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    money money money

    sell crack over money/get slapped over money
    end up with your thumbs bent back over money
    hit the block over money/get locked over money
    thieves will run up with pistols cocked over money
    fiends throb over money/ get a job over money
    i will go to new york and rob Arod over money
    get high with your money/people lie over money
    def jam even went and signed shyne over money
    people cry over money people/ people die over money
    suit up in all black and driveby over money
    stay strapped over money/ get slapped over money
    your best friends would stab you in the back over money

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    I'm Bakk!
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    EHH.....no you need to elevate alot...never rhyme the same word over and over.....look at other OM's and take notes....

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158966
    check this out and gimme some feed back

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    cant yall see he wanna rewrite white tee DUH
    bitch
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    Yo it weren't bad but u need ta elevate more..dont just rhyme with one word through ya whole post...cus niggaz dont like that on this site...i learnt that when i did sumthin like this...but keep droppin...holla back

    DaYoungsta boy!!!

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    i agree with the critics the one word thing is a lil basic but i do feel the scenario money do cause alotta problems in this world ya dig,,keep doin u stay up

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    Yea I agree with Youngsta. Niggaz get bored reading da same shee. But u good keep cha head up

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    Not to be so Mean,

    But.... I'ma Bend You Over And fuck you Over Money...HAHAHAHAHAHA

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    keep elavating...use more rhyme words 2 make the verse better..

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    Rise 2 The Top Till The Arms Of Heaven Lift Me Up And Place Me On The Highest Spot...
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    Re: money money money

    This was the gayest shit I have read in months.

    MONTHS.

    Boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

    Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooo!!!!!!!!
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