10 lines
no feeding
i spit first
usual rules
good luck
Tha-Joka
-Moe-
10 lines
no feeding
i spit first
usual rules
good luck
U know whats funny?if i was australian i would say check mate like if it were chess....
check
ima go ahead n spit cuzz ima go in a lil bit
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
I'd be rich if i earned a dime for every played rhyme u make,
Im about to smoke a joka,cept his death ain't fake,
Nigga thinks he gon' bone girls with a jay-z image,
Only way ull make a black album is if u wrote it in an african village,
U must be kidding me,stop with the jokes,
U don't make sense like arabics using soap,
Make like budden and jump the fuck off,
U wouldnt spit sick if u fucken coughed,
Like a retired skater,get the fuck off of this board,
Hall of shame bitch,theres your damn RB award,
checkin in
nikka how u gon take me im Middle and ur barely Flyweight
ill slay u evenly no breakin rules cuzz ur so herbishly frank
this kid juss steppped into a sensitive lyrical mine field
id rip u faster than a raptor ina cage hes juss so weakly built
kid wtf is Moe seems liek u livin as tha Simpsons bar-tender(tendin to his bars)
kid was scared to face me cuzz my post reminds him of his father
difference between me n u is i aint new and i made it son
and face tha beef like Lil Flip and realize ya career is done
^^not too good
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
aiight nice now lets gets some votes and nice battle
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
nice battle....up 1
Lol..
Moe .. opener was actually pretty humorous, after that
you were starting to come played.. You had a lot of cool
potential concepts, but you used them all the wrong way.
I saw maybe 2 real personals that were good, the rest was
kinda general filler that didnt do anything. Work on being more
direct, like the opener, and you'll be good to go. Keep
workin on it.
Joka .. You need to elevate alot kid. 1st thing, dont space
out your bars, its just annoying to read that way. Also, ur
personals, were really really weak. Ya had a lot of simple
ideas and concepts, and basically, you just got out-matched
in this battle. Ya need to re-think your approach to battling
man.. elevate .. no hate.
Vote / Moe
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151658
Thanks.
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lol ok ok aiight Rule battle me man fo someone who always gets no respect cuzz u bitin off an Inc u needa sdfu sayin i needa reproach this rap thang uh i think ima Middle and wut ur Light yo dont talk about someone if u dont wanna back it up cuzz im ready 2 smack u 2 death son make u change ur whole look on earth
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90% How You React To It.
lol.. Id rather not waste my time with you man. I have nothing against you.. its just my opinion lmao. You're trippin out over some silly shit man.. why you taking my words to heart if Im just a "Light Weight"? lol..
You got somethin to say PM it, I dont wanna clog up this thread.. plus, every time you reply ur being counted for up's.
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MOE-I'd be rich if i earned a dime for every played rhyme u make,
Im about to smoke a joka,cept his death ain't fake,
-NICE OPENER LIKED IT PRETTY COOL
Nigga thinks he gon' bone girls with a jay-z image,
Only way ull make a black album is if u wrote it in an african village
-ROFLMAO HAHAH FUNNIEST SHIT EVER PRETTY WACK NICE NICE
U must be kidding me,stop with the jokes,
U don't make sense like arabics using soap
-LOL FUKING WACK PRETTY NICE HELLA FUNNY
Make like budden and jump the fuck off,
U wouldnt spit sick if u fucken coughed,
-PRETTY GOOD BUT NO PUNCHES THAT ACTUALLY CONNECTED
Like a retired skater,get the fuck off of this board,
Hall of shame bitch,theres your damn RB award,
-DAMN MAN CALM DOWN U BURND HISS ASS ON THIS CLOSER
JOKA-
nikka how u gon take me im Middle and ur barely Flyweight
ill slay u evenly no breakin rules cuzz ur so herbishly frank
-WTF ARE U TALKING ABOUT HORRIBLE SHIT
this kid juss steppped into a sensitive lyrical mine field
id rip u faster than a raptor ina cage hes juss so weakly built
-MMM PRETTY NICE I LIKED IT BUT COULD BE BETTER
kid wtf is Moe seems liek u livin as tha Simpsons bar-tender(tendin to his bars)
kid was scared to face me cuzz my post reminds him of his father
-DIDNT FEEL YA BUT NICE FLOWS
difference between me n u is i aint new and i made it son
and face tha beef like Lil Flip and realize ya career is done
-NICE CLOSER
BUT MY VOTE HAS TO GO TO MOE
V///MOE BETTER STRUCTURE LYRICS AND WORDPLAY
I'd be rich if i earned a dime for every played rhyme u make,
Im about to smoke a joka,cept his death ain't fake,
-LMAO, really nice fukin opener
Nigga thinks he gon' bone girls with a jay-z image,
Only way ull make a black album is if u wrote it in an african village,
-oooo woulda been good if it was stretched, but decent
U must be kidding me,stop with the jokes,
U don't make sense like arabics using soap,
-weak
Make like budden and jump the fuck off,
U wouldnt spit sick if u fucken coughed,
played concept, but decent
Like a retired skater,get the fuck off of this board,
Hall of shame bitch,theres your damn RB award,
-ok finish
nikka how u gon take me im Middle and ur barely Flyweight
ill slay u evenly no breakin rules cuzz ur so herbishly frank
-weak start
this kid juss steppped into a sensitive lyrical mine field
id rip u faster than a raptor ina cage hes juss so weakly built
-to forced to rhyme, and a weak punch
kid wtf is Moe seems liek u livin as tha Simpsons bar-tender(tendin to his bars)
kid was scared to face me cuzz my post reminds him of his father
dude ur setup shoulda been ur punch and u shoulda said sunthin like, I tried to challenge moe in bitch slapp but he had to tend to his bars - that shit woulda been hot,but instead u made it a weak setup and then a weak punch
difference between me n u is i aint new and i made it son
and face tha beef like Lil Flip and realize ya career is done
ok at best closer
Vote:MOe, moe went down hill after his first punch but still stayed above all of tha joka in his slump, that first line was funny as hell, moe had a better flow and structure, and had hardrer hittin punches, Joka had some played concepts, forced some of his shit, which fukked his structure in places. His punches werent effective so the win goes to moe
Artificial Intelligence
up 2
ill return favor
Yea i dont know about this battle....first of all joka yo were very whack.......i dont know you are just too cocky.....calm down and learn to write......then moe well some of the stuff was whack...i loved the opener........the afican village line was whack.........and the ariabic soap line....it would of been better if it was mexicans because their a little dirtier.........just kidding....not really........but anyways a much better moe put up a much better fight.....
v/ MOE
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wtf im cocky man sdfu u been callin me out fa battles and dissin me fa weeks man get off my nuts
uppin
and dont vote in battles man cuzz u would kno cocky if it slipped in ur mom
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