katie

[Shadowsk8er]

i cant believe my hears
every word that i hear
ive asked her out and would treat her right
she failed to see it see tha light
she said she likes them ghetto boys
but im the only ghetto person in this town.
if i make all that ghetto noise
why did she diss me for that clown
it seems like she chooses all my friends but me.
i cant even believe what i see.
its like a circle that surrounds my being.
shut my eyes to keep from seeing.
it hurts to know that she likes you
but wont date you just your friends
lost wondering what to do
hoping shell figure it out in the end.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Shadowsk8er]

what do u thinks above my pic. its in my sig so i dont have to keep fuckin with it lol.

[Johnny 6-feet]

a little basic. although the subject matter was brave. you need to up your vocab and start throwing in some imagery to bring your concepts to life. add multis to help with the flow.