due by same time tomorrow
10-12 lines...
no bull shit...
no d/r
no crew or hate votes ....
u drop first after checkin in.....
aiight good luck
Jai-Cee
SACicecold_killa
due by same time tomorrow
10-12 lines...
no bull shit...
no d/r
no crew or hate votes ....
u drop first after checkin in.....
aiight good luck
Alright, I'll drop tomorrow...
I'll checc in then... drop whenever you like, i'll drop in like 12 hours or sumthin...
No feeding...
Peace
iigiht yo i am checkin in .........drop it as soon as possible iight
baskily...Jai-Cee is a lyricall baby...
this newby wanted to step up to my challenge?.....i think hes crazy//
you aint nas dude.... your shits not illmatic.... not even maby...
im sick of YOU wanna be tupacs....that sound like JT//(justin timberlake)
give up hope......cuz this win i took...
you can throw away your "Freestyling For Dummies" rap book//
cmon man jus look...
see im the Head Chef... ur an everyday cook/
a perpatrator/ this game aint for you playor
im a dope MC... that rap hater slayor//
now say your prayor...and say your grazes
cuz like Lloyed Banks... my flow jus cut you in seven different places//
Dropped...
You obviously want to battle newbs, is that because you’re actually a herb..?
Your last win was only coz yours rhymed and the other persons didn’t…… Werd...!
A stupid name – SACicecold_killa, the chances are you’re naturally wack…
Your better off fucking dead, so rename yourself the MC necrophiliac…
You’re only still the tender age of 16, yet you think you’re in your prime…
Dickhead, when your balls eventually drop, you’ll evidently go blind…
We all know your joking when you say that I think I’m the best…
But be honest son, you got to admit, so much truth is said in jest…
Coz you forget to write punches, probably couldn’t even write hooks…
So you write shit that don’t hit, it misses, and you get landed with my right hooks…
Lacking real effort on my part… Meh…
Votes please?
yea in my opinion u beat me.. im not gonna hate or ne thin ..but i had to rewrite it a bunch of times and i couldnt remember wat i put the first time
well any ways uppin for vote number 1.............
Uppin for at least a vote to begin with...
Uppin #1
killa .. fav line..
give up hope......cuz this win i took...
you can throw away your "Freestyling For Dummies" rap book//
overall.. ya verse was kinda choppy very much forced rhymes u need better flo and punchlines..
jai cee... fav line (s)
Coz you forget to write punches, probably couldn’t even write hooks…
So you write shit that don’t hit, it misses, and you get landed with my right hooks…
overall.. ya verse was kinda choppy at time but u at least had a decent punch nothing to wow it was justa iight i guess.. but... yeah.. work and elevate youll get there...
vote: jai cee
Uppin for more votes please...
Uppin #2
Peace
uppin #3...
Votes are needed people...
Peace
Uppin #4
Comon people... Lets have some votes...
Uppin #5...
Its the last time... Can we get some more votes...?
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