SuP JAY COCK....(JAY DOT freestyle diss )

[BeRLin`S BesT]

A finger, a hand, a gat in the palm
A hat on my head, it’s happen to storm
Ya rappin’ is calm, u could never shake a ant
U not a friend so when we shake, I brake ya hand
U as fake as men in dresses, u cross dressin’, don’t forget ya vest
It’s not aftermath but after dead u’ll be restless
I dig out ya casket n undress ya chest kid
Steel ya lung n leave u breathless…
BesT cuts ya tits off, leave u breast-less
Believe u left kid, u ain’t got the right to be right
Seems like ya mind ain’t too bright
u don’t get what’s meant by admiring guys
it means to idolize….first u bitch…now u trying to hide
tight?…man I’m trying to find…a piece of ya work
some steez or a word…even asked ya mom about it
but she just gave me a piece of ya shirt….n said that’s all
described u as three feet tall…and added looser
so u’s a plastic bitch abuser…who choose ta hate
but wait…before u let that set in ya brain
I’ll get u insane…yep…step in ya head…shit on ya brain
Shit on ya lawn…clappin’ this cat…bitch u is gone
Like N’Sync…I spin-kick like I’m spawn
U Torn like Nataly Imbruglia…I’m trough wit cha
Cat…man it’s the NET…get it clear…I’m not Elliot Ness
I’m BeRLin’ S BesT but Jay get this here….
Pump ya brakes Baby…U don’t know who u fuckin’ with…..



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150248

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150253

[.fame.]

I Thought This Was Aight.. Average At Best.. You Had Some Wordplay, But It Was Lacking In Creativity.. Keep Writing And Working On Your Flow And Vocab, And Im Sure You'll Improve..

[BeRLin`S BesT]

thx for the feed...bet u would think higher of it with the backround info but that's coo...pz

[.fame.]

Prolly.. Clue Me In..
And Reply To My Ish..

[BeRLin`S BesT]

I will, well he started beefin' for no reason...posted some shit it my crew collab ish...just a douchebag...anyway this was keyed up so it's ok...pz

[JAY DOT.]

hahaha.....i just seen this.

sorry but im not gonna respond with nothing yet, post this up in battles and we can do it there.

[menolin]

even if this was an audio freestyle it was pretty wack.

steal ya lung an leave ya breathless

old, played wack.

BesT cuts ya tits off, leave u breast-less

killed it, best line you had.

elevate, played punches in freestyles are ok, but you can come up with better ways to word them.

[Chrit.]

This was horrid.

[Tim]

**throws up on keyboard**

[BeRLin`S BesT]

bunch o funny guys bu that's ok...i guess i gotaa live with stupid ass comments...pz

[JAY DOT.]

haha, Berlin's Best your getting ripped and I didn't even respond back with a verse.
Save yourself and say I own you and the beef is over.

[menolin]

it was very wack though, people are being honest

[BeRLin`S BesT]

man like I said I haven't seen any of ur work...so I come to think that u must really suck and are only here to talk trash...why don't u set that shit up in battles n we see who's the victim....pz

[JAY DOT.]

i dont have credits to set battles up

[menolin]

was u talking to me then?