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TheWhiteFlame
menolin
10 lines
usual rules
due in one hour after you check in, if you dont check in within 10 minutes we aint battlin
hit me up on aim if u wanna change something
checkin in..............................................
Im about ta scalp this punk like im the last mohican
My shit is so dope its gonna leave your flow weakend
come to your crib and fuck up your whole weekened
take a dump on your mom and leave that hoe wreakin
Yo speakin of hoes lets talk about your woman
I wonder how many dicks been in between her bussoms
Probly alot, that bitch has been around the block
swallowed more cock than a case of soda pop
i know youll come back with some shit ive allready heard
but you can call me b2k cuz youve just been served.....biotch!
you ain't dope enough, to scare me or leave me rattled.
'vote an i'll return the favor'...
.........clinches all you battles,
i distiguish wheter the wack name, is a cover for the illing,
then exstinguish white flame with the spit soak sylabble killing,
stupid fuck, when you ryhme slow down stop and think,
because every time you drop hot shit....
.....your fucking fingers stink,
doubs o0o se7en: hmm i need 4 more lines, and a closer
doubs o0o se7en: an i wanna do is put some pop tarts in the toaster
The Celestial 01: you know this cats ill, dont fuck wit me
The Celestial 01: cuz youll get bucked with ease!!!!!!.....
.......The Celestial 01: ^^ Legends shit!!!
what is all that bull shit cant you just write like a normal person that shit was wack
doubs o0o se7en?? whata fag.
The Celestial 01... sounds like a big loser
you are no legend you suck balls
uppin for votes someone tell me honestly what they think and who won
lol,
1st up
2cn d
Holy god, that tool actually thought his verse was better. Looks like Menolin merked his ass without even trying. First off, white flame all you had was some shit about yourself and talkin about shitting on his mum. Mum punches are played as fuck and you wasted half your verse on the most played of them all. Menolin, nice drop but i dont think you were trying but it wasn't even needed. Some good punches and the structure was good. Dunno what the last bit was, kind of fell off at the end, maybe i just dont get it.
V/Menolin
Return the vote please.
i hate you capone you are a fucking son of a bitch
why cos he voted against you?
3rd up
-007 took this with ease to be honest
twf came nice but it wasnt a battlke
verse it was more an om...no real
punches...00 had a coo witty structure
with alot harder concepts more wit
and more punches.....so vote menolin
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Menolin, you came the best in this battle. I liked your opener but you seemed to fall off with you punches after that. Your second line was just bragging.
WhiteFlame, you came played and weak man, you need to elevate, woman and bussoms don't rhyme either.
v/Menolin,
Check out my battles, links in the sig
4th
drop a link an a fair vote
^^^http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150546
theres my link return the favor......
IIght well this battle was way one sided but what can you expect he was battling a noob......That thinks self glorification and mom jokes win battles. Menolin had better punches, structure, well better everything. The only word I can think of to break down what I think of White flames verse is ELEVATE.......well and becuz of the mom stuff your verse was played played played. Menolin had more witty rhymes that hit effectively so he gets my obvious vote.
v/Menolin
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