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This was dope as hell, pretty original concept, nice flow it never came off and the whole thing made me want a part 2, some multis added in there were perfectly blended, the fact that you used commas as wat i like to call a "stoppage" in between words to make the flow nicer was well thought out, nice shit right here...9/10
if you were to return the favor do it in my battle in my sig...peace
I'm strait feeling this I had the same happen to me a love one gone but never missed.....love how you flowed this piece can't get better then this and if it can more props to ya
Coming strait from the Dirty Midwest
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To juicy and wet
^ please drop more pieces...
your works always have a special..um..effect on me...lol
j/p...you were workin a gimmick, but you had potential..start writin again
and chrit...ill drop on this in a few hours
Bittersweet
this is dope...probably the dopest open mic ive seen yet on rb....8.4/10...good use of wordplay and your stucture was to point good use of vocabulary as well...keep dropin this was fire...
drop some feed on my collab with indeph and my sog baby girl...
..Battles..
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homo...
AlieNation
..GrindHouse..
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we see you Cock-A-Roaches looking...
Coming Soon
it was deeper then i thought it was, nice lines and good structure, the vocabulary was good but could have been better, other then all that i liked it
"ya i see you nigguhs mean muggin on poarches, unload that clip and watch em scatter like roaches"
ima foo wit it! girl gimme dat pussy i kno wut to do wit it!
I AINT NO BITCH!
Edot ya rhymes are tight man and the shit had meanin, i was really feelin this piece.
keep risin man
Edot finna be dope nah mean
nice piece for a non topical head
free up
A few achievements here and there
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