10-20 Lines
Act smart, you know the rules
10-20 Lines
Act smart, you know the rules
Last edited by Sergio...; November 20th, 2004 at 05:44 PM
I'll go 20, in the back of my mind, I knew I was gonna face you...True Story.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...192post1835192
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155108
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=155104
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...660post1842660
Last edited by Emulated.; November 20th, 2004 at 11:03 PM
wordplay....or personals??....Hmmph
Ya wack as fuck, but I can see why his hopes floating
..kids'll read his verse & pull the trigger before they can vote for me
He's on a thin rope, Em's lifeline's loose & rigid
...when i said lax kills, you didn't have to show us in your writtens
sorry fuck, its week 9 and ya stats are low as shit
...Bit P, some no show wins & he's got 2 points to show for it
Kids threads is weak, its well know contenders get beat
..Em's look is depressing, like LLL before I entered the league
ya gay son and you get no pussy so call it quits
..cuz I'm a carpet bagger, but Em just took up Southern Politics
I stay on his mind...faggot, this aint a cheap joke
..cuz kid checked in, and already had his 20 prewrote
True Story?...Shit, he's fake and wack as can be
..Em spits, but it aint the shit we want the Hip Hop fantasy
to highlight Sav's come back, he's hitting balls out the park
..Emulated's comeback's in HR...?....Uh, more like a fucking balk
you fuckin joke, can't rhyme...this kids something wack
my ode's impressed the public, you ode them their money back
You want war?! get sent packing, stripped, bound and kicked
..to the fuckin middle east, just to tie the Gaza round his lips
Last edited by Sergio...; November 16th, 2004 at 05:10 PM
Sav ya wack, you should go right through the exit door
Thought you was off the hook? Nah jus uncalled for
Ppl soupin you up, when even you know you cant see me
Don’t think there’s brotherly love, this was jus relatively easy.
I would kill you, but there’s no chance for me to get a KO
Cuz I’ll get about 4 quick, then Nique’ll prolly vote
She luh’ the cock , but she not the only one that ride dick
You can try your best, but will always be remembered as Merge’s sidekick
And Sav, if I catch you near my house, nigga it’s over
You’ll be in and out…..of a fucking coma
I can give you a lesson in all things, so in life..die.
Cuz when I spray that thing, I’ll really put this pesticide.
Ya girl ready to ride, so wut if I’m cocky, shit….
Once I get over myself…its right back on top of ya bitch
Wait you don’t have one, around girls you nervous…
Last time you talked to a bitch, she was on the operator service
Get the 411, Sav’ll shake like an addict when the thang hit em
Emulated’s know to crack heads…you’re known to hang with em
You thought you had chances of being king, but I’ll stop you at that
Savir was thinking he was heir to the throne…but I’m a suction cap
Originally Posted by Savir.
Savir took this... showed he still got it... lmao @ the ode line.... nice personals too.
but honestly though, emulated surprised me. almost seemed like a different person wrote the verse or some shit... some of the shit was a bit played, but overall it was worded pretty well... definetely an improvement.
Last Word
I must last... word
Ya wack as fuck, but I can see why his hopes floating
..kids'll read his verse & pull the trigger before they can vote for me
ehhh, not executed correct
He's on a thin rope, Em's lifeline's loose & rigid
...when i said lax kills, you didn't have to show us in your writtens
no
sorry fuck, its week 9 and ya stats are low as shit
...Bit P, some no show wins & he's got 2 points to show for it
lmao
Kids threads is weak, its well know contenders get beat
..Em's look is depressing, like LLL before I entered the league
heh
ya gay son and you get no pussy so call it quits
..cuz I'm a carpet bagger, but Em just took up Southern Politics
lol almost
I stay on his mind...faggot, this aint a cheap joke
..cuz kid checked in, and already had his 20 prewrote
filller
True Story?...Shit, he's fake and wack as can be
..Em spits, but it aint the shit we want the Hip Hop fantasy
no
to highlight Sav's come back, he's hitting balls out the park
..Emulated's comeback's in HR...?....Uh, more like a fucking balk
no
you fuckin joke, can't rhyme...this kids something wack
my ode's impressed the public, you ode them their money back
eh no
You want war?! get sent packing, stripped, bound and kicked
..to the fuckin middle east, just to tie the Gaza round his lips
heh
Sav ya wack, you should go right through the exit door
Thought you was off the hook? Nah jus uncalled for
nope
Ppl soupin you up, when even you know you cant see me
Don’t think there’s brotherly love, this was jus relatively easy.
lol nice
I would kill you, but there’s no chance for me to get a KO
Cuz I’ll get about 4 quick, then Nique’ll prolly vote
lol. nique + savir = love. thats funny, not your line, you line sucked.
