HW title: com (5-0) vs. metres (4-0)

[Richard Parker]

current title holder is com.
10-20 lines, yall know the rules.
if you don't, they are posted in LLL office.

[Meters]

Check in.............. 16 lines.

[Erupt]

ok. in.

[Erupt]

sorry all I had time for.. my comps been fucked all night

Just what we need....a another twat to break through
I'd rip this bitch a new asshole.. but we don't need two
Look I don't give a fuck how you rode here, I'll spurn ya
Faggot tried to push his luck.. and it gave him a hernia
Always thinking of myself while I'm reckin this kid
I'd like to have put you first for once... but second it is
I'm asking you for a favor with this d/r shit starting up
So if can you find it in your heart .. I didnt push the knife far enough
Bitch I'm starting rough, I'll crack ya legs till they break
The only time this cripple will get stood up... is on dates
I've raised the stakes to be a daddy.. but unlike your's I'm a lifer
So go and drop ya shit.. I need practice changing dypers

[Meters]

12 against Comedian? ...


I'll cut deep when swinging low, leave this faggot Com defiled
Until your legs are so hackneyed they could pass off as your style
Just a victim of denial, believe with this legend you can't brawl
'cuz you're on the legend's panel...
...head fucking mounted on my wall
Fucking Comedian gonna fall, i'll leave your center split in half,
cuz i'm not crossing 'median, i'm clean wiping him off the map
Kid's no show my slap, simply because my text wit sprays shots
but this bitch'll chauffer this battle, driving me straight to playoffs
Your'e fucking soft, faggot, you think you got tricks up the sleeve?
Stupid bitch...
...who the fuck bites the most active voter in league?
And with girls? Fucking please, I'll leave your eyes all ripped
'cuz most girls spray mason 'em,
...i come smashing with the bricks

[Kaput Mundi]

I'm asking you for a favor with this d/r shit starting up
So if can you find it in your heart .. I didnt push the knife far enough

vs

I'll cut deep when swinging low, leave this faggot Com defiled
Until your legs are so hackneyed they could pass off as your style
Fucking Comedian gonna fall, i'll leave your center split in half,
cuz i'm not crossing 'median, i'm clean wiping him off the map
Your'e fucking soft, faggot, you think you got tricks up the sleeve?
Stupid bitch...
...who the fuck bites the most active voter in league?


Vote Meters

[assault rhymes]

I'm asking you for a favor with this d/r shit starting up
So if can you find it in your heart .. I didnt push the knife far enough
Bitch I'm starting rough, I'll crack ya legs till they break
The only time this cripple will get stood up... is on dates

these i liked from com, the knife one was cool


I'll cut deep when swinging low, leave this faggot Com defiled
Until your legs are so hackneyed they could pass off as your style
Fucking Comedian gonna fall, i'll leave your center split in half,
cuz i'm not crossing 'median, i'm clean wiping him off the map
And with girls? Fucking please, I'll leave your eyes all ripped
'cuz most girls spray mason 'em,
...i come smashing with the bricks

the hackneyed line was cool as fuck, it helps to konw your vocab

close battle, com needed to come stronger at the beginning
but he started weak. so


vote meters

[Deon]

Look I don't give a fuck how you rode here, I'll spurn ya
Faggot tried to push his luck.. and it gave him a hernia
I'm asking you for a favor with this d/r shit starting up
So if can you find it in your heart .. I didnt push the knife far enough


vs


I'll cut deep when swinging low, leave this faggot Com defiled
Until your legs are so hackneyed they could pass off as your style
Fucking Comedian gonna fall, i'll leave your center split in half,
cuz i'm not crossing 'median, i'm clean wiping him off the map


close...average verses for a title imo
com's knife line was pretty good and the hackneyed line from metres was good also

vote tie, neither out did the other in my view

[Richard Parker]

i wasnt feeling much of anything form this battle.

meters i usually like your wordplay, but this time it seemed sort of forced. chauffer= suffer ? chauffer sounds a lot more like "so far" than suffer to me. kind of creative but forced as well. the mase line was aight, not that hard hitting. overall your verse was average.

com was aight as well, but thats it. my fav line from this battle was:
Look I don't give a fuck how you rode here, I'll spurn ya
Faggot tried to push his luck.. and it gave him a hernia

wouldnt normally be close to it, but this time thats it. toss up battle here im leaning towards com. meters came with a lot more wordplay.. probalem was iw asnt feelin it this time around. while com just came direct (com, wtf happened to the shit u showed me on aim though .. that was ten times better.) . after i read coms verse i expected meters to rape but i wasnt feeling his wordplay this week.

v/ com

[Deon]

show for...not suffer feebs
chauffer- to drive

[$pitacular]

I didn't really think this was much to debate over... to me, Meters took this with relative ease. His punches hit alot harder.


Always thinking of myself while I'm reckin this kid
I'd like to have put you first for once... but second it is
I'm asking you for a favor with this d/r shit starting up
So if can you find it in your heart .. I didnt push the knife far enough

vs

I'll cut deep when swinging low, leave this faggot Com defiled
Until your legs are so hackneyed they could pass off as your style
Fucking Comedian gonna fall, i'll leave your center split in half,
cuz i'm not crossing 'median, i'm clean wiping him off the map
Kid's no show my slap, simply because my text wit sprays shots
but this bitch'll chauffer this battle, driving me straight to playoffs
And with girls? Fucking please, I'll leave your eyes all ripped
'cuz most girls spray mason 'em,
...i come smashing with the bricks

vote - Meters

[Richard Parker]

meters +3
com -3

congrats on the title meters