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no hate
no crew votes
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makaveli71
Abstract
10 lines minimum
no hate
no crew votes
no d/r
10 mins to drop
alright man im checkin in now..ile spit in bout 10 mins
alright ima drop now ile give this kid 10 mins....
Wow what an honour im facin this bitch...but soon he be gone.....
he just a con…..i aint battling this motherfucker...…
……………………………………..cuz his ghostwriter’s logged on
this is only front lines..but he flee when my lines attack…..
like my deadly left hook…leave him headless like ken bigly in iraq…….
and fill ya fulla ammunition while ya idol... pac looks on...
makaveli71.....bitch you could never be tha don..
your so wack yo don’t even have an av-atar......
and yo punches be more played.....
.......................................than a jimmy hendix guitar....
ile fill yo face full of holes..this be the only time you really smoken......
but yo punches are empty...unlike yo anus thats been broke-in.....
so elvate dawg if yo wanna reach the level of abstract.....
this only my first battle,...so yo lucky yo still intact....
u...beat me...man wot is u smoken.
ud better lie asleep at night with one eye open.
cus once ive finished. ur livers gonna quiver, ur bones are gonna shiver cus im like a postman i always deliver.
u....beat me...man try wot u can. dont think i cant see that sweat on ur head and the shake in ur hand.
man ur shit is sloppy ill smash ur lyrics like a right from rocky. this is my first but ill make sure its ur last. u couldnt cum back after i put a kap in ur ass.
u ent nuthin just a sick lil girl. ill fill ur gut full of bullets and watch the smoke swirl.
nice battle man goodluck....
uppin for votes here...
ok wow one sided battle
abstract-punches-were light/wordplay-basic/personals-not any/flow-was nice kinda hard 2 follow/originality-u had some rest was a lil played/overall 6/10
makaveli-punches-weak n played/worpdlay-basic/personals-none to my knowledge/originality-u had a lil bit rest was old/flow-not good il say decent/overall 3/10
v-abstract
no hate makaveli but maybe u shouldnt have spoke about Legato cuzz ur both newbs
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
thanks man i had like one personal about him bein a pac dickrider...dats all icould cum up wi as hes new..nah mean...uppin...
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joka dont know rap makaveli won...with the first rhyme haha that was hilarious
wtf slayers box u wanna be taught a lesson sorry fo tha freepost and abstract has it he didnt talk phsycially its on tha net u idiot sleep wit one eye open plus his lien didnt make sense make ur liver quiver wtf how does my liver quiver get real now.
once mo sorry fa tha freepost
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
^lmfao ultimate whorage..anyway peeps...uppin for votes....
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hey well kinda ummm....well it good that you tried makaveli...........keep trying........pretty good abstract........i like the iraq line original...........some whack stuff too.......enought of the holes in your bodies shit.........what about using a rusty steal wool to someones toes.......
v/ mutha fucka did i sound ABSTRACT
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uppin 4 common people...seriously vote....ile return the favour...
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This one was really one sided:
Makeveli 71:
u...beat me...man wot is u smoken.
ud better lie asleep at night with one eye open.
-- weak opener
cus once ive finished. ur livers gonna quiver, ur bones are gonna shiver cus im like a postman i always deliver.
-If I hear someone use that post man line again i'm gonna die
u....beat me...man try wot u can. dont think i cant see that sweat on ur head and the shake in ur hand.
-see whut u were tryin to do but work on ur wording
man ur shit is sloppy ill smash ur lyrics like a right from rocky. this is my first but ill make sure its ur last. u couldnt cum back after i put a kap in ur ass.
--....better than the last ones
u ent nuthin just a sick lil girl. ill fill ur gut full of bullets and watch the smoke swirl.
--sad closer
Dude ur structure was way off and ur punches were played. DId u have any personals. Try coming up with more original concepsts for ur punches. Or if ur going to use a common subject, think of a original way to say it.
Abstract:
Wow what an honour im facin this bitch...but soon he be gone.....
he just a con…..i aint battling this motherfucker...…
……………………………………..cuz his ghostwriter’s logged on
--not a bad opener
this is only front lines..but he flee when my lines attack…..
like my deadly left hook…leave him headless like ken bigly in iraq…….
-nice punch
and fill ya fulla ammunition while ya idol... pac looks on...
makaveli71.....bitch you could never be tha don..
--just ok
your so wack yo don’t even have an av-atar......
and yo punches be more played.....
.......................................than a jimmy hendix guitar....
--its been done
ile fill yo face full of holes..this be the only time you really smoken......
but yo punches are empty...unlike yo anus thats been broke-in.....
--not really feelin it
so elvate dawg if yo wanna reach the level of abstract.....
this only my first battle,...so yo lucky yo still intact....
--just ok closer
U had a much better verse than the other guy. I would tell u to work on ur structure just a little but besides that ur going tin the right direction. Keep it up
My vote/// abstract
RETURN THE FAVOR
Man I wish I could vote,if I could ma vote would go to abstract:
He came with stronger punches than mak
Yo reture da favor and vote ma battles: COLD FLAME ~VS~ FOURPAC AND SHADOWSK8TER...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151698
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151698
Wow what an honour im facin this bitch...but soon he be gone.....
he just a con…..i aint battling this motherfucker...…
……………………………………..cuz his ghostwriter’s logged on
aight punch but stretched a bit
this is only front lines..but he flee when my lines attack…..
like my deadly left hook…leave him headless like ken bigly in iraq…….
ok
and fill ya fulla ammunition while ya idol... pac looks on...
makaveli71.....bitch you could never be tha don..
weak
your so wack yo don’t even have an av-atar......
and yo punches be more played.....
.......................................than a jimmy hendix guitar....
ok
ile fill yo face full of holes..this be the only time you really smoken......
but yo punches are empty...unlike yo anus thats been broke-in.....
decent but played
so elvate dawg if yo wanna reach the level of abstract.....
this only my first battle,...so yo lucky yo still intact....
decent
............
makaveli came weak i wasnt feelin his opener or closer and his punches were played,he had a few multis but thats it so my vote goes to abstract for comen better
ps......yo return the favor in my riddlah battle see the link thx -One Love-
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