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  1. November 22nd, 2004, 04:31 AM #1
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    Hit N Run Renegade

    i see alot of you are comfortable as fuck right now.feeling like oh well yeah they a crew but what can they do? they just aight and got like one vet who falling off. but the one thing you forgot was.....IM STILL ME

    so fuck you and the god you pray to,any lord you show praise....
    will bare witness to the messiagh of rap who bring apocolypse/
    in a phrase/exchanged from 2 lips/enraged/showed after the 7th
    sign as an 8th finger raised/
    when i engage/ i drop the bomb and napalm on anything within range.
    NONCENTZ is a threat/words take to verbs/lyrical/ switch to physical/terrets/and make you catch feeling like a pinched nerve.
    refer to me/ as your last employer and reason to apply for disability/
    you suck/ rappers is mothers boys who inherit their blow job ability/
    you got brain damage with sexual fertility/......retarded fucks/who
    got me started/to begin their career.
    my first verse is a ulogy/ whoever face me/is dearly departed/
    let me put this on transperrancy paper so the message is clear.
    if i gave a fuck, i wouldnt get paid to leave you laid/
    raped on tape and repeat it every time my cd is played.
    every thing i spit i blaze/ with lyrics so hot i fade/ your pigment
    while u sun bath/ in my shade.
    scare the white out you like micheal jackson/then scare the
    black back like latoya dating dark men//
    your rhymes phat that explains why something is draggen/
    (NONCENTZ YOUR SO EGOTISTICAL)
    of coarse i had to make room past my ego for braggen.
    fagmen stay on my dick/whipped to micro fragment/
    we aint shaggen/but i am taking your shit/
    everything you got from fan slips/ to chips/
    plus leaven the space between your hips/ split/
    then beat you so bad you look like a hemophiliac taking
    acupuncture pricks.
    mad kids be like you son everything you scripted/ripped it/
    i kill mics ill be the million and one cause of death with my
    own obituarary section listed/of those who risked it.
    i stay freestylen wilden/you got one hot track to perform
    every ENCORE after is weaker then eminems album.
    nigga you weak/ with a future looking bleek/if i spit on
    your cd id drown you and the beats/
    HOT n RUN we taking the streets/ like construction
    workers repaving concrete.

    word to J6 feet and the rest of my fam......
    Last edited by noncentz; November 22nd, 2004 at 04:35 AM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  2. November 22nd, 2004, 04:40 AM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156182
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=156172
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  3. November 22nd, 2004, 09:25 AM #3
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    damn, that shit hot, flow was there, and good punches...
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  4. November 22nd, 2004, 04:45 PM #4
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    thanks you seam to bne the only one paying attention
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  5. November 22nd, 2004, 04:59 PM #5
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    hey i got a shout out! woot! maybe i shouldnt be drinking this vodka. anyhow...

    nicely done man, i spotted strong punchlines, good multis and solid vocab mixed with some bullyfoot, down to earth, shit talking on this verse. personally i like to get into subject matter like this on ocasion, we mos def gotta do a collab in the near future. hit me up on pm.

    keep posting. and keep repping that crew of ours.

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  6. November 22nd, 2004, 05:06 PM #6
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    check your damn pms lol
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  7. November 22nd, 2004, 05:07 PM #7
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    Sounds like your dissin somebody, this piece didn't really display any depth 2 me cuz I've seen1 of your pieces when u were battling. And that exceeded greatly beyond what u wrote here. U excercised tha advance use of metaphors on tha other one but on this one it wasn't present enough. Your vocab. was ok, structure at times out of place 2 me, some lines carried a lil 2 long.
    Not close 2 one of your greatest but i think it was aight.
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  8. November 22nd, 2004, 05:10 PM #8
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    i felt the punches were just as strong even though i used i different style adding more of a setup to each punch.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  9. November 22nd, 2004, 05:22 PM #9
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    Wow that was shit hot loved it, check mine out if u can
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  10. November 22nd, 2004, 08:27 PM #10
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    thanks twin i will peep your work no doubt
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  11. November 24th, 2004, 12:01 PM #11
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    ahhhh shit...Salam dunny...its me Narcicyst...man as usual you tore shit up like violent skat fiends...man them punches was nice...as usual clever wordplay and overall a witty piece...check out my new mad arab shit dunn...one
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  12. November 24th, 2004, 12:08 PM #12
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    very pleasent ot see Word working his ass off for the fam...this was definatly tight as a virgin....pz bruh...
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  13. November 24th, 2004, 12:18 PM #13
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    Sup W-P? Been a while since I've read one of your drops..

    and I see you still have that same niceness. Word to what Narc said about the wordplay and wittiness lolol

    oh and nice sig pic lol

    Nothing bad I can say about the piece...except the way it's set out a bit, but it still read well anyway and that's the main thing.

    Take care

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  14. November 24th, 2004, 01:04 PM #14
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    Narc And N Demik...........was Da Deal Thanks For Posting Up On This That Means Alot.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  15. November 24th, 2004, 01:06 PM #15
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    nicely went on with it had real power to the words....n' the punches were strong...ali on a speed bag
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