freestyle (off tha top of tha dome)

[Akrilik]

this is just sum shit im gonna freestyl, im not that good i only started ryming 2 mnths ago

trik tha mic
sik n tite
mc's cum'n thru tha thik n lite
Akrillik drawin up fists 2 fite
list tha site
writtn ryt?
rhymes 2 be heard, bits n bytes
bitten like
Rabies so your sick inside
i'm killn lyk
crazy insecticide
Hav a dozen split like 6 aside
midgets die
lyk frigid flies
Frozen/tha chosen 1 goes n like FBI
dropn tha critix eyes
n leavn em n a twist behind

[Ace of Aces]

you got alotta rhymes there man. this was no doubt off the top of the dome. lol. anyway, i guess this is good for a freestlye, not much thought in it, but you had the rhyming, even tho it may not have made sence in places, this was some ok stuff. try adding in some thought though, it might be better for us to read. keep it up.

ps. hit up this in return. thanks:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=153893

peace

[Akrilik]

thanx 4 tha advice

[Go Go Power Rangers]

**yungwackilble **turx**southern smoke**

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.