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Ambassador
Assazin
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OKKAAYYYY
I'm the God-Emcee, i sent the Assazin
i planted the God damn seed, meta's i'm still plantin
You like a rapid wolverine that got sent to the vet
i Injected you with tranquilizers, got 1 tenth of you wet
This is your first time up against me, Let!!!!!
like in tennis, your personals were as soft as atlantis morsette!!!
i'm the sharp shooter, your my target practice
left u Wet up like christians being baptized using different dippin tactics
i'm baptis, i have more punchlines than countries on the atlas
you love to stay in the hideouts with sniper rifles
but i kill more emcees just with a flip of my bible
you can never be my rival, Cause you washed up i'm fresh like the essence of lysol
I store more energy then ya city's local capacitor
beatin me is unmanageable like going pee...........
..................when you been laced wit a catheter
I assazinate,bush,bin lauden,plus you,ya city's local *Ambassador*
my punches form in straight lines crackin ya face 3 inches in diameter
you step up to a challenge..good shit..is my form of flattery
I*bitch slapped*you in you's a*gangsta*where's the assault and battery
you probly real friendly so this battle end's up a friendzy
yo bitch said "she's the emcee" and you said "I *AM* the femcee
your like a *Kirk Hinrich* goin up against a*Yao Me*just pretending
but then you get bashed on so it's useless to come against me
peace be still.
uppin #1
mmkay here goes plz return tha favour
amb
I'm the God-Emcee, i sent the Assazin
i planted the God damn seed, meta's i'm still plantin
You like a rapid wolverine that got sent to the vet
i Injected you with tranquilizers, got 1 tenth of you wet
This is your first time up against me, Let!!!!!
like in tennis, your personals were as soft as atlantis morsette!!!
i'm the sharp shooter, your my target practice
left u Wet up like christians being baptized using different dippin tactics
i'm baptis, i have more punchlines than countries on the atlas
you love to stay in the hideouts with sniper rifles
but i kill more emcees just with a flip of my bible
you can never be my rival, Cause you washed up i'm fresh like the essence
not bad tho i cudnt follow the flow tho structure was ight punches wernt as hard as they cud be though
asazzin
I store more energy then ya city's local capacitor
beatin me is unmanageable like going pee...........
..................when you been laced wit a catheter
I assazinate,bush,bin lauden,plus you,ya city's local *Ambassador*
my punches form in straight lines crackin ya face 3 inches in diameter
you step up to a challenge..good shit..is my form of flattery
I*bitch slapped*you in you's a*gangsta*where's the assault and battery
you probly real friendly so this battle end's up a friendzy
yo bitch said "she's the emcee" and you said "I *AM* the femcee
your like a *Kirk Hinrich* goin up against a*Yao Me*just pretending
but then you get bashed on so it's useless to come against me
ye i was feelin this good structure nice flow hard punches lol good name play ect
no hate but i think asazzin took this 1 overall he had betta punches n strucutre ect he was betta overall
Ambassador, u had very little punches that hit very weakly. U mostly glorified urself and that ain't gonna win u a battle.U had pretty good structure tho and u need ta up ur creativity and vocab. U should also work on ya flow, it seems like some of the lines uwere spittin were kinda forced.
Assazin, u had some good punches but not throughout. The ending to me was kinda weak and i think u coulda done better. Nice use of wordplay and creativity wit the vocab mixed in ur verse was good.
my vote= assazin, for bein the better puncher and havin a bette verse.
Peaceezy.
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uppin #2 let's keep'em comin
zeeeeeeen, good battle still... respecOriginally Posted by Assazin
Amb:
I'm the God-Emcee, i sent the Assazin
i planted the God damn seed, meta's i'm still plantin
no punch
You like a rapid wolverine that got sent to the vet
i Injected you with tranquilizers, got 1 tenth of you wet
...nah
This is your first time up against me, Let!!!!!
like in tennis, your personals were as soft as atlantis morsette!!!
WTF @ "Let"....meh bar
i'm the sharp shooter, your my target practice
left u Wet up like christians being baptized using different dippin tactics
i'm baptis, i have more punchlines than countries on the atlas
weird wording on the second line, but okay punch...third line was filler & self glorification
you love to stay in the hideouts with sniper rifles
but i kill more emcees just with a flip of my bible
.....
you can never be my rival, Cause you washed up i'm fresh like the essence of lysol
eh...nah...
Assazin:
I store more energy then ya city's local capacitor
beatin me is unmanageable like going pee...........
..................when you been laced wit a catheter
lol, okay...
I assazinate,bush,bin lauden,plus you,ya city's local *Ambassador*
my punches form in straight lines crackin ya face 3 inches in diameter
meh...no actual punch
you step up to a challenge..good shit..is my form of flattery
I*bitch slapped*you in you's a*gangsta*where's the assault and battery
eh...
you probly real friendly so this battle end's up a friendzy
yo bitch said "she's the emcee" and you said "I *AM* the femcee
eh...
your like a *Kirk Hinrich* goin up against a*Yao Me*just pretending
but then you get bashed on so it's useless to come against me
eh...
Not a very good battle IMO....both came about the same...and both had decent structure, tho Assazin's was a lil better...i didnt see personals from either....and punches were a lil lacking here...but Ambassador had way too many basic/filler lines to compete with Assazin...i felt that Assazin had lines that were a lil more direct...
V/ Assazin, for havin a better overall verse...
uppin #3 thanx for the vote peace be still
uppin #4 zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............
well... ammbasador... didint think your sturcture was good which really threw your verse off and your punches didint land quite as hard as assazin... Assazin i liked your verse... i thought you had some nice lines in there..
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I store more energy then ya city's local capacitor
beatin me is unmanageable like going pee...........
..................when you been laced wit a catheter
and no metinoable punches from ambassador...
so vote - Assazin...
return the favour links in my sig.
nice closer but didnt like tha lysol line
overall 4 outta 10
keep at it homie
vote assazin
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