See I vs Pyromaniac

[Rudy Ray Moore]

lets go 10 lines

[See I?]

aigt my fault man, i'm gettin caught up give me 15 minutes

[See I?]

didn't need 15... i guess i'll try abit

I see why U never stayin calm
I can see psalms writ on your palms
now settle your arms
cuz your life is gonna be destroyed and gone by my atomic bombs
Cant control ya spit so what you thought was hot aint flame
and invincibility aint a cheat option cuz this aint a game
What? You came wit the same sound for a slot from dame?
Nah your a joke homie you aint "money lonely" your raps is phoney
gotta put that rap-shur that sure to capture interest only
Dang See I? didn't wanna waste a bit of my talent...
But you insisted on tastin real mental balance I'm real violent

[Rudy Ray Moore]

See I? u dont want no drama man i keep shells for beef like a taco stand/
got money in Iraq and know cats in Iran that blow ya block up like they form afghanistan/
u wanna fight man i'm alright wit my hands deliver a forearm shiver that'll level a nigga/
but now and days i rather play with my trigga shit i'm good wit a hammer/
and my lawyer too nice ta let me do 25-life in da slammer/ even if some shit was caught on camra/
so i ain't scared ta put 32 below the brim of ya hat/
and leave ya fce looking like a twisted mat/
just ta show u motherfuckers where the fuck i'm at!

[Rudy Ray Moore]

could somebody please vote on this battle win or lose i just want it done with

[Ack Scent]

Pyro;
See I? u dont want no drama man i keep shells for beef like a taco stand/
got money in Iraq and know cats in Iran that blow ya block up like they form afghanistan/
u wanna fight man i'm alright wit my hands deliver a forearm shiver that'll level a nigga/
but now and days i rather play with my trigga shit i'm good wit a hammer/
and my lawyer too nice ta let me do 25-life in da slammer/ even if some shit was caught on camra/
so i ain't scared ta put 32 below the brim of ya hat/
and leave ya fce looking like a twisted mat/
just ta show u motherfuckers where the fuck i'm at!

Nice flow, nice rhymes hit em wit a few punches, but u glorified yaself more than u threw punches it seemed like.

See I?:
I see why U never stayin calm
I can see psalms writ on your palms
now settle your arms
cuz your life is gonna be destroyed and gone by my atomic bombs
Cant control ya spit so what you thought was hot aint flame
and invincibility aint a cheat option cuz this aint a game
What? You came wit the same sound for a slot from dame?
Nah your a joke homie you aint "money lonely" your raps is phoney
gotta put that rap-shur that sure to capture interest only
Dang See I? didn't wanna waste a bit of my talent...
But you insisted on tastin real mental balance I'm real violent

I'm guessin, i don't see I to I wit u on this one cuz it seems to me u let the rhyming go at the very end and u only had a few good punches.

For better flow and more punches......
my vote=Pyro

hit up the battles in my sig.Do me a fava and vote fairly.

[Johnny 6-feet]

See I

I see why U never stayin calm
I can see psalms writ on your palms
now settle your arms

^many rhymes but no punches^

cuz your life is gonna be destroyed and gone by my atomic bombs

^threat^

Cant control ya spit so what you thought was hot aint flame
and invincibility aint a cheat option cuz this aint a game

^the second line was pretty good, i guess thats a punch^

What? You came wit the same sound for a slot from dame?
Nah your a joke homie you aint "money lonely" your raps is phoney
gotta put that rap-shur that sure to capture interest only
Dang See I? didn't wanna waste a bit of my talent...
But you insisted on tastin real mental balance I'm real violent

^this all read as filler to me, the 3rd line had a nice pun, but you basically said 'i'm better than you' without thorwing any punches.


Pyromaniac

See I? u dont want no drama man i keep shells for beef like a taco stand/
got money in Iraq and know cats in Iran that blow ya block up like they form
afghanistan/

^first line was beautiful, great pun and a great punch, second was funny as well^

u wanna fight man i'm alright wit my hands deliver a forearm shiver that'll level a nigga/
but now and days i rather play with my trigga shit i'm good wit a hammer/

^stretched lines that didn't rhyme, good threats though^

and my lawyer too nice ta let me do 25-life in da slammer/ even if some shit was caught on camra/
so i ain't scared ta put 32 below the brim of ya hat/

^more threats and boasting, no punches^

and leave ya fce looking like a twisted mat/
just ta show u motherfuckers where the fuck i'm at!

^a nice finisher with a pun and a punch^

vote- Pyromaniac, he came with better, more and more creative punches than See I, who spent most of the verse writing filler.

[Rudy Ray Moore]

yo i'm upin' for votes only need one more vote for a K.O so please vote

[Rudy Ray Moore]

could some one please vote on this battle i would like to have a battle record to show

[Rudy Ray Moore]

i hate ta sound rude but if u view the battle please vote
#4

[Rudy Ray Moore]

all i need is three more votes please just take a little time out to at least give you opinion so i can improve
#5

[MC_Quicksand]

See I?: Well, you're structure wasn't solid from the outset - your second bar definitely showed some variance and really shot the flow of the verse. You got it together at the end, but be careful with some of the peeps on this board - they'll break your verse down and be like, "why aren't these lines rhymin'?! What a whack bar" to somethin' like

Cant control ya spit so what you thought was hot aint flame
and invincibility aint a cheat option cuz this aint a game
What? You came wit the same sound for a slot from dame?
Nah your a joke homie you aint "money lonely" your raps is phoney

Something to be aware of. No more comments, but no praise either...

pyromaniac: I'm startin' to get worried about peeps who think that simply mentionin' their opponent's name at the beginning of a verse counts as a personal, and think they can spit anything in a battle. Fellas, you gotta really play on words, get their names and cut it to pieces, be smart! Don't spit generic shit 'cause that won't win battles and it's a waste...I saw no originality, pyromaniac. It's not a matter of See I? winning, but you losing...

VOTE: See I?

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[tweetburd]

See I?

I see why U never stayin calm
I can see psalms writ on your palms
now settle your arms
cuz your life is gonna be destroyed and gone by my atomic bombs
structure and flow a little choppy but can see where you're goin with your threat
Cant control ya spit so what you thought was hot aint flame
and invincibility aint a cheat option cuz this aint a game
What? You came wit the same sound for a slot from dame?
mm not feelin this one lines a bit played even i used somethin similar
Nah your a joke homie you aint "money lonely" your raps is phoney
gotta put that rap-shur that sure to capture interest only
lol like this one nice playin with the words
Dang See I? didn't wanna waste a bit of my talent...
But you insisted on tastin real mental balance I'm real violent
you could have come stronger with this closer i think if it had been reworded but is ok

pyromaniac

See I? u dont want no drama man i keep shells for beef like a taco stand/
got money in Iraq and know cats in Iran that blow ya block up like they form afghanistan/
ok opener structure and flow
u wanna fight man i'm alright wit my hands deliver a forearm shiver that'll level a nigga/
but now and days i rather play with my trigga shit i'm good wit a hammer/
yep likin this one good flow again
and my lawyer too nice ta let me do 25-life in da slammer/ even if some shit was caught on camra/
mm empty filler??
so i ain't scared ta put 32 below the brim of ya hat/
and leave ya fce looking like a twisted mat/
just ta show u motherfuckers where the fuck i'm at!
good strong closer like this

so there you go a few of my thoughts on your battle...See I? your flow an structure seemed a bit all over but i guess you can work on but hey it's still ok...pyromaniac i just thought you delivered better with a couple of good slaps and your closer took the battle for me

vote : pyromaniac