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Essay
BeRLin`S BesT
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Although he’s wack I will still go in depth now
When got passed skills fo real you was left out
See that’s how I figure u worse than your ancestor
just can’t beat my Arsenal, dudes from Manchester
I’d grand-theft ya but I’ma leave the crime to u son
Go ahead you can bite another line, here choose one
I abuse cunts whose rhymes are older than the pope G
ya joints cause less motion than me shakin’ a oak tree
homie I’d go X-Rated on you but you’re only fifteen
part ya head wit a axe so u can watch get killed split-screen
u spit clean, no wonder clown why should u care
plus u won’t be underground till I put u there….over
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ups messed up...in the second lines it's ment to be GOD not got....pz
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errbody no things in berlin go down like the wall in 88,
u call urself the best, well essay is the great,
think u can beat me dawg, u must be wishin,
u cant defeat me, ur like a muslim on a suicide mission,
u a nazi ?, cos sure u drop some bombs,
but when u run out of ammo, i'll pull out all the guns,
shoot this battle up, like i was the taliban,
leave u holy, like you was the qu'ran,
berlin got nuthin on me, he 2 simple,
he like an annoying nerd, i just wanna pop tht pimple,
this guy was expecting it easy, not knowing i play hard,
berlins lost the war again, set up the grave yard!
YUP!
aight up for voting....but just for the info the wall fell 89' but hey that's ok kid...nazi line was pretty unexpected too....lol...pz
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Essay
errbody no things in berlin go down like the wall in 88,
u call urself the best, well essay is the great,
nah man, not feelin it, wack
think u can beat me dawg, u must be wishin,
u cant defeat me, ur like a muslim on a suicide mission,
you can get a job done on suicide missions, and not only muslim ppl do it...
u a nazi ?, cos sure u drop some bombs,
but when u run out of ammo, i'll pull out all the guns,
WACKWACKWACK
shoot this battle up, like i was the taliban,
leave u holy, like you was the qu'ran,
you shoulda stopped while you were ahead son...
berlin got nuthin on me, he 2 simple,
he like an annoying nerd, i just wanna pop tht pimple,
weak
this guy was expecting it easy, not knowing i play hard,
berlins lost the war again, set up the grave yard!
that was weak too....
YUP!
Berlins Best
Although he’s wack I will still go in depth now
When God passed skills fo real you was left out
was a nice punch, but it didnt rhyme..
See that’s how I figure u worse than your ancestor
just can’t beat my Arsenal, dudes from Manchester
that was ok...
I’d grand-theft ya but I’ma leave the crime to u son
Go ahead you can bite another line, here choose one
coulda done better..
I abuse cunts whose rhymes are older than the pope G
ya joints cause less motion than me shakin’ a oak tree
lol
homie I’d go X-Rated on you but you’re only fifteen
part ya head wit a axe so u can watch get killed split-screen
woulda been ok if it was worded diff
u spit clean, no wonder clown why should u care
plus u won’t be underground till I put u there….over
weak closer
Breakdown
personals:Essay
punches:berlin
humor:berlin
wordplay:berlin(that arsenal line kinda counts..)
structure:TIE
Overall:Berlin
If i could vote i would, i will be able too later though
uppin this for some voting...I will return the favor ya know me...pz
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Essay
errbody no things in berlin go down like the wall in 88,
u call urself the best, well essay is the great,
Not a very good opener...
think u can beat me dawg, u must be wishin,
u cant defeat me, ur like a muslim on a suicide mission,
Not very damaging... I dont see what you used to tie the statement to your opponent
u a nazi ?, cos sure u drop some bombs,
but when u run out of ammo, i'll pull out all the guns,
You just complimented your enemy... thus damaging yourself
shoot this battle up, like i was the taliban,
leave u holy, like you was the qu'ran,
Taliban lines are played... might of been better if you worded it better
berlin got nuthin on me, he 2 simple,
he like an annoying nerd, i just wanna pop tht pimple,
You called him simple in one of the most simplest lines in both verses... why you want to pop pimples on annoying nerds is beyond me
this guy was expecting it easy, not knowing i play hard,
berlins lost the war again, set up the grave yard!
Probably your best line... but still weak as a closer
Essay
Over all - 3/10
Berlin's best
Although he’s wack I will still go in depth now
When god passed skills fo real you was left out
decent opener
See that’s how I figure u worse than your ancestor
just can’t beat my Arsenal, dudes from Manchester
Decent personal... i like the way it flowed
I’d grand-theft ya but I’ma leave the crime to u son
Go ahead you can bite another line, here choose one
Ight... this line makes it appear you arent taking your opponent seriously...
I abuse cunts whose rhymes are older than the pope G
ya joints cause less motion than me shakin’ a oak tree
I like the oak tree line...
homie I’d go X-Rated on you but you’re only fifteen
part ya head wit a axe so u can watch get killed split-screen
Again decent... another personal dissin age. The gettin killed split screen is an interesting thought
u spit clean, no wonder clown why should u care
plus u won’t be underground till I put u there….over
Could have been worded better, but a decent closer that ultimately buried this guy
Berlin's best
Overall - 6/10
Vote - berlins best
umm...
errbody no things in berlin go down like the wall in 88,
u call urself the best, well essay is the great,
think u can beat me dawg, u must be wishin,
u cant defeat me, ur like a muslim on a suicide mission,
u a nazi ?, cos sure u drop some bombs,
but when u run out of ammo, i'll pull out all the guns,
shoot this battle up, like i was the taliban,
leave u holy, like you was the qu'ran,
berlin got nuthin on me, he 2 simple,
he like an annoying nerd, i just wanna pop tht pimple,
this guy was expecting it easy, not knowing i play hard,
berlins lost the war again, set up the grave yard!
