10 lines
house rules
blind spit
i'll spit first
verse due 60 min after checkin
consider this my check
10 lines
house rules
blind spit
i'll spit first
verse due 60 min after checkin
consider this my check
check. im keying as well. blah.
I could sum you up in 4 words - "Waste Of Ov's Time"/
The 'balls in your court now' like the documents Kobe signed//
You could hit a foam mattress and still not see any hard punchlines/
You start eatin a candybar when i tell you that 'its crunchtime'//
Even tho your name spells it out you cant put "two" and "too" together/
You sound stupid like kids arguin over whos choo choo is better//
Woot's braggin and boastin now about how hes got some tight flows/
Only time your 'shit could be hot' is if your on the toilet and attacked by pyros//
I fry souls with my eyes closed you rhyme 'whiter' than albinos/
I preread your verse couldnt 'see where you were goin' like men with blindfolds//
O.V.Dose:
from text to audio, ya writings havnt been seen as therapudic.
with or without a rubric, ya club song makes me scared of music.
ya feel yourself way too much, ya even quotin votes.
its ironic that ya jokes get joked, and you think ya over most.
rules say he'll spit first & also state were goin blind.
how are you suppose to win, ya cant make sense of ya own line?
hyphenation wont make it cake, cause ya letters are not fluant.
like students in remedial poetry class, ya better off truant.
ya lines erase when ya drop fillers like tetris, your versatile.
punch all the font ya want, but ya wont come close to personal.
blah, thats 10.
Aight lets get some votes on this.......will return an honest vote on your battle
O. V. Dose-
I could sum you up in 4 words - "Waste Of Ov's Time"/
The 'balls in your court now' like the documents Kobe signed//
heh. decent.
You could hit a foam mattress and still not see any hard punchlines/
You start eatin a candybar when i tell you that 'its crunchtime'//
eh not all that hard.
Even tho your name spells it out you cant put "two" and "too" together/
You sound stupid like kids arguin over whos choo choo is better//
naw.
Woot's braggin and boastin now about how hes got some tight flows/
Only time your 'shit could be hot' is if your on the toilet and attacked by pyros//
=/ thats pretty played man.. rather wack.
I fry souls with my eyes closed you rhyme 'whiter' than albinos/
I preread your verse couldnt 'see where you were goin' like men with blindfolds//
nah.
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woot-
from text to audio, ya writings havnt been seen as therapudic.
with or without a rubric, ya club song makes me scared of music.
heh ok.
ya feel yourself way too much, ya even quotin votes.
its ironic that ya jokes get joked, and you think ya over most.
blah didnt like it.
rules say he'll spit first & also state were goin blind.
how are you suppose to win, ya cant make sense of ya own line?
no.
hyphenation wont make it cake, cause ya letters are not fluant.
like students in remedial poetry class, ya better off truant.
ok idea.. punch was weak.
ya lines erase when ya drop fillers like tetris, your versatile.
punch all the font ya want, but ya wont come close to personal.
decent.
Overall, kinda a weak battle for the first read today. But, I see woot taking this barely. Dose, your main problem wasnt on coming creative, it was lacking the hard punch to go along with it. Ya were slippin towards the end, and that hurt ya alot. Woot, for the most part, was consistent.. but ditto on not coming all that hard. However, you had enough to edge this one out. Just callin it like I see it.
v/ woot
OV-ok flow, ok structure, good wordplay, simple meta4's, sum ok disses
woot-flow was choppy, ok structure, disses were weak not worded well culd of been better if they were worded better.
Overall i feel the energy and stronger disses were from OV so
vote-OV
woot-nice flow, decent punches and vocab was pretty good.intro was good i was feeling it same as closing.
O.V dose- had the potitnal to be dangerous but those punches didnt follow though flow was same as woot. vocab was pretty equal to.
overall. this battle was close woot had decent punches where O.V dose had played punches at the best. woot took this fairly easily when i think bout it actually. so my vote goes to.
v\ woot
oh shit if you can hit up my battle peace one.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=154383
Originally posted by:O.V.
I could sum you up in 4 words - "Waste Of Ov's Time"/
The 'balls in your court now' like the documents Kobe signed//
NICE OPENER
You could hit a foam mattress and still not see any hard punchlines/
You start eatin a candybar when i tell you that 'its crunchtime'//
HEARD THAT ONE BEFORE
Even tho your name spells it out you cant put "two" and "too" together/
You sound stupid like kids arguin over whos choo choo is better//
NOPE
Woot's braggin and boastin now about how hes got some tight flows/
Only time your 'shit could be hot' is if your on the toilet and attacked by pyros//
TOO STRETCHED BUT IT WAS AIGHT
I fry souls with my eyes closed you rhyme 'whiter' than albinos/
I preread your verse couldnt 'see where you were goin' like men with blindfolds//
NO FATALITY
overall ok battle verse but you could of did a lot better.
