10 lines
No feeding crew or d/r (if applies)
Verse due in 40 from time you check in
Soon as you check in I'll start typing
3-0 equals KO
Give best effort...
Kool?
10 lines
No feeding crew or d/r (if applies)
Verse due in 40 from time you check in
Soon as you check in I'll start typing
3-0 equals KO
Give best effort...
Kool?
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Originally Posted by DeVaZtAtE MinDz
Ite cool...
checkin in
Wedge..
151 Productions..
Holla BACK!!
UNBEATEN!!
This bitch is fucking retarded, prob going against me just to show he isn't a coward//
but he knows he's 'fucked' when he drops his 'bars' like 'inmates in prison showers'//
Quit trying to scrap rap with one of the best because you're not earning the respect that you're yearning//
not even your 'flyest' line could shock the world if it left the 'Twin Towers swerving'//
With a verse like that you need to elevate before going against me, take the advice as a token//
but how the fuck can you 'step' to me when both your 'knees are broken'?//
You see I'm the lyrical master who brings a verbal disaster, this is no accident//
you couldn't talk 'shit' if you packed you mouth with 'laxatives'//
u prob thought i was one of them newbies who can't help but spit something lame//
I could replace your heart with an 'X-Box' and you still wouldn't have it in you to 'spit game'//
haightt.. uppin
Wedge..
151 Productions..
Holla BACK!!
UNBEATEN!!
Damn that was fast .....
Wedge- is just a 'weak fuck' like committing necrophilia
Your verse could be brailled and nobody's STILL 'feelin ya'
Im text-vegetarian 'consuming herbs' like I've got fetish 4 twigs
You've been here but a week, its already time to edit your sig*
Theres 'more than one way to skin cats' raw as sushi
And I only need a single sharp verse to 'chafe this pussy'
Notorious fry not 'BIG' but you're still 'Ready To Die"?
Dropped a verse in one minute like prewrittens could fly?
'Campaign' state to state with Republican Funds
I bet you STILL couldnt 'sway a single vote' sayin you won....
*he's undefeated?
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good spits guys ! on both your behalfs but as you know there can only be one winner and wedge your bars were a bit stretched you could ahve taken out some of you filler words good verse tho punches were pretty good , no personals tho that would have helped
devaztate mindz = good spit as well you had good punclines some neb squashing hits and you use more rb terms as you been here longer vote goes to you ! no hate promise .....
RETURN THE FAVA, IVE TAKEN TIIME OUT TO VOTE IN UR BATTLE, SO U NEED TO DO THE SAME, BATTLES IN MY SIG. THANK U
This bitch is fucking retarded, prob going against me just to show he isn't a coward//
but he knows he's 'fucked' when he drops his 'bars' like 'inmates in prison showers'//
-Iiiight, i like it, seen sunthin like it before, but w/e
Quit trying to scrap rap with one of the best because you're not earning the respect that you're yearning//
not even your 'flyest' line could shock the world if it left the 'Twin Towers swerving'//
-decent, too fukkin stretched
With a verse like that you need to elevate before going against me, take the advice as a token//
but how the fuck can you 'step' to me when both your 'knees are broken'?//
-naw
You see I'm the lyrical master who brings a verbal disaster, this is no accident//
you couldn't talk 'shit' if you packed you mouth with 'laxatives'//
-i like it
u prob thought i was one of them newbies who can't help but spit something lame//
I could replace your heart with an 'X-Box' and you still wouldn't have it in you to 'spit game'//
-naw weak closer
Wedge- is just a 'weak fuck' like committing necrophilia
Your verse could be brailled and nobody's STILL 'feelin ya'
-nice start, and setup
Im text-vegetarian 'consuming herbs' like I've got fetish 4 twigs
You've been here but a week, its already time to edit your sig*
-ok, ha, nice setup again
Theres 'more than one way to skin cats' raw as sushi
And I only need a single sharp verse to 'chafe this pussy'
-nice
Notorious fry not 'BIG' but you're still 'Ready To Die"?
Dropped a verse in one minute like prewrittens could fly?
-iiiight, nice setup again
'Campaign' state to state with Republican Funds
I bet you STILL couldnt 'sway a single vote' sayin you won....
ok finish
Iiiight vote DM, for more clever and witty punches, better structure and flow and an overall better verse. I was feelin ur setups, none of which was jus filler like most peoples(in front lines anyway). Wedge u came pretty nice for a noobie, but ur structure was terrible, and ur punches werent all that hard hittin, but u did a pretty decent job for a new cat, but i kinda think ur shit mighta been pre-writtin, considerin no nameplays, no personals, and it was done quick as fuk, pre-writing is homo, but w/e. continue to elevate, but this is a good start.
Please remember to vote fairly in the battle in my sig, its got the most views and 19 posts but only 2 votes that counted. hit it up, thank u
Artificial Intelligence
Appreciate the honest votes...Im hitting yours up now to view. Thanx.
