15-20 Lines, 20 minutes, check in pls...
KingLyrical
MC_Quicksand
15-20 Lines, 20 minutes, check in pls...
i guess me just puttin a message is checkin in..so yea i checked in
so is it u spit first, i read your shit then i respond? or do we both write shit up and post in 20 mins? if so then that aint much of a battle
KingLyrical, yo' pitiful, I'ma show you how to rip a fool,
frontin' on the mic like it was a tool, yo that ain't cool,
'cause that can be destructive, my rhymes are reproductive,
like they be fuckin' bitches, you got me laughin in stitches,
'cause you be posin' like we was takin' pictures,
I be spea-king lyrical, you just mentioning stuff that's fictitious,
you got me suspicious, if you're the king, where's your crown,
'cause instead, you be wearin' a frown listenin' to my profound sound,
got the crowd swayin', we can't hear what yo' sayin, gotta talk loud,
instead, you should be the Queen 'cause you simply a bitch,
that description fit-cha better than a rubber,
'cause yo dick be dancin' in 'em like it was a clubber,
or a club-hopper, you ain't proper, time to run like a robber,
you be stealin' my spotlight, time to act right,
if this were a fight, you'd be knocked out first round of the night,
crowned heavyweight, MC Quicksand be takin over Kinglyrical's throne,
when I'm in the zone, no questions, just answers to those,
who be doubtin' my flows, you chose to battle, now suffer the consequences,
my mind dispenses defeat in portions that you can swallow,
my motto, I be killin' MC's with these sentences.
aiight, yo, we should of fixed that in the rules before we spit, but spit what you want, if you wanna bite, bite, but peeps should take that into consideration when they vote...use some creativity, son!
dayum gurl ur shit is wackier than willi wonka in his chocolate factory/u thinkin those wack lines will blast on me?/u aint nothin but a trick/a spick/a hoe suckin dick/take it in yo mouth let let it ooze on your face/take his dick in all the way to the penis base/leave no trace/be a good hoe/listen to those pointers your mom let u know//
ok yea i lost this one. didint know wat i was doin and i had to handle somethin. theres a lil taste of my freestyle(as in take no more than 1 min unlike u that took forever) but anyways. but uh lets battle next time.
ummmm.....do it even have 2 say nething bout kinglyrical, n werent u da 1 sayin that every battle u looked at wuz wak or som shyt, this right chea iz anotha hall of shame nominee, lucky as shyt i cant vote
- King Tone
haha, don't be talkin' 'bout taking time, that short verse you spat was a whole 14 mintues after I dropped mine, mine was 20 minutes after I opened the thread...
If you wanna have a second verse, I'm down yo, whatever
quiksand, i really hope u dont feel ur accomplishin somthin by beatin him n a battle cuz he sucks
- King Tone
nah that was a min run but i was doin somethin else. im down for another battle. just holla at me later. Makaveli Trained..shut yo trap kid..after i take quicksand ima battle yo ass..so startin writin your shit now to give ya a head start and ill holla at u later. im out ppl. later
hey yo i think MC quicksand took this one he had better word play and his rhymes were a lot better than King Lyrical..
King lyrical you had i guess some decent punches but none were hit right
Mc had a better use of words but all in all yall both need to practice more i understand yall are both noobz but all love no hate
My V/Mc_Quicksand
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
yo, y'all need to be votin', gotta close up my 3 battles...uppin' #3
MC Quiksand:
KingLyrical, yo' pitiful, I'ma show you how to rip a fool,
frontin' on the mic like it was a tool, yo that ain't cool,
Uhuh, nothing special as far as an opener
'cause that can be destructive, my rhymes are reproductive,
like they be fuckin' bitches, you got me laughin in stitches,
No. didnt rhyme
'cause you be posin' like we was takin' pictures,
I be spea-king lyrical, you just mentioning stuff that's fictitious,
Thats cool, not a real hard hitta though
you got me suspicious, if you're the king, where's your crown,
'cause instead, you be wearin' a frown listenin' to my profound sound,
got the crowd swayin', we can't hear what yo' sayin, gotta talk loud,
That was a decent punch
instead, you should be the Queen 'cause you simply a bitch,
that description fit-cha better than a rubber,
'cause yo dick be dancin' in 'em like it was a clubber,
Damn your bars are mad confusing, whats ur rhyme scheme?
or a club-hopper, you ain't proper, time to run like a robber,
you be stealin' my spotlight, time to act right,
if this were a fight, you'd be knocked out first round of the night,
Weak but a punch is a punch i suppose
crowned heavyweight, MC Quicksand be takin over Kinglyrical's throne,
when I'm in the zone, no questions, just answers to those,
Holy hell wheres the rhyme AT?
who be doubtin' my flows, you chose to battle, now suffer the consequences,
my mind dispenses defeat in portions that you can swallow,
my motto, I be killin' MC's with these sentences.
Aight finisher
dayum gurl ur shit is wackier than willi wonka in his chocolate factory/u thinkin those wack lines will blast on me?/u aint nothin but a trick/a spick/a hoe suckin dick/take it in yo mouth let let it ooze on your face/take his dick in all the way to the penis base/leave no trace/be a good hoe/listen to those pointers your mom let u know//
Holy shit all of that was wack as fuck. Mod read it, That IS adequate feed for him.
ok yea i lost this one. didint know wat i was doin and i had to handle somethin. theres a lil taste of my freestyle(as in take no more than 1 min unlike u that took forever) but anyways. but uh lets battle next time.
Well that about sums it up
MC Quiksand had a mediocre verse but it was an easy win v/MC Quiksand
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i think mc quick also had the better of the 2 in this battle and nobody can even prove if u did freestlye your verse kinglyrical so u better off takin a bit more time to spit for better rep if you know what im talkin about!.
I think both spits were wak is fuk I don't know what quicksand's concept was I mean some of his spit did not rhyme. Like on the second bar REPRODUCTIVE/STITCHES/
no......come on now figure that one through a little more before you drop.
kinglyrical you ran all your words together, there was no bars no nothing to feed off of.
no pun's,no met's, I dunno that was weird. If I was to vote it would be.........................V////quicksand
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