Undisputed Championship Match: Telekinetic (4-0) vs. Elwood (3-1)

[PostmorteM]

Rules.
^Read & Good Luck..

Check Ins Due By Wednesday Midnight Eastern
Verses Due By Friday Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday Midnight Eastern

[Elwood]

3 and to the 4.. bitch you betta breathe..

16.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...00#post1890900
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...00#post1890900

[Telekinetic]

Check... 16 it is.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158597
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158604
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158602
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=158598

[Elwood]

you rappin bout guns, bitchs bout to get his shit popped
cause the last time u held .45's u was checkin ya wrist watch,
sons fraid' to sleep, me winnin? yeah they know,
cause the last time ppl watched tele it was prolly the late show,
son my styles my own, little bitch, you a straight loser,
make tele's stomach get squeezed, n this aint no heimlich manoever,
my name is known, you more played than the style you usin,
you ask for a nod of agreement?...
....you'll get more no's than pinochios family re-union,
throw ya finger up son? ill leave ya with fickle hands ya no,
the way i sculpture body... and i aint no michel angelo,
you wanna be el, thikin you orta be vet?
cause T's chasing his dreams.. he just hasnt caught me yet,
and my punches hold their own dealin plenty of hits
while ya text's like pussy music...we ain't feeling Enya your shit.

match that

[Telekinetic]

First off get used to losing kid…and there will be many
Cause no matter what battle ya in…an Elwood be shitty
Your record aint shit kid… just no shows and no skills
Cause like blind assassins… you just never see the kill
So watch me hit the king… the Elvis of the played lines
And we see a bitch blow up… from the way I land mine
Fuck your fake personals I’ll push ya face back sucker
So it’s time to draw the line... an cut that motha fucker
Tis the season bitch… I’m Chris Cringle in this place
Cause I’ll sleigh ya verse... and Santa Clause your face
Kid your weak… ya not ready for a heavy weight bout
Ya had the eye of the tiger… but Feeble poked it out
Now it’s over for you kid… your losing the arms race
So no need to face war, I brought the war to your face

[Brother Blue Collar]

tele first punch bad wording(first line), second blind kill okay not what i expect from you tho,okay wordplay kinda played tho, cut that fucker line naw ain't happening, best punch of ya with the clause shit, naw this was the best punch of ya verse, closer naw not happening

Elwood
decent opener, btw it's bitch not bitches, second punch was dope,force wordplay naw,third was okay,

shit fuck i don't feel like typing anymore

normally i prolly would have just posted i vote elwood but since it's a weight battle i though i should explain but fuck it

tele you lost

elwood won more quotables

[Swift Death]

Elwood

you rappin bout guns, bitchs bout to get his shit popped
cause the last time u held .45's u was checkin ya wrist watch,
nice hahaha...
sons fraid' to sleep, me winnin? yeah they know,
cause the last time ppl watched tele it was prolly the late show,
nice personal heh
son my styles my own, little bitch, you a straight loser,
make tele's stomach get squeezed, n this aint no heimlich manoever,
heh not bad
my name is known, you more played than the style you usin,
you ask for a nod of agreement?...
....you'll get more no's than pinochios family re-union,
not bad not bad nice word choice
throw ya finger up son? ill leave ya with fickle hands ya no,
the way i sculpture body... and i aint no michel angelo,
nice wordplay... witty
you wanna be el, thikin you orta be vet?
cause T's chasing his dreams.. he just hasnt caught me yet,
nice nice feeling it
and my punches hold their own dealin plenty of hits
while ya text's like pussy music...we ain't feeling Enya your shit.
hahahaha nice closer

Telekenetic

First off get used to losing kid…and there will be many
Cause no matter what battle ya in…an Elwood be shitty
nice wordplay.... good opener
Your record aint shit kid… just no shows and no skills
Cause like blind assassins… you just never see the kill
mmmm ok..
So watch me hit the king… the Elvis of the played lines
And we see a bitch blow up… from the way I land mine
nice nice...
Fuck your fake personals I’ll push ya face back sucker
So it’s time to draw the line... an cut that motha fucker
hmmmm ok not bad
Tis the season bitch… I’m Chris Cringle in this place
Cause I’ll sleigh ya verse... and Santa Clause your face
nice wordplay...
Kid your weak… ya not ready for a heavy weight bout
Ya had the eye of the tiger… but Feeble poked it out
hahahaha... yea
Now it’s over for you kid… your losing the arms race
So no need to face war, I brought the war to your face
ehhhhh not bad

Ele had a few more quotables.... little more witty... really close battle... i liked the eye of the tiger line from Tele and el woould be shitty but the enya line and the tele line where dope.... and nice structure Tele...

vote - Elwood

[Logic Speaks]

I was ready to tell Lyric to STFU
But really wow.

