Feeble - SirusX

[Record]

v-feeble
came way harda wit his punches n disses.. i felt his more, and it was more enjoyable to read.. both structure was nice n short.. feeble coulda could come way harda lookin at his other verses, but he neva needed much.. gl to both and for the oter guy just keep practicing ull get there dawg..
in return vote here please....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160286

[SirusX]

thx for vote, i know that i got merked.
lol. u p

[maj1c]

Dude’s a bust.. straight fronting like John Daily
This kids the only ‘John’ that pays for a maybe
U KINDA HAD TO MAKE EXCUSES JUST TO GET THIS BAR DONE...WEAK ASS MOVE
U’ aliased as a confused Lemming lost with nothing to follow
This feeble mind’s hollow, confused to exactly where’s waldo?
BAD WORDING, OK BAR
Feeble, your asking for votes.. There’s no way to live up
Feeb tries to stand out but trips up over his own tip cup
NICE BAR, PRETTY SIMPLE THOU
Known to catch and blow fish like your name was Hootie
I’ll treat you like weed and prove your game is loose leaf
AGAINS WITH THE FORCED EXPLANATIONS
It’s simple your just too easy to diss bitch.. bare witness
& Have a very Merry Christmas Stuck in a canary’s shit-list
WEAK FINISH...


whats your name - who are you? everything i drops dope & hot
are you sirius? cuz after that verse i'm really hoping not
THE MOST PLAYED SELF GLORY IN 1ST LINE YET HE MANAGES TO TWIST IT AND IT WORKS OUT LIKE FIYA..SICK OPENER BAR
u can't cope alot, i make you lose, & demand it hoe
your the first kid to make a sig bout where he doesnt plan to go
NICE PERSONAL LMAO...NICE BAR
your career took a high dive, i dont fool with gloaters
you Flip good- but it won't go well with the Pool of voters
OK, 2ND LINE WAS GOOD
i touched a nerve,its chemistry- abandon luck n panic
cuz he'll reach his boiling point... then fucking vanish
FLOW WAS A BIT OFF BUT RHYME WAS ILL
good is what u try to be, but its tyranny; heres the irony
i skinned this faggot.. so he can't help but hide from me
SICK FINISH WITH THE MULTIS, NICE BAR

PRETTY ONE SIDED I MUST SAY...
IT SEEMED SIRUS PUT A LOT OF EFFORT IN BUT HE CAME WITH PRETTY MUCH A WEK VERSE
ON THE OTHTER HAND FEEBLE MINDED CAME WIT SUMTHIN THAT LOOKED KEYED AND SUMHOW CAME MUCH HARDER.

VOTE=FEEBLE MINDED

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR WITH AN HONEST VOTE ON MY BATTLES, CHECK THE SIG...PZ...

[SirusX]

lol. that one hurt.

one more, lets not prolong this agony.

[12gauge]

okok V/Feebs

Damn good battle here though both of you came good, its just feebs verse had more wit to it, sirius ya verse was decent it just didnt have me laughing and oohhing like feebs did, good battle tho, sirius just work on those concepts a lil.

plz return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=160228