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    K.E.M
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    hey, this uh, isnt' going to be that easy tho it's been easy to sleep........Im gonna be leaving Rapbattles after the tournies over I think........so Diamond im still gonna be checkin in for that.....so....with that said....lemme say this...to my fam memebers......

    first off......Diamond-girl you inspire me n' im still see you around at 411 and shit...always gonna be one of my idols here..keep shit real....

    Malb-Im still gonna talk to you...and we will eventually finish that collab....mwah....

    Soulstress-ah, wat to say about you,ehe.. another one of my idols....your shit keeps my mind thinking....dont ever change your style...

    perephial---how ever u spell ur new name...girl u kick ass...dont change either...always writing beautiful pieces

    darneck--ooo...using ur old name....only cuz i cant spell the other one....you are my top male idol here....inspiration to me definitly

    ahh........those are the top 5 i wanted to say special stuff to...the rest....

    assasin,monkeypoet,infinitemind,hazy,uh,wisdomenta l,all of you...the talent.......you guys are talented people...dont ever let go of that.......

    ESP...i love you guys...sorry......i fell....cant keep on with it

    here's my last piece ill be posting(other than the tournie)...

    One tear Ive ever cried
    has had some symbol when a part of me has died
    The everlasting sorrow inside only hides for so long before appearing
    These pieces of me that fall silenty while the rest of the world is snearing

    Two tears for each awakening that I thought I had already had
    A part to reach out in a way to say sorry but at the same time hold on...it makes me so sad
    Water punching the ground like it would really make a difference
    Holding each memory they ever were involved in the past tense

    Three tears for falling behind and not having the courage to say I was in trouble
    Never being the strong type to admit anything but to stay subtle
    For sending out cries that I knew would never be answered..but I still tried
    To make what is wrong only seem right when the time comes to make them hide

    Four tears fall when the day is over when I begin to see
    When the sun leaves the earth alone cuz its done enough damage to let me be
    Not certain why I must be punished when I have never wronged
    But still the drops fall out like the dont want to belong

    Five tears for all the years I was told I would be nothing
    To be able to look a child in the eye and tell them anything that wasnt true as long as it was something
    The stains on my pillow from pretending everything was alright
    for not being able to tell what was wrong and what was suppose to be right

    Six tears repersenting how many times I was beaten in and out of love
    Apologizes stacked up trying to make it seem like they were always above
    Trying to fix broken promises but getting frustrated and giving up
    When you feel like you cant protect yourself so you just let them have what they want b/c you cant act tough

    Seven tears falling after lonley years
    Never trusting one individual because you can only live in fear
    For reaching out and never getting a hand in yours
    Succeeding only in what goes on behind closed doors

    Eight tears that fall because you cant hold them in
    because there has to be more to life than letting others win
    for holding on and then letting go before you know why
    the nights that you stare out the window and wonder if someone is in the sky

    Nine tears scattered and blurring the vision you hold dear
    For closed minds and open mouths of disaproving peers
    The lost hopes that someday everything will make life worth living
    That there really is a promised outcome to giving

    Ten Tears making my face feel like I cant survive
    For the ruffled sheets in which your screamed and yelled and took me before I could realize
    tears falling back on me because of something you felt you were privilaged to
    You say they will stop coming but in reality the tears will never stop falling and painfully enough....neither will you

    one love


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    damn...well you will be missed....guess you gotta do what you gotta do....its all good...

    as for your piece...the first stanza hit me the hardest....but really..all the way through it had emotions pure and strong...i really felt how you 'symbolized' the tears...how you put them in relation to why you shed them....this was a great piece to 'go out' on...it says it all about you....capturing the pure essence of what you are trying to say.....

    ...good luck...and au revoir....


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