undefined hmmmmmmmmm. what can i say about this not to much...except u need sum help u had way to many simple words open your vocab...
now.. Better verse
Although he’s wack I will still go in depth now
When got passed skills fo real you was left out
See that’s how I figure u worse than your ancestor
just can’t beat my Arsenal, dudes from Manchester
I’d grand-theft ya but I’ma leave the crime to u son
Go ahead you can bite another line, here choose one
I abuse cunts whose rhymes are older than the pope G
ya joints cause less motion than me shakin’ a oak tree
homie I’d go X-Rated on you but you’re only fifteen
part ya head wit a axe so u can watch get killed split-screen
u spit clean, no wonder clown why should u care
plus u won’t be underground till I put u there….over
Simple but butter had better flow punchlines okay..got on him alittle more
but over all you pick up my vote
Vote=Berlins
::ghost::
thank y'all for the break down but we need poll votes...somebody....plz
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aight nice battle yall
berlin
Although he’s wack I will still go in depth now
When got passed skills fo real you was left out
nice
See that’s how I figure u worse than your ancestor
just can’t beat my Arsenal, dudes from Manchester
lol good
I’d grand-theft ya but I’ma leave the crime to u son
Go ahead you can bite another line, here choose one
lol cleva
I abuse cunts whose rhymes are older than the pope G
ya joints cause less motion than me shakin’ a oak tree
nope
homie I’d go X-Rated on you but you’re only fifteen
part ya head wit a axe so u can watch get killed split-screen
ok
u spit clean, no wonder clown why should u care
plus u won’t be underground till I put u there….over
nice
essay
errbody no things in berlin go down like the wall in 88,
u call urself the best, well essay is the great,
ok
think u can beat me dawg, u must be wishin,
u cant defeat me, ur like a muslim on a suicide mission
muslim joke's r kinda played
u a nazi ?, cos sure u drop some bombs,
but when u run out of ammo, i'll pull out all the guns,
wtf
shoot this battle up, like i was the taliban,
leave u holy, like you was the qu'ran,
agen muslim joke's r played
berlin got nuthin on me, he 2 simple,
he like an annoying nerd, i just wanna pop tht pimple,
thats bit iv herd tha load's ah times
this guy was expecting it easy, not knowing i play hard,
berlins lost the war again, set up the grave yard!
not bad
yer not bad but berlin took this easy nice vocab flow was ok ... essay stop wid muslim jokes they lame n played .. both of yall need 2 work on personals more .. i voted for berlin ..holla
Although he’s wack I will still go in depth now
When got passed skills fo real you was left out
NICE
See that’s how I figure u worse than your ancestor
just can’t beat my Arsenal, dudes from Manchester
REAL NICE BUT UNITED BEAT ARSENAL AT THE WEEKEND...
I’d grand-theft ya but I’ma leave the crime to u son
Go ahead you can bite another line, here choose one
NICE
I abuse cunts whose rhymes are older than the pope G
ya joints cause less motion than me shakin’ a oak tree
ALRIGHT NICE CONCEPT
homie I’d go X-Rated on you but you’re only fifteen
part ya head wit a axe so u can watch get killed split-screen
ALRIGHT
u spit clean, no wonder clown why should u care
plus u won’t be underground till I put u there….over
YEAH.WOOT WOOT..
NICE MAN REALLY NICE VERSE FLOWED WELL NICE PUNCHES AND WORDPLAY...FEW PERSONALS...
errbody no things in berlin go down like the wall in 88,
u call urself the best, well essay is the great,
ALRIGHT NICE CONCEPT
think u can beat me dawg, u must be wishin,
u cant defeat me, ur like a muslim on a suicide mission,
NAH....
u a nazi ?, cos sure u drop some bombs,
but when u run out of ammo, i'll pull out all the guns,
ALRIGHT
shoot this battle up, like i was the taliban,
leave u holy, like you was the qu'ran,
NICE
berlin got nuthin on me, he 2 simple,
he like an annoying nerd, i just wanna pop tht pimple,
WAT...RELEVANCE PLEAZE...
this guy was expecting it easy, not knowing i play hard,
berlins lost the war again, set up the grave yard!
YEAH NICE ENDER...
OVERALL IT WAS A REAL NICE CLOSE BATTLE...HARD DESCISION.. I WILL GIVE IT TO BERLIN THO I FELT HIS VERSE WAS BETTER BUT REAL CLOSE MEN..NICE BATTLE....
VOTE/BERLIN.........
CUD YAL HIT UP MY BATTLE AGAINST MAKEVELLI 71 IN FRONT LINES....THANKS PEACE...
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uppidy number two...ya know I'm always returnin a favor...pz
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Vote - Berlin
Reason:
He was able to come up with fresher concepts and at least able to throw more better punches than Essay....Essay didn't have much of anything within his verse and really needs work on concepts....Berlin had the consistency and wit as well...not the originality....some of your lines were really played...but some were ok....which is why you get my vote...
Vote On Mine.
I.J.L.
Without the J...we're just Ill
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Both werew wack, seriously wack. But I reckon Berlin came better on this. Why? Because nearly all of Essays punches, were played, didn't have any concpets, were just self-glorification, or purely, and simply, sucked balls. Berlin, you didn't come good either, but your verse saved this from being hall of shame material.
v/ Berlin.
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