved As Inner Combat Eradicates Beliefs Through Tha Glaze Of Tha Rain…

    Hope Ya Enjoyed This...Peace N God Bless

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    Daayum Very Nice..

    That Subject matter Is Always Sommit Im Interested In..

    Very On-Point Flow Aswel Wit Tha Multis Included..

    Should Sound Nice In Audio..

    Welcome To Tha Pillow Club..LOL

    People Like Catchin Zzzz's On Us..

    Keep It Coming Bro..

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    **throws Anutha Few ZzZzZzZ's Up In Tha Air**

    **catches Em**

    Thanx for tha reply bro, much appreciated..

    **Goes For Tha Final Catch Of Tha Day**

    **Drops Tha "Z"...**

    **Walks away...Shamefaced**

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    WOOSHY
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    that was nice man
    flowed nicely

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    The_Assassin
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    Overall flow was nice.. I liked the ill vocab too..

    keep it comin..

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    RhetoriX
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    Looked what I found on page 3, aint what I usually see... AHAHAHA, a UK joke, iLL... This is mos def a piece of art, and has been hella slept on... The imagery combined with the figuarative language makes this a winner, its detailed and goes straight to your head, definately a thinking verse... The vocab is hot as always, nice knowledge words... Like your new style Sir K2, its sharper and quiccer, a more indepth style... I would love to hear this in audio... WAIT, imma be doing this in audio with you... The mos iLLest lines...

    Tha Flavour Knowledge Offers From Behind A Mask Renounced Tha Bravest Face…
    Monitor How Life Craves Disgrace By Increasing Its Intensity In Order To Create More Waves…
    Of Which A Mind Rides Tha Crest In Its Daily Chase To Ensure That Hate’s Replaced…

    ^^ The sharpness of your rhythm is iLL sun...

    Voyaging Through A Confusion What Is Labelled As A Blatant Phase Judgments Shift To Make A Play…
    Turns Round Only To Race Away To Unknown Regions Trying To Escape Tha Maze…

    ^^ And thats strictly the troof, if you can understand it... Thats UK grimey, keep dropping the gems man... iiS for ever and united, lets jus do this now...

    Peez God...

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    i loved the flow and structure to it. nice stuff. could have been a lil bit better, but overall was pretty ill.
    holla
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    what up keezy baby..nice piece as always

    stay reppin luv..


    uno

    ps. email me ight its been a min...

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    As All But One Gem Of Intellect Is Absorbed Before Tha Snake Can Taste…
    Tha Flavour Knowledge Offers From Behind A Mask Renounced Tha Bravest Face…

    Damn Keezy..I dont know how you come up with mind rippin shit like that, but you never fail...

    .Trying To Visualise Tha Fake Through Tha Haze Over Which Apathy Graciously Grazed…
    Tha Sane Have Been Saved As Inner Combat Eradicates Beliefs Through Tha Glaze Of Tha Rain…

    VERY,very nice..Flow was on point, seen lotsa tight multis..everything just fit well together and made a lot of sense..imagry was vivid as alwayz..whole piece was on point..i swear the way you put ya thoughtz into words is amazing...your thoughts, alone, are.
    Anyway..you know you get nothin but luv n propz from GeGe..This was illness in its purest form..
    Stay up n keep blessin us..
    Peace.

    -ima go look for our old collab now.
    P U R E


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    Acidic
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    yo tat shit was mad tight keep it up i always like readin tha stuff u write keep it up

    p.s my lateset is unled lies continued but its gonna have a third verse and its gonna have lack of logic on it too so check tit wen u can aight lata

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    •madd•Professor•
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    damn... i'm fucking sorry that i didn't see this earlier...

    this had madd stupid crazy ill vocab and supreme flow, fuck jay z, fuck nelly, fuck cannibus, you could rip a few heads with just flow and skill with my label... attack of the decent, damn dawg, seriously, with your post and upcomin' posts will make it so no one can step to the pure, damn, madd respect and madd props, respect to the fullest dawg, peace


    signed,
    ~madd
    Last edited by •madd•Professor•; July 11th, 2002 at 08:02 PM

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