She luh’ the cock , but she not the only one that ride dick
You can try your best, but will always be remembered as Merge’s sidekick
true
And Sav, if I catch you near my house, nigga it’s over
You’ll be in and out…..of a fucking coma
ehh
I can give you a lesson in all things, so in life..die.
Cuz when I spray that thing, I’ll really put this pesticide.
ehh
Ya girl ready to ride, so wut if I’m cocky, shit….
Once I get over myself…its right back on top of ya bitch
heh
Wait you don’t have one, around girls you nervous…
Last time you talked to a bitch, she was on the operator service
noo!
Get the 411, Sav’ll shake like an addict when the thang hit em
Emulated’s know to crack heads…you’re known to hang with em
no. your known for not hanging with heads cuz of lines like this.
You thought you had chances of being king, but I’ll stop you at that
Savir was thinking he was heir to the throne…but I’m a suction cap
no!
emulated almost took this.
vote- savir
vote - savir
barely. had a few above average lines that hit harder than emulated's. emulated had an all in out decent verse, just needed wording better.
ya gay son and you get no pussy so call it quits
..cuz I'm a carpet bagger, but Em just took up Southern Politics
I stay on his mind...faggot, this aint a cheap joke
..cuz kid checked in, and already had his 20 prewrote
liked^^
emulated -
I can give you a lesson in all things, so in life..die.
Cuz when I spray that thing, I’ll really put this pesticide.
Ya girl ready to ride, so wut if I’m cocky, shit….
Once I get over myself…its right back on top of ya bitch
also liked^
overall- nice battle.
Yea..this battle was surprisingly nice yo. Emulated fucking surprised me here..this is BY FAR the best he's ever come in this league, so far. Savir also came nice with a good mix of personals and wordplay. So yea..this was actually a close battle.
Sav had the carpet bagger punch, and a few personals that were decent. Emulated had the relative line..and his opener which was pretty good.
Fuck it, on re-read..this was a tie. =/ Still counts as a vote though, nahmean?
Last edited by >Inertia>; November 16th, 2004 at 10:51 PM
Ya wack as fuck, but I can see why his hopes floating
..kids'll read his verse & pull the trigger before they can vote for me
this was an ok concept, just doesn't work out the way it should ya know?
He's on a thin rope, Em's lifeline's loose & rigid
...when i said lax kills, you didn't have to show us in your writtens
nope
sorry fuck, its week 9 and ya stats are low as shit
...Bit P, some no show wins & he's got 2 points to show for it
the punch, wheres the punch?
Kids threads is weak, its well know contenders get beat
..Em's look is depressing, like LLL before I entered the league
woulda been true, had you come super dope. still, decent
ya gay son and you get no pussy so call it quits
..cuz I'm a carpet bagger, but Em just took up Southern Politics
lol
I stay on his mind...faggot, this aint a cheap joke
..cuz kid checked in, and already had his 20 prewrote
seen this before
True Story?...Shit, he's fake and wack as can be
..Em spits, but it aint the shit we want the Hip Hop fantasy
decent wordplay
to highlight Sav's come back, he's hitting balls out the park
..Emulated's comeback's in HR...?....Uh, more like a fucking balk
comparing hitting to pitching... eh, still ok
you fuckin joke, can't rhyme...this kids something wack
my ode's impressed the public, you ode them their money back
best punch, #3 or so in the top ten here
You want war?! get sent packing, stripped, bound and kicked
..to the fuckin middle east, just to tie the Gaza round his lips
weird attempted wordplay, s'ok, s'ok....
Sav ya wack, you should go right through the exit door
Thought you was off the hook? Nah jus uncalled for
yep. nice line
Ppl soupin you up, when even you know you cant see me
Don’t think there’s brotherly love, this was jus relatively easy.
I liked this alot, witty.
I would kill you, but there’s no chance for me to get a KO
Cuz I’ll get about 4 quick, then Nique’ll prolly vote
word.
She luh’ the cock , but she not the only one that ride dick
You can try your best, but will always be remembered as Merge’s sidekick
ouch
And Sav, if I catch you near my house, nigga it’s over
You’ll be in and out…..of a fucking coma
eh... not that witty
I can give you a lesson in all things, so in life..die.
Cuz when I spray that thing, I’ll really put this pesticide.
seen pesticide done waay better
Ya girl ready to ride, so wut if I’m cocky, shit….
Once I get over myself…its right back on top of ya bitch
lol
Wait you don’t have one, around girls you nervous…
Last time you talked to a bitch, she was on the operator service
wack.
Get the 411, Sav’ll shake like an addict when the thang hit em
Emulated’s know to crack heads…you’re known to hang with em
I liked this one, actually.
