Check the Flow

[Seminole]

Waddup niggas, I'm new here, and I'm tryin to improve my stuff so tell me wut ya'll think about this:


Yo, Seminole throw tomahawks that cauterize whack cats,
crush em like Coca-Cola cans, I'm a modernized rap cat,
I knock out niggas like ovadoses of Benedryll,
u couldn't stab me even if you sharpened ya skills,
I'm not Oprah but I'll leave em wit records that's Winfrey(win-free),
I know how Jackson and Kelly felt the way I'm fuckin' these Emcees,
I can take any thug and turn him to a wuss,
and leave em wit a cut deeper than his shorties puss,
so let this be a lesson that I'm neva to be overlooked...

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[Seminole]

Uppin for feedback...

[Johnny 6-feet]

you come off as a battle rapper on this one. some good and quite creative punches on this short piece. i'd like to see what you could do with a deeper subject. the imagery was pretty good and the vocab was solid. a few multis wouldnt hurt, but this was a pretty good piece overall.

keep posting and keep elavating.

p.s. if you could rep one of my pieces i'd appricaite it.

[Seminole]

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it....I love that sig too, lmao!!

[noncentz]

U Have A Creative Edge For Punches And Though Short It Was Tight I Like Your Creative Content

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.