First off get used to losing kid…and there will be many
Cause no matter what battle ya in…an Elwood be shitty
So watch me hit the king… the Elvis of the played lines
And we see a bitch blow up… from the way I land mine
Tis the season bitch… I’m Chris Cringle in this place
Cause I’ll sleigh ya verse... and Santa Clause your face

vs.

Nothing.

Elwood was out of him game or something? Nothing really did well or connected hard at all, dropped like this in KLL too, think it's just a bad week. It was all either played or forced as fuck man.
Tele I like your verse much better this week. Good wordplay and punches, some lines were quite ehhhhhhhh but goos shit nonetheless.

V/Tele

[Elwood]

2-1..

upp.

[Telekinetic]

Only 3 votes in the damn champ match?
That's just wrong :/

[Mr. Key]

you rappin bout guns, bitchs bout to get his shit popped
cause the last time u held .45's u was checkin ya wrist watch,
iiight opener
sons fraid' to sleep, me winnin? yeah they know,
cause the last time ppl watched tele it was prolly the late show,
-ok nameplay, not that hard htting
son my styles my own, little bitch, you a straight loser,
make tele's stomach get squeezed, n this aint no heimlich manoever,
naw
my name is known, you more played than the style you usin,
you ask for a nod of agreement?...
....you'll get more no's than pinochios family re-union,
-ha, iiight
throw ya finger up son? ill leave ya with fickle hands ya no,
the way i sculpture body... and i aint no michel angelo,
not feelin it
you wanna be el, thikin you orta be vet?
cause T's chasing his dreams.. he just hasnt caught me yet,
-ok, but im not a fan of self-glorification in battles
and my punches hold their own dealin plenty of hits
while ya text's like pussy music...we ain't feeling Enya your shit.
decent closer

First off get used to losing kid…and there will be many
Cause no matter what battle ya in…an Elwood be shitty
-nice name/wordplay, nice opener
Your record aint shit kid… just no shows and no skills
Cause like blind assassins… you just never see the kill
-decent
So watch me hit the king… the Elvis of the played lines
And we see a bitch blow up… from the way I land mine
-i like the setup, nice wordplay
Fuck your fake personals I’ll push ya face back sucker
So it’s time to draw the line... an cut that motha fucker
-decent
Tis the season bitch… I’m Chris Cringle in this place
Cause I’ll sleigh ya verse... and Santa Clause your face
-nice
Kid your weak… ya not ready for a heavy weight bout
Ya had the eye of the tiger… but Feeble poked it out
-not really feelin this
Now it’s over for you kid… your losing the arms race
So no need to face war, I brought the war to your face
-not bad

Over all Tele had 3 bars i thought were nice and the rest were decent or ok, except one, Elwood bars were only ok or decent to me,nothing really that great, so vote Tele for and overall better verse with better punches and wordplay 1
Return the fava ----never thought id have to say that in a league

[Revel]

good match-up...

Elwood:
you rappin bout guns, bitchs bout to get his shit popped
cause the last time u held .45's u was checkin ya wrist watch,
hmm...aight...
sons fraid' to sleep, me winnin? yeah they know,
cause the last time ppl watched tele it was prolly the late show,
meh...
son my styles my own, little bitch, you a straight loser,
make tele's stomach get squeezed, n this aint no heimlich manoever,
meh...
my name is known, you more played than the style you usin,
you ask for a nod of agreement?...
....you'll get more no's than pinochios family re-union,
...okay
throw ya finger up son? ill leave ya with fickle hands ya no,
the way i sculpture body... and i aint no michel angelo,
ehh...okay...
you wanna be el, thikin you orta be vet?
cause T's chasing his dreams.. he just hasnt caught me yet,
good...
and my punches hold their own dealin plenty of hits
while ya text's like pussy music...we ain't feeling Enya your shit.
i see where you're goin...but i think it's pronounced "on-ya"


Tele:
First off get used to losing kid…and there will be many
Cause no matter what battle ya in…an Elwood be shitty
good...
Your record aint shit kid… just no shows and no skills
Cause like blind assassins… you just never see the kill
...okay...
So watch me hit the king… the Elvis of the played lines
And we see a bitch blow up… from the way I land mine
okay...
Fuck your fake personals I’ll push ya face back sucker
So it’s time to draw the line... an cut that motha fucker
...meh...
Tis the season bitch… I’m Chris Cringle in this place
Cause I’ll sleigh ya verse... and Santa Clause your face
okay...
Kid your weak… ya not ready for a heavy weight bout
Ya had the eye of the tiger… but Feeble poked it out
good...
Now it’s over for you kid… your losing the arms race
So no need to face war, I brought the war to your face
ehh....okay...

i actually thought both emcees were on the same level here...but i think Tele got this cuz he came more consistent with harder-hittin punches...good battle

V/ Tele

[Telekinetic]

3 to 2

[SmokaJoka]

Telekinetic wins, closed.

Telekinetic (5-0)
Elwood (3-2)