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v/ devaztate minds
wedge
You see I'm the lyrical master who brings a verbal disaster, this is no accident//
you couldn't talk 'shit' if you packed you mouth with 'laxatives'//
devaztate minds
Wedge- is just a 'weak fuck' like committing necrophilia
Your verse could be brailled and nobody's STILL 'feelin ya'
Notorious fry not 'BIG' but you're still 'Ready To Die"?
Dropped a verse in one minute like prewrittens could fly?
'Campaign' state to state with Republican Funds
I bet you STILL couldnt 'sway a single vote' sayin you won....
wedge would've benefited from not using stretched lines as he used, devaztate had a shorter line length which gave it an easier read, so yeah, devaztate pretty much took this
A CHECK MY SHIT... I VOTE ON YOURS, PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR
CHECK THE SIG FOR MY BATTLES... THANKYOU VERY MUCH
KOs everywere... tight shit.. Wedge, your great, the prison thing is funny as fuck.. so the broken knee thing... Tight as fuck dude 8.9/10This bitch is fucking retarded, prob going against me just to show he isn't a coward//
but he knows he's 'fucked' when he drops his 'bars' like 'inmates in prison showers'//
Quit trying to scrap rap with one of the best because you're not earning the respect that you're yearning//
not even your 'flyest' line could shock the world if it left the 'Twin Towers swerving'//
With a verse like that you need to elevate before going against me, take the advice as a token//
but how the fuck can you 'step' to me when both your 'knees are broken'?//
You see I'm the lyrical master who brings a verbal disaster, this is no accident//
you couldn't talk 'shit' if you packed you mouth with 'laxatives'//
u prob thought i was one of them newbies who can't help but spit something lame//
I could replace your heart with an 'X-Box' and you still wouldn't have it in you to 'spit game'//
haightt.. uppin
some good solid rhymes... I dont see a lot of nockouts or punches though...Wedge- is just a 'weak fuck' like committing necrophilia
Your verse could be brailled and nobody's STILL 'feelin ya'
Im text-vegetarian 'consuming herbs' like I've got fetish 4 twigs
You've been here but a week, its already time to edit your sig*
Theres 'more than one way to skin cats' raw as sushi
And I only need a single sharp verse to 'chafe this pussy'
Notorious fry not 'BIG' but you're still 'Ready To Die"?
Dropped a verse in one minute like prewrittens could fly?
'Campaign' state to state with Republican Funds
I bet you STILL couldnt 'sway a single vote' sayin you won....
8.2/10
W/WEDGE
GREAT JOB TO BOTH
Meat
Thanks everyone. Uppin x2
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uppn x3
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Dm i think you take this.... wedge your lines where streached... not too great... punches didint connect very hard.... DM you had some cleaver lines and some good punches... nice n witty... i enjoyed your verse... wedge just cut down your lines... but other than that it was alright not great but alright... Dm takes this for an all around more solid verse..
Vote - DM
Originally posted by:Wedge
This bitch is fucking retarded, prob going against me just to show he isn't a coward//
but he knows he's 'fucked' when he drops his 'bars' like 'inmates in prison showers'//
AIGHT OPENER
Quit trying to scrap rap with one of the best because you're not earning the respect that you're yearning//
not even your 'flyest' line could shock the world if it left the 'Twin Towers swerving'//
I LIKED IT BUT IT WAS STRETCHED TO SHIT
With a verse like that you need to elevate before going against me, take the advice as a token//
but how the fuck can you 'step' to me when both your 'knees are broken'?//
THIS WAS COOL BUT COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTER
You see I'm the lyrical master who brings a verbal disaster, this is no accident//
you couldn't talk 'shit' if you packed you mouth with 'laxatives'//
GOOD PUNCH TO STRETCHED THOUGH AND DON'T BUT DOUBLE LINES
AT THE END OF EVERY LINE
u prob thought i was one of them newbies who can't help but spit something lame//
I could replace your heart with an 'X-Box' and you still wouldn't have it in you to 'spit game'//
OK ENDING BUT NO FATALITY
Originally posted byM
Wedge- is just a 'weak fuck' like committing necrophilia
Your verse could be brailled and nobody's STILL 'feelin ya'
COOL OPENER
Im text-vegetarian 'consuming herbs' like I've got fetish 4 twigs
You've been here but a week, its already time to edit your sig*
AIGHT
Theres 'more than one way to skin cats' raw as sushi
And I only need a single sharp verse to 'chafe this pussy'
GOOD PUNCH
Notorious fry not 'BIG' but you're still 'Ready To Die"?
Dropped a verse in one minute like prewrittens could fly?
I LIKE THAT
'Campaign' state to state with Republican Funds
I bet you STILL couldnt 'sway a single vote' sayin you won....
GOOD CLOSER
V/DM
for overall better verse
and more hard hittin punches and personals
hit the link back
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