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    "do Blacc Tears"

    Do black tears fall from brown faces
    and beautiful cocoa eyes?
    Can deep pain be disguised?
    Hear a word to the wise –
    there is no weakness in our cries;
    for only God knows
    how hard we fight and try,
    how we seriously strive,
    while constantly upholding
    bold links to our old pride;
    facing hidden foes
    from whom we cannot hide;
    reviving the broken pieces
    of our soul that dies
    when it is slain
    enduring psychic pain
    and then laid aside.
    Do black tears fall from brown faces
    onto moist cocoa skin?
    Do they feel like the same tears
    cried before
    now cried again?
    If I turn my wet face to the wind
    and grin
    will that somehow change the spin –
    cut loose of loss and capture win?
    The analysis and reasoning begin
    to wear thin, over time, in my mind.
    Do black tears fall from brown faces
    late at night,
    mostly hidden from common sight
    until the next day’s light
    pierces the secret veil
    and exposes a rejuvenated sorrow,
    longing for a brighter tomorrow?
    Or do black tears fall from brown faces
    tenderly kissed by the sun
    before the journey had begun
    in a sacred place
    where the salt of the earth
    wait for the season of rebirth?
    Do black tears fall?
    21-13-0

    ~~B~~ aka Synickle AKA Str8killa



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    papiswifey
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    i was really feelin dat. i was gonna put my fav. lines but there were too many to put (im lazy-sorry!) but fa real..keep it up. i wanna see more. 1

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    hey synickle....this really was another very good piece....actually i would say a heavyweight piece for sure...superb depiction of emotions and it was like a rhetorical question piece to behold...(!!!!)...but for real...i was really feeling this....the depth to it was superb...and the imagery at times was very good...and of coure....very well executed....mucho respect.....
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