still buildin..
still buildin..
yo playa i wasnt fillin dat.....
yo the childrens story beat i started off hating a bit, cos it did sound a bit 80's korg style, but then i started to feel it.....
i can see a kinda 'moral to be told' style spit to this, where there is a bitter sweet ending..... nice
as for the second audio i liked it more as beat, tho it didnt inspire me as much into writing something, it didnt have that edge i see in the first beat........
kinda reminds me of a track from emimems first album when that lil melody thingy pops in at the end of the set of bars.....
there is potential in this second beat for a real nice melody to bust out a bit stronger, but it seemed to be holding back on me
overall keep up
nice potential and shit
peazz
Mr.G... been apart of rapbattles since it was an ezboard
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