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    Benedict
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    Shedding Misery Part 2.

    Part 1
    The dreams of the image you had once pictured in your mind
    As your imagination screams,trying to avoid strictured kinds
    Mankind can`t erase it,neither can your memory,dark as emery


    So you start to shed your misery,
    The pain goes and gains,
    Starting to rattle veins and brains go insane,



    Your mind has a little talk with the image asking why it appears,
    The image tells a riddle of a man being stabbed and has been dead for years
    The image and your mind have a scrimmage and your mind demolishes the frontiers


    Part 2
    Agony through the brain, it`s driving me insane as if I`m slain
    Anguish pumping into my veins,it`s strain that I can`t maintain
    Can`t undergo this strange misery,tis a mystery,it blisters me
    This twister must be supported by a transistor in some degree
    It keeps pounding me, till I crumble into debris, no longer an mc


    So you start to shed your misery,
    The pain goes and gains,
    Starting to rattle veins and brains go insane,



    People know to bestow me with hatred,in sorrow to straight dead
    They want me to bleed blood I`ve already bled,I can`t help but dread
    So I start to get emotional and curl to a ball,in the corner watch the rain fall
    Hoping, praying, my misery will be blown by squall, then my body stalls
    Like I`ve been entraled with a spell that I can`t recall,now I must call -
    FOR GOD





    -Benedict
    Last edited by Benedict; October 15th, 2004 at 07:44 AM

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    Benedict
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    Feed Back please.

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    Thanks man.

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