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All Usual Rules
Verses due within 2 hours of check in...
checkin in...........................good luck............................
my bad i started a battle thread too, we'll use yours.
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Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
I gotta go real soon so I wont see any results til like tomorrow but good luck man..
* link will clarify lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157133
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After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
............................................is the only time u droppin reel
Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
...dont vote if u dont get it...
Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
-Iiight opener
My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
-meh, not feelin it
You're cahin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
-lol, nice
Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
-decent attempt at a personal
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
-ha, ok
2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
-i like the finisher
After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
-not really feelin it
i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
............................................is the only time u droppin reel
-lol, nice
Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
-nice wordplay, me like me likes....
all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
-good
I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
-Nice fukkin finisher, great wordplay
Vote Revel, both verses were pretty good, but revels wordplay and punches>DM's in this one, Rev had harder hittin punches, and better wordplay, and that what it came down to since both of u had, good structure and flow, good battle u too
Return the fava... *Trys to hurry and get in a battle*
Artificial Intelligence
uppin #1.....i'll return the favor with an honest vote.....
i see a fuckload of u cats sittin in FL right now...vote now...
n if u leave a link, i'll return the favor with an honest vote, simple as that
Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
--- alright opening
My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
---nah
You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
---ehh ok
Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
----- nah
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
----lol, decent
2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
----nah
After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
--- lame attempt at being witty
i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
............................................is the only time u droppin reel
---- if it was worded better it would've been good
Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
----no
all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
--- decent
I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
--- ehh, no
Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
vs
all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
So Devaztate gets this 2 punches to 1
V/ Devaztate
DEVASTATE
Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
(ok)
My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
(hmmm)
You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
(ok)
Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
(lol i was the 1 dat got chosen ova.. but yeh good punch)
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
(good shit)
2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
(nah)
u had some tight punches there.. fukn ripped shit wit the safe sex line.. gonna be hard ta beat....
REV
After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
(ok)
i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
............................................is the only time u droppin reel
(not bad)
Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
(no)
all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
(nah)
I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
(so-so)
another good verse but devastate got it for harda punches n metas..
plz return the favor here..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157134
i enjoyed readin this battle...unfortunately, the most i can giv is feedback, nut i'll soon be able to vote, just a few more posts...
devaztate mindz
Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
GOOD OPENER, NICE WORDPLAY
My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
NICE SIMILE, FUNNY WORDPLAY, NICE BAR
You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
I LIKE THE SHORT MULTI IN THE FIRST LINE, I WANNA GET THE SECOND LINE BUT I DUNNO HU RIGOR MORTIS IS
Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
TOO SIMPLE
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
NICE BAR
hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
FIRST LINE FILLER, I LIKE THE META ON UR 2ND LINE THOU
revel
Some KNEW me as 3rd-eye
#~Words Of Wisdom~#
i enjoyed readin this battle...unfortunately, the most i can giv is feedback, nut i'll soon be able to vote, just a few more posts...
devaztate mindz
Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
GOOD OPENER, NICE WORDPLAY
My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
NICE SIMILE, FUNNY WORDPLAY, NICE BAR
You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
I LIKE THE SHORT MULTI IN THE FIRST LINE, I WANNA GET THE SECOND LINE BUT I DUNNO HU RIGOR MORTIS IS
Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
TOO SIMPLE
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
NICE BAR
hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
FIRST LINE FILLER, I LIKE THE META ON UR 2ND LINE THOU
revel
After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
FIRST LINE DIDNT CONNECT 2 MUCH WITH SECOND LINE, STIL A GOOD OPENER THOU
i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
............................................is the only time u droppin reel
LOL, NICE BAR ALTOGETHER, LOL
Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
OK BAR, NICE PERSONAL
all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
VERY NICE, I GEDDIT...VERY NICE, DECENT BAR
I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
PRETTY WEAK OPENER CONSIDERING THE REST OF UR VERSE
VOTE=DEVAZTATE MINDZ, *UNOFFICIAL BUT IF ITS STIL UP WEN I GET 100 POSTS I'LL PUT MY VOTE IN
I THOUGHT HE WAS MORE CONSISTENT AND HE CAME WITH HARD PUNCHES, REVEL HAD STRONGER PUNCHES AT TIME BUT HE DIDNT KEEP IT UP, HE BECAME A BIT WEAK NEAR THE END
RETURN THA FAVA BY CHECKIN OUT MY BATTLES...ILL REMEMBA THOSE WHO TAKE THEIR TIME!!!
CHECK THA SIGG!
Some KNEW me as 3rd-eye
#~Words Of Wisdom~#
After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
OKAY OPENER, NICE TRY WIT THE WORDPLAY
i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
............................................is the only time u droppin reel
nICE EVENTHOUGH IT WAS STRECHED A BIT
Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
thIS WAS A REAL GOOD ONE NICE WORDPLAY
all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
OKAY BUT NOT THE BEST LINE
I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
TOOK A WHILE TA GET BUT OKAY CLOSER
Basically u had good rhymed wit one streched bar and u had, pretty good structure. U also got the pucnhes in and had good wordplay, although u didn't have knockout pucnhes the verse was pretty good.
Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
NICE OPNER
My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
VERY NICE, VERY NICE
You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
THIS WAS A GOOD ONE
Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
OK....GOOD PUNCH I GUESS, WASN'T REALLY FEELIN IT
I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
NOT REALLY FEELIN THIS ONE EITHER BUT GOOD ANYWAYZ
2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
UR BEST LINES IN MY OPINION GREAT CLOSER
U had the punches, tghe wordplay, the creativity and some good vocab, a couple multis and good structure.what more is there ta say but put a few more personals in and keep doin ya thing.
Overall nice battle, my vote=DeVaZtatE MinDz for a better verse and better punches.
hit up tha links in my sig. Peaceezy.
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my 1st time upping...
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uppin #3.......