I've seen other battles where you clearly took advantage.
Originally posted by:Woot
from text to audio, ya writings havnt been seen as therapudic.
with or without a rubric, ya club song makes me scared of music.
O.V'S OPENER WAS BETTER
ya feel yourself way too much, ya even quotin votes.
its ironic that ya jokes get joked, and you think ya over most
BETTER PUNCH THEN O.V'S
rules say he'll spit first & also state were goin blind.
how are you suppose to win, ya cant make sense of ya own line?
BETTER THEN O.V'S 3RD PUNCH
hyphenation wont make it cake, cause ya letters are not fluant.
like students in remedial poetry class, ya better off truant.
CONCEPT COOL YOU WON THIS BAR TOO
ya lines erase when ya drop fillers like tetris, your versatile.
punch all the font ya want, but ya wont come close to personal.
THIS WAS AIGHT BUT TO ME IT DID NOT RHYME AT ALL
good shit I seen you in battles where you get cho ass kicked
but in this one you took it one love.
V/woot
for overall harder punches that landed in the right place one love.
hit the link back
Uppin.................................dont sleep on this yall
RETURN THE FAVOR
Everybody had ok punch lines and had some good vocab
BUT OV, you had a lot of good stuff but you didnt fallow threw somehow
There was so much potensial it was crazy...
Woot... you had some good punches.. good intro, okay end... Your punches were more direct that OV... nothin about Briant and shit...
V/ WOOT
for having strong punches, less wack rhymes, although with equal vocab
Meat
Originally posted by:O.V.
I could sum you up in 4 words - "Waste Of Ov's Time"/
The 'balls in your court now' like the documents Kobe signed//
NICE OPENER
You could hit a foam mattress and still not see any hard punchlines/
You start eatin a candybar when i tell you that 'its crunchtime'//
HEARD THAT ONE BEFORE
Even tho your name spells it out you cant put "two" and "too" together/
You sound stupid like kids arguin over whos choo choo is better//
NOPE
Woot's braggin and boastin now about how hes got some tight flows/
Only time your 'shit could be hot' is if your on the toilet and attacked by pyros//
TOO STRETCHED BUT IT WAS AIGHT
I fry souls with my eyes closed you rhyme 'whiter' than albinos/
I preread your verse couldnt 'see where you were goin' like men with blindfolds//
NO FATALITY
overall ok battle verse but you could of did a lot better.
I've seen other battles where you clearly took advantage.
Originally posted by:Woot
from text to audio, ya writings havnt been seen as therapudic.
with or without a rubric, ya club song makes me scared of music.
O.V'S OPENER WAS BETTER
ya feel yourself way too much, ya even quotin votes.
its ironic that ya jokes get joked, and you think ya over most
BETTER PUNCH THEN O.V'S
rules say he'll spit first & also state were goin blind.
how are you suppose to win, ya cant make sense of ya own line?
BETTER THEN O.V'S 3RD PUNCH
hyphenation wont make it cake, cause ya letters are not fluant.
like students in remedial poetry class, ya better off truant.
CONCEPT COOL YOU WON THIS BAR TOO
ya lines erase when ya drop fillers like tetris, your versatile.
punch all the font ya want, but ya wont come close to personal.
THIS WAS AIGHT BUT TO ME IT DID NOT RHYME AT ALL
good shit I seen you in battles where you get cho ass kicked
but in this one you took it one love.
V/OV
uppin 1................................................. ....................
Yeah.. I don't know where you guys are coming from. O.V. clearly took this. His whole verse was focused on woot.. and throwin' hard punches and disses. I'll sum it up by quoting each of your guys' last two bars.
Woot's braggin and boastin now about how hes got some tight flows/
Only time your 'shit could be hot' is if your on the toilet and attacked by pyros//
I fry souls with my eyes closed you rhyme 'whiter' than albinos/
I preread your verse couldnt 'see where you were goin' like men with blindfolds//
That was a dope closer, and hard hittin'.. very emphatic.
hyphenation wont make it cake, cause ya letters are not fluant.
like students in remedial poetry class, ya better off truant.
ya lines erase when ya drop fillers like tetris, your versatile.
punch all the font ya want, but ya wont come close to personal.
This didn't hit hard at all, in my opinion... it was weak.
I'm givin' this to O.V. for comin' harder and doper.
Vote-O.V. Dose for the reasons stated above.
Return the favor and hit one of my two links.. word.
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