torch VS rapchar

[rapchar]

10-16 lines...
not crew votes...
no d/k ridin votes...
4 hrs till chek in...
rap due 2hrs after chek in...

good luck.

[..:Torch:..]

Kid Your A Rap Character I Dont Know Why I'm Battling You...
Get My Rope Around Your Neck...Till I See Your Face Turn Blue...
It's Sad Your Style Is Played More Then Play Station Two....
I'll Fly By And Merk You Quicker Then It's Said~To~Take......
Torch Will Burn You Rob You Now You Got No Bread~To~Bake
Give Me Your Head~To~Break And I Wont Hes~I~Tate(Hesitate)
To Leave Your Skill A Waist...Run Up And Erase Your Face..
And Leave You Stepped On Like A Un-Tide Shoes Lace.....
You "AssHole" Lines Is "Shit" So I'll Hand You Toilet Paper..
You Couldn't Elivate If You Climbed On Top A Sky Scraper
A Red Beam On You Most Likely Pointed At Your Head...
With A KeyBoard I'll Quickly Leave You Dead...Nuff Said...

[rapchar]

sorry its late man, i fukin fell asleep LOL
iwas up 4 thirty hours partyin.

hey ya'll look at this homo here, his got three nipples/
two on his chest, one in his pants caus his dicks crippled/
I was gunna fuk ya mum backwards, and watch her ass shake/
But from miles away when that bitch moves, i watch my glass break
we should lock u in a cell, and throw away the key/
or light u up in hell, and put you out wit pee/
a dollars wats ur rhymes worth, nuthin more nuthin less/
he's a bitch only wearin pants caus he cant afford a fukin dress/
remember when u battle me, you'll get played like a toy/
u aint a muh'fukin virgin, this kid got laid by a boy/
when i get killed or die, ima leave a note in my will letter/
to tell torch im down six feet, and makin rhymes that drill better/
Just like the bloodz and cripz, at the moment we are rival/
when im finished u'll wanna suk my dick caus ill be ur idol/
i could beat u on ecstasy, while ya bitch sits next-2-me/
then like always we'll fuk hard till she needs a hysterectomy/

[rapchar]

we need votes ppl...

uppin............................................. ..

[Swift Death]

uhhhh vote torche.... came harder in my opoinion... had harder hitting punches... better stucture... not a much better verse but enough to pull him through on top.

fav bar:
--Torch Will Burn You Rob You Now You Got No Bread~To~Bake--
--Give Me Your Head~To~Break And I Wont Hes~I~Tate--

nothing really great...

vote - Torch

[rapchar]

Are u fukin dumb or sumthin???

my rap was structured well and isnt it bout punches that rip off the opponent,
not sumthin bout climbin a fukin buildin...u just angry caus i beat you.

[Swift Death]

stfu you never beat me.... it never closed it was 2-2.... and i dont give a fuck cause i could tear you a new asshole now...

[Swift Death]

oh and your stucture is fucking terrible none of the lines are lined up...

[rapchar]

fuk u or ill rip out ur eyes and skull fuk u LOL jks

just becuase my lines arent lined up it dont meant they arent flowin...
anyway im over this lyrical battlin, u can write a sik rap and no one feels it cause it only in words...thats y u prolly cant feel mine...fukin stupid fukwit...

u should start makin ur own songs and compsin em properly if ur soo good.

[..:Torch:..]

Aiight That's A Decent Vote Thans For That Honest Vote Coz

[Swift Death]

getting a mic for x mas.... and np torch.... i always vote honest....

[rapchar]

hey torch, he a dickridin fukwit...ur verse is prolly better but he votin against me caus i beat him...

[..:Torch:..]

Yo Twixin That True????....Coz If That's True Let Me Know Right Now

[Swift Death]

omg this is like a fucking marrige.... no he never beat me... it was 2 - 2 and got slept on.... want the link??

[..:Torch:..]

Naw Fam I Believe You...It's Cool...............