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    5 83.33%
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Thread: DeVaZtAtE MinDz vs. Revel

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    DeVaZtAtE MinDz vs. Revel

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    Verses due within 2 hours of check in...

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    checkin in...........................good luck............................

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    my bad i started a battle thread too, we'll use yours.

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    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
    My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
    Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
    You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
    You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
    Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
    You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
    2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
    If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"



    I gotta go real soon so I wont see any results til like tomorrow but good luck man..


    * link will clarify lol
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157133

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    After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
    cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
    i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
    workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
    ............................................is the only time u droppin reel
    Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
    but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
    all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
    i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
    I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
    school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u


    ...dont vote if u dont get it...

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    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
    -Iiight opener
    My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
    Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
    -meh, not feelin it
    You're cahin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
    You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
    -lol, nice
    Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
    You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
    -decent attempt at a personal
    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
    -ha, ok
    2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
    If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
    -i like the finisher

    After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
    cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
    -not really feelin it
    i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
    workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
    ............................................is the only time u droppin reel
    -lol, nice
    Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
    but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
    -nice wordplay, me like me likes....
    all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
    i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
    -good
    I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
    school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
    -Nice fukkin finisher, great wordplay

    Vote Revel, both verses were pretty good, but revels wordplay and punches>DM's in this one, Rev had harder hittin punches, and better wordplay, and that what it came down to since both of u had, good structure and flow, good battle u too

    Return the fava... *Trys to hurry and get in a battle*
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    uppin #1.....i'll return the favor with an honest vote.....

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    i see a fuckload of u cats sittin in FL right now...vote now...

    n if u leave a link, i'll return the favor with an honest vote, simple as that

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    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
    --- alright opening
    My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
    Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
    ---nah
    You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
    You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
    ---ehh ok
    Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
    You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
    ----- nah
    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
    ----lol, decent
    2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
    If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
    ----nah


    After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
    cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
    --- lame attempt at being witty
    i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
    workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
    ............................................is the only time u droppin reel
    ---- if it was worded better it would've been good
    Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
    but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
    ----no
    all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
    i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
    --- decent
    I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
    school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
    --- ehh, no

    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex

    vs

    all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
    i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life


    So Devaztate gets this 2 punches to 1

    V/ Devaztate

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    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
    (ok)

    My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
    Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
    (hmmm)

    You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
    You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
    (ok)

    Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
    You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
    (lol i was the 1 dat got chosen ova.. but yeh good punch)

    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
    (good shit)

    2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
    If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
    (nah)

    u had some tight punches there.. fukn ripped shit wit the safe sex line.. gonna be hard ta beat....

    REV
    After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
    cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
    (ok)

    i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
    workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
    ............................................is the only time u droppin reel
    (not bad)

    Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
    but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
    (no)

    all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
    i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
    (nah)

    I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
    school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
    (so-so)

    another good verse but devastate got it for harda punches n metas..
    plz return the favor here..
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157134

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    i enjoyed readin this battle...unfortunately, the most i can giv is feedback, nut i'll soon be able to vote, just a few more posts...

    devaztate mindz

    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid

    GOOD OPENER, NICE WORDPLAY
    My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
    Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus

    NICE SIMILE, FUNNY WORDPLAY, NICE BAR
    You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
    You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in

    I LIKE THE SHORT MULTI IN THE FIRST LINE, I WANNA GET THE SECOND LINE BUT I DUNNO HU RIGOR MORTIS IS
    Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
    You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead

    TOO SIMPLE
    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex

    NICE BAR
    hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
    If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"

    FIRST LINE FILLER, I LIKE THE META ON UR 2ND LINE THOU


    revel
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    i enjoyed readin this battle...unfortunately, the most i can giv is feedback, nut i'll soon be able to vote, just a few more posts...

    devaztate mindz

    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid

    GOOD OPENER, NICE WORDPLAY
    My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
    Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus

    NICE SIMILE, FUNNY WORDPLAY, NICE BAR
    You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
    You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in

