10 Lines
You Spit First
Regular Rules
DeVaZtAtE MinDz
E-MORTAL
10 Lines
You Spit First
Regular Rules
checking in.......................................
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Hope I wasnt 2 Long... Here We Go...
Being 'E-Mortal' won't help you much cuz I 'devastate minds'/
Can't murk you physically?Then I'll cause brain waves to resign/
Braindead Text-cee to be entered in the list of obituraries/
My punchlines aint even swing, yet you flinch.. 'you scary' /
My verbal weapons of mass destruction cause eruptionz like bombs/
And they're gonna find you in a hole like they did Saddam/
You'll break down like speedbumps meetin porcelean wheels/
Have that ass handed to you like it was a 3 course meal/
E-Mortal easily owned like a slut 'quite hump-able'/
And got laid out in Ten Bars like you tryna get comfortable/
Ight get at it Dude...
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Dude, you obviously aren't 'bout it so just drop the gig
'Cause the only script I see flipped is the one in your sig
Devastate minds, but I bet you can't devastate mine
And yeah you are next up...in the unemployment line
You got female qualities and are hard to get through to
Basically you're like a bed, watch as I lay into you
I'ma mad man in a retarded home, let me stomp this fool
Dude's like a mime, he hasn't got a single quotable
Takin' more hits and turnin' redder than a punchin bag
I'll have you seein more stars than the american flag
Being 'E-Mortal' won't help you much cuz I 'devastate minds'/
Can't murk you physically?Then I'll cause brain waves to resign/
Braindead Text-cee to be entered in the list of obituraries/
My punchlines aint even swing, yet you flinch.. 'you scary' /
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT NICE OPENER NICE FLOW,,,,GOOD WORDPLAYS,,,PUNCHES WERE "OK" ON THIS PART
My verbal weapons of mass destruction cause eruptionz like bombs/
And they're gonna find you in a hole like they did Saddam/
You'll break down like speedbumps meetin porcelean wheels/
Have that ass handed to you like it was a 3 course meal/
E-Mortal easily owned like a slut 'quite hump-able'/
And got laid out in Ten Bars like you tryna get comfortable/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW DA PUNCHES DIDNT REALLY STAND OUT MEANING-IT WASNT REALLY HITTIN IT BUT GOOD VERSE THOUGH
DEVAZTATE-HAD GOOD FLOW NICE "OK" PUNCHES AND NICE WORDPLAYS
Dude, you obviously aren't 'bout it so just drop the gig
'Cause the only script I see flipped is the one in your sig
Devastate minds, but I bet you can't devastate mine
And yeah you are next up...in the unemployment line
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM NICE FLOW PUNCHES WERE "OK"
You got female qualities and are hard to get through to
Basically you're like a bed, watch as I lay into you
I'ma mad man in a retarded home, let me stomp this fool
Dude's like a mime, he hasn't got a single quotable
Takin' more hits and turnin' redder than a punchin bag
I'll have you seein more stars than the american flag
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT NICE FLOW GOING DIDN'T REALLY SEE HARD HITTING PUNCHES NOR IT EVEN TOUCHED DEVAZTATE PUNCHES BUT ITS AN "OK" VERSE
E-MORTAL-HAD GOOD "OK" PUNCHES NICE FLOW
OVERALL=THIS AN CLOSE BATTLE BOTH HAD DA SAME CONCEPT AND PLUS HAD DA SAME PROBLEMS DIDNT HIT HARD WIT DA PUNCHES,BUT I GIVE DIS VOTE TO DEVAZSTATE BASICALLY HE CAME HARDER WITH DEM FLOW'Z AND DEM PUNCHES HE EDGE IT A LIL,,,,,,,THA REASON WAS E-MORTAL PUNCHES WERE KINDA BASIC AND PLAYED (MY OPINION) BUT EITHER WAY IT WAS AN CLOSE BATTLE
V-DEVAZSTATE
I CANT VOTE I'LL JUST LEAVE DIS AS AN FEEDBACK
YO DEVAZSTATE RETURN AN FAV PLZ DA LINKS ARE IN MY SIG
~PEACE~
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
get ya voting on
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Blah battle, one sided, just like all of em I read =\
Devastate, you had way too many simple concepts, and
your finishing lines were horribly simple..
