stuart equal strengths

[Stuart Little Strength]

if yallz was watchin me and stuart big startin beefin and battled. but after battlin we found out we was both equal strengths. no big, no little. so we squashed da beef mang and made diz hot collab.

stuart little strength
yo mang we cant beef we been mangs since we was little mouse
sharin our cheese and sleepin ova at eachother house
runnin away from the mean catz that tried to bite yo tail
then i cut my little paw and u started bitin yo nails
and we cried watchin the bully rats steal our cheese
went to school in the same class u helped me learn to read
the mouse stories when my whiskers were still little
no big or little strength mang we BOTH STUART LITTLES!
you my top mouse mang my right paw and its groovy
so lets squash the beef mang and u can be in my next movie

da hook
Friends How many of us have them?
Friends
Ones we can depend on
Friends
How many of us have them?
Friends
Before we go any further,
lets be Friends*

stuart big strengths
Yo me and you we be friends since we was little mice
We get into gang fights but we still treat each other nice
Remember when des mazurka’s put dat mouse trap for us?
And then we cut threw der walls like it was a Lufkin forest
I always got your tail no matter what ya my homie friend
Des cats dat try to eat us aint got no one who dey can depend
…………ON……. FRIENDS
that’s what we are forever even do you aint put meh in ya movie
Its cool I don seen ya girls boobie and ya was cool wif it
Remember dat a old lady dey wrote da book "3 blind mice" about
When dey killed little gary big foot when we was in der house

[TERROR CONVICT]

Sounds Like A Childish Rap, Very Basic Extremely Simplistic U Should Save This One For Your Lil Brother

[Willy B]

yo this was jus straight up not worthy of bein read flow was ehhh, vocab was kindergarten childish, actually it just sounded like you could get anyone else to collab with you so you did it with yourself ahahahahahaha
but who knows your just a newb mayb you could get better who knows just keep on man

[Johnny 6-feet]

ironically, i liked the originality of this, it was creative the way you put the concept of friends in terms of a couple of mice (although this obsession you seem to have with stuart little implies that you're either a) taking the piss, b) really young, in which case that piece was really good or c) completely out of your mind). the vocab and imagery was solid, although i think a few multis would've helped this along. the hook reads like it was bitten from a nate dogg song, was it?

a pretty good piece, keep posting and keep elavating man. if you could rep one of mine in return i'd appricaite it.

[Sublime D]

i think thas sdizzle