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  1. #1
    Boy Nova
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    Speakin my mind, check it...

    yo, im gonna hit ya with a lil lyrical shit
    No doubt with my flow i can make it a hit,
    I spit all day and dream all night
    One day ima over come this racial fight,
    In the industry eminem is makin his name
    But on the street white boys cant be in the game,
    They call me elvis and call me vinilla ice
    Fuckin shit man i cant be dealin with the strife,
    When the lights go out the rappers come out, its night
    Battlin becomes the game, time to fight,
    Each word ya gotta get right
    Cause if ya dont ya rep gonna be blown outta sight,
    I aint lost on street but my name stays the same
    Hey white boy i cant remember ya name,
    I dont just wanna gain fame i wanna be respected
    I wanna slide into the game i aint gonna be rejected,
    I said this way back at start
    My verse's were lookin like a work of art,
    I use to sit down and write shit for hours
    Pen in hand lettin rip creating lyrical showers,
    Now i can just walk around the streets takin information
    every lil thing gives off a lil inspiration,
    I dont write my shit no more, some say thats my floor
    But i think its my ticket out the hood and through the door,
    Its gonna take time i know that yo
    But the hood gettin bad gotta move on man i gotta go,
    One day i know ill get respect
    I understand i havnt done what i said just yet,
    If they dont wanna give it to me then ima take it
    Im fed up with them man they shit just basic,
    I got talent deep down and alot of heart
    I cant wait to show off my lyrical spark,
    Im ready to explode bitch like dynamite
    Light the end of the rope bitch and say goodnight.
    Holla.



    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157936

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157954

  2. #2
    Fel#ny
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    boy you did it again anuva to ppiece... loved the drop... flow was happenin, rhymes were tight, vocab was great, and the content was good... keep reppin boy
    PEACE

  3. #3
    Princess
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    yer word nice drop but are you guys tha same person /\/\ u got thu same ip

  4. #4
    Boy Nova
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    how can we be the same person we both online??? we both live in portsmouth and are m8s but we dnt know y we hav the same ip. ask the bloke who owns RB i aint got a clue.
    Peace

  5. #5
    Boy Nova
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    yo give me ya feedback on this, Holla at ya boy

  6. #6
    Boy Nova
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    uppin for feedback again............................

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    great idea well spoke and im sure much is fact but the reality is most underground names that sell are white: copywrite,aesop rock,esoteric,chamellionaire, el-p,sole, apathy just name a few
    now on lyrics like i said it was a good read but your still very simple and i think a lil creative concept would help more.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

  8. #8
    Boy Nova
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    feedback please, uppin.............................

  9. #9
    B(V)U$3
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    :: I like your emotion on this one. Lyrics were cool. Nothing really stood out though. Flow was nice. . I felt like you meant what you were saying. Nothing I could complain about.

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    aiight... you had some feeling in this drop...ya flow was decent but ya need to work on the voce...try using some multies to make a more complex ryme scheme, the scheme you used was a bit simple.

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