10 lines you spit first....
3-0 - KO
suburbansinner
Effect
10 lines you spit first....
3-0 - KO
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Bitch I mean Business,
I'm not afraid of the Lamest,
You come in Effect when an MC needs a desperate win,
So in this case your just as effective as a hole in the bottom trash bin,
The other rhyme biters on here fill your hole with crazy chemicals,
Probably going to someone that gives rhyme rentals,
If you had this many wins on the internet you should be making demo tapes,
I think your acually a maniacly depressed 40 year old man thats committed rape,
So let me serve you with the finest rhymes,
Don't choke or your only good reputation is on the line.
A chase for the win..none of her punches made it thrue
like your mothers birth scans..i can see the bitch in you
A generous kid sub is...always try's his best to be kind
and if he had a brain..he'd give me a piece of his mind
hard to find..cuase this bitch is as dumb as you like
fuck'd his own mother..just to ride his first bike
think what you like..cuase im way above you man
must tipe on the floor..cuase ive got the upper hand
see me rise...reveal me but i wont hold a grudge
knowing it was you..just made this battle easy to judge
blah at having to rcycle..but hes that wack
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suburbansinner - um..... yeah... can't say much
Verse was horrible, no punches, no personals
No witty remarks, horrible structure, blah..
Why would you call out effect, if you drop like that
Anyways... practice, maybe it'll help you out some
Effect - Even tho you recycled your shit... blah
You got this hands down, you didn't even have to drop
and i guarantee you, that you still would have won
Anyways.. your punches were old, but still hit
personals weren't there as much..
Overall.. you won.. enough said
v/Effect
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157933
Had to give it to effect......... cant vote afficialy yet but theres my vote
standout bars:
A chase for the win..none of her punches made it thrue
like your mothers birth scans..i can see the bitch in you
hard to find..cuase this bitch is as dumb as you like
fuck'd his own mother..just to ride his first bike
NICE
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i vote effect.
suburbansinner: ya verse had no structure wut so ever, completely lacked personals, and had sum pretty stupid punches. BUT keep studying the dictionary and practicing and you could come out on top.
effect: i thought your verse was tight, it had structure, decent punchlines. no personals though.... but over all it was dope
quotable:
i think effect had this battle won, easily.A chase for the win..none of her punches made it thrue
like your mothers birth scans..i can see the bitch in you
thanks man.......................................2nd..... .....
.............................3rd.................. .............
4th............................thanks............. ..................
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and last.............................................. ...fucks
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Suburban sinner- flow was not too good, vocab was basic, you didnt really have any hard punches cuz all your punches were played or didnt take too much wit...pretty waek battle verse
Effect - flow was nice, good structure, vocab was decent, punches hit pretty hard, you had a few good ones in there...the part where you said he fucked his own mother was played but i liked the birth scans line
Vote: Effect
Plz return the favor, link in sig
yo effect was ruthless man suburban killer is ass he has no weight in this game he should be in the hall of shame
Bitch I mean Business,
I'm not afraid of the Lamest,
Awful opener
You come in Effect when an MC needs a desperate win,
So in this case your just as effective as a hole in the bottom trash bin,
Rubbish
The other rhyme biters on here fill your hole with crazy chemicals,
Probably going to someone that gives rhyme rentals,
Horrible
If you had this many wins on the internet you should be making demo tapes,
I think your acually a maniacly depressed 40 year old man thats committed rape,
Awful
So let me serve you with the finest rhymes,
Don't choke or your only good reputation is on the line.
Average
chase for the win..none of her punches made it thrue
like your mothers birth scans..i can see the bitch in you
Nice opener
A generous kid sub is...always try's his best to be kind
and if he had a brain..he'd give me a piece of his mind
Ok
hard to find..cuase this bitch is as dumb as you like
fuck'd his own mother..just to ride his first bike
Awful
think what you like..cuase im way above you man
must tipe on the floor..cuase ive got the upper hand
Nice punch
see me rise...reveal me but i wont hold a grudge
knowing it was you..just made this battle easy to judge
Nice finisher
Subarn, your punches didn't hit hard enough at all. Flow was awful and some of your lines were strectched. Effect, some nice personal punches.
V/ Effect.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...68&page=2&pp=15
Vote.
3-0 KO
just like the rules stated
and next time, dont do this 3-0 stuff effect
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