SpAz vs Spit

[SpAzMaTiK]

ayo gl bro

no=
recycling
biting
feeding
crew votes
hate votes

5-15 lines

30 mins after check-in

[SpAzMaTiK]

c....ch....che....chec....check....i....in......gl bro

[Spit No Evil]

Alright, I'm checking in. Are you gonna to drop first?

[SpAzMaTiK]

im dropin right now............................................... ........

[Spit No Evil]

Okay, that's cool. So, I'll drop 30 minutes after you do.

[SpAzMaTiK]

aight ayo check it,

[1]// My flows -fire- like an auto-MaTiK- -tire- your body and fill your hair with -statik- \\

[2]// Im smoking your fake mc ass with no -tactik-, member that AK? well you better pack-it \\

[3]// Because your gonna need to bring some -heat- cause i spit nothing but tricks and -treats- \\

[4]// I straight greet you with this -nine- and take this battle just with that last -line- \\

[5]// You gettin merked worse then that rival school in "drum-line-", stabbin u with my rymes worser then fallin on a porke-pine- \\

[6]// You do spit evil cause them rymes is -harsh- stop were your at and cover ur mouth like you got -sars- \\

[7]// So your from californ-i-a as you -say-, i heard the only thing that comes from there is fags and -gay-s\\

[8]// I kinda figured u liked playin with -ballz-, cause whine and cry alot kinda like "biggy -smallz-"\\ (no offence r.i.p biggy)

[9]// I take it you admire -2pac-, ill make u die worse then him, put u in a cage with 3 fags and a -pollock- \\ (no offence either pac much love r.i.p)

[10]// So ima finish you off and break you like a kids -toy-, talkin bout pac n biggy well guess what i am the "Bad -Boy-"\\


Explination: the burns his profile, line 10 was about p-diddy and biggy in the making of there group "bad boyz"

[Spit No Evil]

Your flows fire like an automatic, that's why your gun's stuck?
You'll be short of your lyrical rent when the month's up, you dumb fuck
I'm packin' some heat, it's called the fire I spit
You wanna be emcee, I'mma retire this bitch
I'm higher than this, I'm battlin' this guy for kicks
Halloween's over, you still spittin' treats and tricks?
You're the fuckin' keymaster, but you're lackin' the lock
How you shootin' bullets when you ain't packin' a glock?
You ain't attackin' it hard, you're hip-hop illiterate
Your mind is gibberish, you ain't fire, you spittin' simmered shit
Uninspired, had the line but you couldn't deliver it
But I'll leave you with a message, since you're new and I'm compassionate
I'll kick your silly ass in battle rap like you don't matter bitch

[SpAzMaTiK]

good shit but i clearly said no feeding or biting and u broke both

[Spit No Evil]

Feeding, biting? I'm new here, what the hell is that?

[SpAzMaTiK]

u should have read the rules but ill give u quick definitions

Feeding: were u take other rappers lines and use them to ryme against them

for example u said:

Your flows fire like an automatic, that's why your gun's stuck?

Halloween's over, you still spittin' treats and tricks?

there u were feeding.....so...

[Spit No Evil]

That's what you're supposed to do in a rap battle.. use what your opponent says for ammunition. But, okay, whatever.

[maj1c]

good shit but i clearly said no feeding or biting and u broke both

u broke ur own rules....

u used kanyes rymes...HARSH n SARS...its obvious u did it...even if ya changed ur wording to make it seem less obvious...but ur caught out....just thought id giv ya sum feedback

QUOTE: NO FEEDING, NO RECYCLING, NO BITING
anyways...

SPAZ

sum of ur rymes were actually quite hard hittin, if ya didnt break tha rules u wudda won this clearly, u need sum work on ur format...u dnt need the numbering, fav line:

[4]// I straight greet you with this -nine- and take this battle just with that last -line- \\

the rest of ur lines were all played...sum i just read recently...which is why i think u broke ALL the rules

SPIT no EVIL

ur rymes were really good too, u started off strong but got weaker near the end...if only u didnt break the feeding rules...but ur a noob...u gotta learn sumwhere...fav line:

You ain't attackin' it hard, you're hip-hop illiterate
Your mind is gibberish, you ain't fire, you spittin' simmered shit

unofficial vote = SPit no evil

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ps: spaz...im not hatin on u, im just speakin wat i see...cos i think others mite also see it this way...peace

[Spit No Evil]

Thanks for the feedback, MaJ1c. It's appreciated. So, this battle is a draw right, since we both violated the rules? Unofficial votes and feedback still welcomed though.

[SpAzMaTiK]

i agree spit ya i kinda did bite of kanye aight then we both broke rules so its a draw but comments still welcomed gj spit thnx for the feedback also

[Spit No Evil]

Well, can someone close this so it doesn't keep an open battle for me?