My untitled peice of sh!t poem.

[NonProphecy]

Here's my peice of shit poem which is untitled as of now. I was just messing around last night and this is what I came up with, I didn't put much thought into it. Please crit though.

Mourningful memories of you rain upon me
Aversional emotions of hatred growing strongly
Feelings that could paint a canvas pitch black
If there's one thing I could do, I'd take it all back
Back to when you didn't mean SHIT to me
One more face on the streets, just another enemy

I'm trying to push all the toughts of you out of my head
Because it's just too painful remembering everything you said
Knowing word after word was just another bullshit lie
I hope you had fun bitch now go play run-around with another guy
Fucking skank hoe, go get another STD
Now go die and burn in hell for all of eternity

[Poetris]

All I can say on that one is I wouldn't want to be on the other end of it. Damn.

~Poe

[NonProphecy]

All I can say on that one is I wouldn't want to be on the other end of it. Damn.

~Poe

It was written for a very special girl.

[Poetris]

I bet.