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MuSick
10-20 lines
no bullshit
deadline: anytime within reason, I'll try an do mine within the next hour or so if I got time
topic:
Ur leaving the court house after losing custody of ur kids. Ur ex-wife lied and claimed u were an alcoholic, this was what ultimately lost u the case. As u get in ur car u see ur two kids with ur ex-wife hand-in-hand with her younger richer new boyfriend and potential new father of ur kids, crossing the road to his brand new Merc, what do u do? what are u feeling? etc
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check checkOriginally Posted by MuSick
sorry but 20 lines is too short, so i'm taking it to 20-40 lines... and i'll drop now still
yo yo
mistakes made, face changed
mindless rage like a furious gage
my actions like a pistol impregnated trigga page
buss like seamons the expediential trigga rage
mission in life just classed down, when the judge frowned
and smacked down, the stick of fury, judge and jury
tried to end my life in a hurry, crutial point of my past present future
my kids look into my eyes hands in hand with the man blinging like Madonna in spot lights kissing Britney with love deep down where it lies,
dry cries like sizzla, no more
I quote the raven, never more
Heart melted and poured over the pavement
My ex wife’s smile crushed my soul with blood dripping down the sewage hole
Cold like my skin exposed to the winter breeze, on my bended kness with my winter plead, Like the boy asking santa for jackfrost to breath,
I’m asking God for one more chance to redeem
My life appeal, to eat mcdonalds happy meal with my daughter Ceceal
Johnius becoming strong like G strings and thongs
Remembering the time during offspring he kicked his mother
Birth control never mattered, shattered records with the screams in the hospitals
Broke through metals, he was a happy little fello, hello
Niggaz get down and write poems to touch babie girl’s frown
She my sunshine when the stormy weathers appear in town
My rain when the heat rays tortures my very smile
Like a fist to your man, I’m taking you back by my heart force
Distorted family ain’t what you living for
Got remarried quiker than Maurice green running for gold
Changed in everyway, God’s name in every memory lane,
My love for you shouting louder than a choo choo train,
Ever since I got my wife back, my kids got their smile back
Relax with two jobs giving my girl a massage of riches and riches I never lack
Once was a divorce now jus a phase in the past
very sorry, but couldnt get on for a while
Im gonna drop somethin before I get off tonight
sorry again
its ok, don't worry... i'm not like other people, i know people got lives other than rap battles
cool
‘This is BULLSHIT’
My wife turns her head hearing my familiar voice
The courts made their decision but that bitch affected their choice
I start walking towards that fucker I don’t give a…
She calls out with that smug face, ‘Hows yu liver’
Im runnin at her but the bitch is getting in the car
They speed of but she don’t live far
Outside her house that used to be our home
My aim to reach my destination turns to a desire to roam
What happens next? I say to myself without an answer
Im vexed but my anger towards her seems to have had a transfer
Looking at the door I fade into obscurity
Bought back to reality when I see the rich kids security
Im madder at myself for bein on business when I knew we would suffer
Not knowing that what the kids missed she’d replace with another
Im not scared of his heavies but fightin thems a gamble
I may win may lose, but whatever way Im not settin an example
The legal system says the kids belong with their mother full stop
Im not seen to love my kids like a father does, Im just a cock
A cock to impregnate women, with no feelings just a sperm holder
This is just another piece of paper in a ‘case closed’ folder
Not capable of love, Men have given fathers a bad name
Men aint saints, but equality says men and woman are just the same
Maybe one day this prejudice will go away
Until then, this will happen again and again and again…
upppp
very close battle.. but i got to go with musick.... just like the flow better.. not hate
hit-it-up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=150895
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