10 lines..
30 minute deadline..
Goodluck..
10 lines..
30 minute deadline..
Goodluck..
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This battle’s a waste of time, a waste of lines....
Voters cut your quotables, copy and paste mine....
Man, you garbage, and I mean it the worst...
How you gone be all polite and get mean on ya verse...
ThA pyromaniac kicking dirt at your debris the only cat to set McDonalds on fire proving that I burn Mc's to the third degree...
This kid must be some type of a stupid G putting my pictures next to a bunch of sheep claiming that he’s herd of me...
My shelf is composed of decomposed heads that opposed meds...
at I was tryin to feed em they refused to eat em so I just beat em...
Finish Line
I’m HOPING MY methods of HOLDING NINE weapons will be enough when it comes to VOTING TIME...
No SCOLDING MINE punches would put so many stitches on you that you can open up your own CLOTHING LINE...
Wins:
Losses:
KO's:
This battle’s a waste of time, a waste of lines....
Voters cut your quotables, copy and paste mine....
Man, you garbage, and I mean it the worst...
How you gone be all polite and get mean on ya verse...
ThA pyromaniac kicking dirt at your debris the only cat to set McDonalds on fire proving that I burn Mc's to the third degree...
This kid must be some type of a stupid G putting my pictures next to a bunch of sheep claiming that he’s herd of me...
Finish Line
I’m HOPING MY methods of HOLDING NINE weapons will be enough when it comes to VOTING TIME...
No SCOLDING MINE punches would put so many stitches on you that you can open up your own CLOTHING LINE...
Wins:
Losses:
KO's:
shit mah bad delete the second one plz
drop yo verse
Wins:
Losses:
KO's:
Punches I'm throwin through chests,, they smokin you best--
Wanted to make it through, n lost the moment you checked--
Your just 'mashed potatoes',, way I'm 'mushing your stuff'--
Like 'selling 4 leaf weed', you jus keep 'pushing your luck'--
I'm givin you rapid scars, hittin you with some savage bars--
Leaving you 'looking in more directions' than your 'avatar'--*
Your bars are like a 'good hand in poker', Ti's 'playin em''--
Only thing 'hard' about ya is your fuckin name, 'Titanium'--**
Look kid, you tried to hit me with 'ice' but I just 'crushed it'--
Throw ya 'hands out when I spit', you still can't 'touch diss'--
Uppin #1........................................^^
This battle’s a waste of time, a waste of lines....
Voters cut your quotables, copy and paste mine....
- weak start
Man, you garbage, and I mean it the worst...
How you gone be all polite and get mean on ya verse...
-iiight
ThA pyromaniac kicking dirt at your debris the only cat to set McDonalds on fire proving that I burn Mc's to the third degree...
-tooo stretched, u didnt need 'To the third degree' it woulda been hotter w/o it
This kid must be some type of a stupid G putting my pictures next to a bunch of sheep claiming that he’s herd of me...
- kinda weak punch
My shelf is composed of decomposed heads that opposed meds...
at I was tryin to feed em they refused to eat em so I just beat em...
weak
I’m HOPING MY methods of HOLDING NINE weapons will be enough when it comes to VOTING TIME...
No SCOLDING MINE punches would put so many stitches on you that you can open up your own CLOTHING LINE...
-nice metas, ok finish
Punches I'm throwin through chests,, they smokin you best--
Wanted to make it through, n lost the moment you checked--
-weak opener
Your just 'mashed potatoes',, way I'm 'mushing your stuff'--
Like 'selling 4 leaf weed', you jus keep 'pushing your luck'--
-ok
I'm givin you rapid scars, hittin you with some savage bars--
Leaving you 'looking in more directions' than your 'avatar'--*
-nice personal
Your bars are like a 'good hand in poker', Ti's 'playin em''--
Only thing 'hard' about ya is your fuckin name, 'Titanium'--**
-nice setup but jus an ok personal
Look kid, you tried to hit me with 'ice' but I just 'crushed it'--
Throw ya 'hands out when I spit', you still can't 'touch diss'--
-Weak finisher
VOTE: TALKSICK, he had an overall better verse, but jus by a little, a mediocre battle, but it was close
Artificial Intelligence
Make sure to return the fava, i need one more vote in my lil tra battle, and the other one was kinda an easy one, oh yea, wassup wit the rematch talksick, get at me, anywayz vote in my battles please
Artificial Intelligence
Uppin VOtes ya'll common
Wins:
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KO's:
Uppin #2........................................^^
Easy win for talksick in my opinion, good punches and nice personals. Good structure and the flow was good. Quite a nice verse. Titanium, average verse except for the multies, decent punches and weak parsonals but it was structured pretty badly. The 3rd bar was a bit streched but your other lines were allright. My vote goes to talksick cos he had a better verse in my opinion and i found some of his lines funny, the avatar one and vanilla ice one were my favourites. Nothin really stood out from titaniums verse but all lines were decent.
Vote/Talksick
Give an honest vote in one of my battles please.
Uppin #3........................................^^
aight,
Titanium, i thought ya verse was okay...but there werent any personals n the punches were kinda played....n u need to work on ya structure a lil, some lines were too stretched...but overall, u came aight
Talksick, ya verse was straight...u managed to throw in a personal in there, which came out aight, n ya punches were coo, but still coulda been better...n like someone else said, the closer wasnt that great, but still, u came strong overall....
V/ Talksick, fo mo creativity n better structure...
i need an honest n detailed vote here:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=148295&page=2