man life is to hard

[S.W.showluv]

man this a lil somethin i wrote

chorus: it's to hard , it's to hard, it's to hard
repeatx 3times


it's to hard to get up out this game, it's to hard to give up the pimpin fame as isit back holdin my cobra kane// i see people paging ans callin my name/ i dunno what the want but they agavatin me// talkin bout come and see// i'm flowin and shoin 03's// drivin an throwin it up in da "D''// i compete to get the gifts of a klutzs// everybody think i'm going nutz// bustin out wit a 6 point stanz and have everybody look at my manz//i pimp him all around town // see that my money do come around// leftin peeps from da ground// i pack heat at the top of my crown// showin no mercy// i don't like master p// cause his name is percy// 200% female in yo eyes// i can't never give lies// showin i understand the crops of my seeds// i do plant to blaze and feed// i succeed the rights of my hood// havein lou outs and to many plots// go kick rocks// we are on top// other groups are flops

chorus 4x's

it's to hard again fo me// tryin not to go to prision see// i get pleased in every way u peep// showinto the heart of the south// never been left in da dark// burin up in da sun// flows jus poppin off my tongue//tryin to not to sho i'm sprung// now it feels like i'm gettin pimped// dis world takin over me, can't compete in any oylimpics// parents wanna ride ya back all da time// u do somethin wrong they think it's a crime// and make u do the time// i wish i was never here in dis world the only thing i give to get out is my life to drugs// they can krupt// i peep in jus talkin to everyone i meet niggas just be fumblin over my feet// i'm bout to stop at this soon give me feed back before i leave da room




dats a lil somethin to hard i wanna have more verses i jus add some more or just change it around but give me some live feedback on dis right chea i'm go make dis shit into a song or somethin

[S.W.showluv]

have ya'll peeps be on dis site rihgt here and just look at people post i don't care if u have negative shit to say i wanna hear it if i can't spell put dat shit down if i can't write rhymes don't put dat shit down, if i'm jus plan dumb to u dats aiigh put dat shit down to i jus want ya'll to reply on my shit cause ya'll make me feel stupid when ya'll don't reply shit

[DirtBoy69]

i think that some of it could of been better but it was a alright drop keep posting and if you want more peeps for your drops reply to other people's stuff

[RhetoriX]

I think you gotta change your subject matter man, aint feeling the whole "pimping game", cos its hard to believe and if ya are doing it, iLL..... but I still dont believe ya... The flow was simplistic, lacced mulites and power, it was like a Nelly spit, ya need something with substance, something real... Wordplay was hardly there, maybe a few mentionings here and there, but I think ya need ta elevate a lot more, everyone got the potential, you jus gotta do it... Keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...

[S.W.showluv]

thanks ya'll two fo replyin to my post and i'm going to keep what ya said in consideration

[Messiah]

i don't like master p// cause his name is percy//

That was plain funny to me..!!

Verse one was the worst i thought...lyrically, it had a good flow to it mostly, but tha imagery, multi's, vocab and whole **BLAOW** was missing..

Verse Two, came with a better idealogy of multi dropping and imagery showing...much betta...

I think you can probably do bettah, get at me on AIM: KtothaD if you have any questions or anythang..

Take care...

peace n god bless

[ace]

yeah yeah........it coulda been betta

[LACK OF LOGIC]

NOT BAD JUST NEED SOME MINOR ELIVATEN

[.TyveK.]

needs some work, but if done correctly, this would be a hot topic.

[S.W.showluv]

thanks again fo replyin i got ya in mind and i might just change my shit all around i dunno yet but keep upin on dis shit i even won't yo grandma and baby moma or daddy sister cousin aunty grandma to reply to dis shit