Ya need to put a lil 'ummpf' into your bars.. punches and "personals" arent really there man.. Work on being more creative and adding some wit to your disses.My verbal weapons of mass destruction cause eruptionz like bombs/
And they're gonna find you in a hole like they did Saddam/
As for E, kid had alot more thought out punches, and really outshined his opponent. Some played lines.. like the laying into shit, but it was decent.. saw a little bit of forced wordplay, but all in all it was a good drop, definitely enough to win.
v/ E-Mortal
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=152112
Thanks.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
i thought it was a decent verse but ok.
Keep votin peeps
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Uppin #1.
this was a close battle but e mortal takes it because his opener and closer were both the best lines of this battle,devestate had a good flow and structure and had some witty punches but it wasnt as good as e mortal cuz e mortal was more creative with his punches.props to both tho
v/e mortal..............ps.plz vote on my the youngin battle in my sig and return the favor thx -One Love-
v/devastate mindz
Devastate had alot better punches and his flow was just more fun to read, more interesting. I like the open'er fam..
not hate to e-mortal.. u had a nice flow and all, just wasnt ur best..
need votes....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151393 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150895
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
Man, come on. That vote's gonna get removed soon as a mod says this.
Uppin #2.
Uppin #3.
Being 'E-Mortal' won't help you much cuz I 'devastate minds'/
Can't murk you physically?Then I'll cause brain waves to resign/
Not really a punch, just saying what you will do to him
Braindead Text-cee to be entered in the list of obituraries/
My punchlines aint even swing, yet you flinch.. 'you scary' /
Nice idea, but it didn't flow and didn't hit him
My verbal weapons of mass destruction cause eruptionz like bombs/
And they're gonna find you in a hole like they did Saddam/
Aight..
You'll break down like speedbumps meetin porcelean wheels/
Have that ass handed to you like it was a 3 course meal/
The setup had nothing to do with the 2nd part.. umm
E-Mortal easily owned like a slut 'quite hump-able'/
And got laid out in Ten Bars like you tryna get comfortable/
This doesn't work...
Now for E-Mortal
Dude, you obviously aren't 'bout it so just drop the gig
'Cause the only script I see flipped is the one in your sig
Doesn't hit too hard but good personal
Devastate minds, but I bet you can't devastate mine
And yeah you are next up...in the unemployment line
Haha, good one
You got female qualities and are hard to get through to
Basically you're like a bed, watch as I lay into you
Nah, this doesn't work
I'ma mad man in a retarded home, let me stomp this fool
Dude's like a mime, he hasn't got a single quotable
Mime thing is played but good
Takin' more hits and turnin' redder than a punchin bag
I'll have you seein more stars than the american flag
Another kinda played line but aight.
As a whole, I felt E-Mortal came with some aight punches, the unemployment one i was definately feeling. Devaztate I felt like you were just talking about kicking his ass but you weren't really punching him like it didn't leave the hurt so I'm voting for E-Mortal for harder punches.
Yo, I'd appreciate it if you guys hit up the battle in my sig tomorrow after my opponent drops his verse and vote on it.. thx
My vote goes to emortal had way better punches word play was also good structure good also now devistate had good punches but what took my vote to emortal was tho middle of your flow it was the beef and ya done good ceptin ya closer man comeon now
V~e-mortal
return the favor fellas c'mon nah
Yeah, DeVaZtAtE MinDz man, you had some very stretched lines and some of them even sounded like ones I wrote man...and that sucks..... they weren't really hard enough to win and the flow was off a bt but keep trying. E-MORTAL won this will better insults and much better flow. Good luck to the both of you.
v/ E-MORTAL
Posting Rules