    I LIKE THE SHORT MULTI IN THE FIRST LINE, I WANNA GET THE SECOND LINE BUT I DUNNO HU RIGOR MORTIS IS
    Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
    You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead

    TOO SIMPLE
    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex

    NICE BAR
    hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
    If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"

    FIRST LINE FILLER, I LIKE THE META ON UR 2ND LINE THOU


    revel

    After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
    cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome

    FIRST LINE DIDNT CONNECT 2 MUCH WITH SECOND LINE, STIL A GOOD OPENER THOU
    i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
    workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
    ............................................is the only time u droppin reel

    LOL, NICE BAR ALTOGETHER, LOL
    Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
    but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt

    OK BAR, NICE PERSONAL
    all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
    i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life

    VERY NICE, I GEDDIT...VERY NICE, DECENT BAR
    I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
    school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u

    PRETTY WEAK OPENER CONSIDERING THE REST OF UR VERSE

    VOTE=DEVAZTATE MINDZ, *UNOFFICIAL BUT IF ITS STIL UP WEN I GET 100 POSTS I'LL PUT MY VOTE IN
    I THOUGHT HE WAS MORE CONSISTENT AND HE CAME WITH HARD PUNCHES, REVEL HAD STRONGER PUNCHES AT TIME BUT HE DIDNT KEEP IT UP, HE BECAME A BIT WEAK NEAR THE END

    RETURN THA FAVA BY CHECKIN OUT MY BATTLES...ILL REMEMBA THOSE WHO TAKE THEIR TIME!!!
    CHECK THA SIGG!
    Some KNEW me as 3rd-eye


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    After this, u'll acknowledge the fact that i'm your father, son
    cuz my skill level's known to bothersome, while you're just bothersome
    OKAY OPENER, NICE TRY WIT THE WORDPLAY
    i've never seen a more aimless pussy than u, ya sig's lost appeal
    workin behind the scenes at the movie theater,
    ............................................is the only time u droppin reel
    nICE EVENTHOUGH IT WAS STRECHED A BIT
    Dev's in the Pee Pee Circle of Life, known to git a bro ta' help
    but we talkin Pee Pee here...so he's a so-low artist below the belt
    thIS WAS A REAL GOOD ONE NICE WORDPLAY
    all ya lies about ya past winnings could get ya head up in a vice
    i say your full of shit...in other words, you're fed up with ya life
    OKAY BUT NOT THE BEST LINE
    I'll leave you widda Devaztated Mind, let my words fool u
    school u--pause in silence--then let da tension after-school u
    TOOK A WHILE TA GET BUT OKAY CLOSER

    Basically u had good rhymed wit one streched bar and u had, pretty good structure. U also got the pucnhes in and had good wordplay, although u didn't have knockout pucnhes the verse was pretty good.



    Rapz not destined to be ya career... more like a bad habit
    And Revel can't stomach me.. somone pass him the Antacid
    NICE OPNER
    My merk list stretches like elastic.. consider him soon famous
    Couldn't 'blow' if he was Latex with a tire-pump up his anus
    VERY NICE, VERY NICE
    You're catchin your 'next wind'... Im catching my Text Win
    You'll only be 'stiff competition' when Rigor Mortis sets in
    THIS WAS A GOOD ONE
    Why do you think you got declined in that bitchslapped thread?*
    You're lucky I saw you left hanging and picked you up instead
    OK....GOOD PUNCH I GUESS, WASN'T REALLY FEELIN IT
    I molest newbs and rape vets with cyanidally laced text
    I find Revel about as 'non-sensational' as having safe sex
    NOT REALLY FEELIN THIS ONE EITHER BUT GOOD ANYWAYZ
    2 hours is a limit that I never have require for rhymes
    If we battled back in the Renaissance you couldnt "beat me in time"
    UR BEST LINES IN MY OPINION GREAT CLOSER

    U had the punches, tghe wordplay, the creativity and some good vocab, a couple multis and good structure.what more is there ta say but put a few more personals in and keep doin ya thing.

    Overall nice battle, my vote=DeVaZtatE MinDz for a better verse and better punches.

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    my 1st time upping...

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