You thought you had chances of being king, but I’ll stop you at that
Savir was thinking he was heir to the throne…but I’m a suction cap
meh...
I'm sorry to say it, but Em took this here.... the personals were there, the wit was on point, just all around beat out your verse Sav.... and I'm pretty sure you know it.
v/ Em.
Tough battle to call...
But I think, well...
Best bars?
Sav...
Ya wack as fuck, but I can see why his hopes floating
..kids'll read his verse & pull the trigger before they can vote for me
Decent play on his avy...don't know why, I just thought this was funny.
ya gay son and you get no pussy so call it quits
..cuz I'm a carpet bagger, but Em just took up Southern Politics
Not quite a great hit, but damn nice attempt...real good use of wordplay.
you fuckin joke, can't rhyme...this kids something wack
my ode's impressed the public, you ode them their money back
Best bar of the battle right here...
And now, Em's...
She luh’ the cock , but she not the only one that ride dick
You can try your best, but will always be remembered as Merge’s sidekick
Bangin personal...
Ya girl ready to ride, so wut if I’m cocky, shit….
Once I get over myself…its right back on top of ya bitch
I know it's not a personal, but it's funny as fuck, good wordplay.
Get the 411, Sav’ll shake like an addict when the thang hit em
Emulated’s know to crack heads…you’re known to hang with em
2nd best bar of the battle...
So, that's tied...
I guess since I think Sav had the best bar...
He wins.
But this was really, really fuckin close.
Props!
who deleted Etch-A-Sketch's vote?
*smh*
vote=sav
em had no lines...and wtf @ that bitch/operator line??? that shit wuz played out in 99...next week kid gonna spit a cum hard like jerkin off in cement line...blah...weak battle tho...I think sav coulda came better...
wordplay....or personals??....Hmmph
Ya wack as fuck, but I can see why his hopes floating
..kids'll read his verse & pull the trigger before they can vote for me
cool
He's on a thin rope, Em's lifeline's loose & rigid
...when i said lax kills, you didn't have to show us in your writtens
nah... yes i know what it means now tho..
sorry fuck, its week 9 and ya stats are low as shit
...Bit P, some no show wins & he's got 2 points to show for it
alright
Kids threads is weak, its well know contenders get beat
..Em's look is depressing, like LLL before I entered the league
meh
ya gay son and you get no pussy so call it quits
..cuz I'm a carpet bagger, but Em just took up Southern Politics
nah
I stay on his mind...faggot, this aint a cheap joke
..cuz kid checked in, and already had his 20 prewrote
lol . good
True Story?...Shit, he's fake and wack as can be
..Em spits, but it aint the shit we want the Hip Hop fantasy
nah
to highlight Sav's come back, he's hitting balls out the park
..Emulated's comeback's in HR...?....Uh, more like a fucking balk
almost but no
you fuckin joke, can't rhyme...this kids something wack
my ode's impressed the public, you ode them their money back
above avg
You want war?! get sent packing, stripped, bound and kicked
..to the fuckin middle east, just to tie the Gaza round his lips
meh
Sav ya wack, you should go right through the exit door
Thought you was off the hook? Nah jus uncalled for
no
Ppl soupin you up, when even you know you cant see me
Don’t think there’s brotherly love, this was jus relatively easy.
cool
I would kill you, but there’s no chance for me to get a KO
Cuz I’ll get about 4 quick, then Nique’ll prolly vote
lol. above avg
She luh’ the cock , but she not the only one that ride dick
You can try your best, but will always be remembered as Merge’s sidekick
avg
And Sav, if I catch you near my house, nigga it’s over
You’ll be in and out…..of a fucking coma
meh
I can give you a lesson in all things, so in life..die.
Cuz when I spray that thing, I’ll really put this pesticide.
i used a pesticide line before. so.. played. and no.
Ya girl ready to ride, so wut if I’m cocky, shit….
Once I get over myself…its right back on top of ya bitch
avg
Wait you don’t have one, around girls you nervous…
Last time you talked to a bitch, she was on the operator service
no
Get the 411, Sav’ll shake like an addict when the thang hit em
Emulated’s know to crack heads…you’re known to hang with em
nah
You thought you had chances of being king, but I’ll stop you at that
Savir was thinking he was heir to the throne…but I’m a suction cap
i saw a heir to the throne / i got a pair of scissors line.. blah @ this one.
i didnt like this all that much honestly. i rushed thru reading it i guess, a lot to do tonight. v/ tie
this one was real tough to vote on...this was definitely on of the better battles this week...both came real witty with strong punches and creative wordplay...but i think Sav had a lil more consistency...
V/ Sav, by half a hair...
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