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  1. #1
    Epik Truth
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    Re: Crazy

    Originally posted by BaByGeE894
    I think I'm going crazy, like my soul is trying to rip through my flesh/
    This thing I once called my life, has turned into another big mess/
    My boyfriend is always gone, doesn't seem like he wants to be around me anymore/
    And every opportunity is just another closed door/
    Why do I try to do anything to better myself when no one wants to notice?/


    These seem to be the lines that stuck out the most to me
    Maybe cause i know what your talking about, but the way you express yourself in these 1st few beginng lines leads you into a very powerful body and end...that's how most your relationship poems are, thats what makes them most unique
    from what i recall...This was another great piece...nice job.

    -Epik

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    im feelin this 4 sho.felt da emotion put in

    Why do I try to do anything to better myself when no one wants to notice?/
    Sometimes I just pick up things, look at them and think "I should throw this"/

    ^^
    fav lines.nice drop.~1~

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    PabloPoe
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    I am sorry....and i love you.....thas all am going to say...

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    oh girl..once again you bloe my mind wit another one of ya drops...i felt that line bout be'n lower then soil deeply...i can relate...

    i know all about feel'n useless...

    well anyways...nice drop...look'n foward to ya next one

  5. #5
    papiswifey
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    yo dat was really tight and i can relate to it. i was really feelin it. keep it up. one

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    nice piece...strong emotions...raw....very well depicted...keep yo head up...respect....
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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