alright you spit first, do you care if i feed off your raps? good luck!
YOUNG RICH
Slayers-Box
alright you spit first, do you care if i feed off your raps? good luck!
check it
i'ma lyrical genious and i can't be stopped,
i'ma rock slayer straight outta his box,
is this cat gonna no show?
with my persistant rhymes that flow,
soo many consistant lines i show,
when i battle pussys like u everyday,
tryna come hard but still lose in everyway,
wait i'm not done yet i still got a couple things to say....
i got 1 verse and u got none,
keep it that way son, yur- done!
check
ok check this mr.lyrical young rich//
my sister raps better than you, and shes a dumb bitch,
it took you that long to write that verse?//
or did you have to buy a purse first?,
listen dawg, you are young and rich? then quit rappin//
and pay somebody to feel you and your raps, like michael jackson,
so you gonna rock me outa my box? all this is, is shit talk//
like when you told me the bloods taught you how to cryp walk,
i could stop right here and win, but ill kill ya some more//
just so you can realize that NOBODYS FEELIN YA WHORE!
alright i admit it, for a few seconds you had 1 verse and i had none//
alright now i have one verse and soon 20 votes and you might have one,
so man, im just writin this shit so fucken easily///
but you aint writin shit you took all that what shit from easy-e//
after this tell your buddies the next best thing, and no, not ur g-string
alright dawg young rich you pretty fucken illl hahaha well not this battle but the other 1 vs thc, good luck on the votes what you think of mine anyone? anyone?
slayers-box your raps are exelent.. ive looked at all your previous matches YOU ARE THE BEST RAPPER I HAVE EVER SEEN
Yo U A Damn Lie Both Yall Suck Big Nuts Ill Take Both Yall On
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I'd give it to slayer he was a little more creative but the Michael Jackson line is getting played out yo, it was most likley bitten or used for more than just the first time, and to both of ya'll anyone can rhyme words like day, rich, etc... work on your structure, they weren't very impressive.
The streets of good time
hav 2 giv it 2 slayers box, rhymes not bad at all,
but the vote mainly goes against young rich,
rhymes r 2 basic man, 3 letta rhymes get no votes
YOUNG RICH
i'ma lyrical genious and i can't be stopped,
i'ma rock slayer straight outta his box,
ok opener
is this cat gonna no show?
with my persistant rhymes that flow,
soo many consistant lines i show,
slightly nonsensical but ok no punch though
when i battle pussys like u everyday,
tryna come hard but still lose in everyway,
wait i'm not done yet i still got a couple things to say....
erm nope
i got 1 verse and u got none,
keep it that way son, yur- done!
you gotta make up your mind wether you want him to show or not..not really a good closer
Slayers-Box
ok check this mr.lyrical young rich//
my sister raps better than you, and shes a dumb bitch,
strong opener like it made me laugh
it took you that long to write that verse?//
or did you have to buy a purse first?,
not likin this so much,.. purse is gettin played
listen dawg, you are young and rich? then quit rappin//
and pay somebody to feel you and your raps, like michael jackson,
it works and it's a good punch but again played
so you gonna rock me outa my box? all this is, is shit talk//
like when you told me the bloods taught you how to cryp walk,
sly personal jab
i could stop right here and win, but ill kill ya some more//
just so you can realize that NOBODYS FEELIN YA WHORE!
yeah like
alright i admit it, for a few seconds you had 1 verse and i had none//
alright now i have one verse and soon 20 votes and you might have one,
personal jab like this one
so man, im just writin this shit so fucken easily///
is this bit a filler?
but you aint writin shit you took all that what shit from easy-e//
after this tell your buddies the next best thing, and no, not ur g-string
wasn't as together as the rest of your stuff but works ok i guess
so there you go a few opinions of mine an a vote to hopefully go towards closin this battle for ya. don't think that you were both equally challenged to each other but anyways Slayers-Box had more complex ryhmes personals and structure just had it over all
vote : Slayers-Box
i've taken the time to drop you a few lines would appreciate if you could do the same to mine jus leave an opinion if you don't have enough posts to vote but could really do with some votes with the hope of gettin some of me battles closed.
damn wat with the whole hattin thing young trae damn you must be supper pissed at them hit me up when you ready to vs the realy boss
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