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Young B.E.
menolin
10 lines
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drop within the hour
He was pussy, now he mustard/
You a sweet boy? cookie cake type/
Marang and lemon custard/
I'm starving so let me grab this knife and get
me a slice of menolin pie/
Guy, how you figure you can hang wit this nigga, huh?/
I'm the newbie to the club, wit rhymes that'll sweep your lil'
verse under the rug/
you dust- so you just stand back and read it then weep/
And send your girl to my house cause thats the only way you'll
ever have me beat/
I'm merderous, crazy and insane, plus i work while you sleep/
And i'm done you punk ass boi, I gotta go eat/
names young so's vocab... but his punches are old,
for every line he got.. its the same concept re-told,
im the best in real life, so fuck your online dreams,
^literally
told him to punch... and he threw his fist at the screen,
beat you with double means, and bring you down a peg,
you couldn't stand a chance.... with a pair of legs,
don't test me, so drop weak because when i try,
i throw one punch, and make at least a family cry,
you need charity, now i close it with closer,
you only 'free-style' fresh....
.............with second hand clothes on*,
*free,-style, charity shops.
get it?
Sorry but menolin got this one
Dat was some funny shit
drop an honest vote and a link
up numero une
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V/ Menolin
its obvious he wins...he had a better overall verse with less
played lines and more creative...young i didnt like your verse
at all..you lacked in punches and you just came pure sucky..
sorry to say but you need to elevate.
return the favor...i took the time you should too.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...44#post1730544
thank you.
pz
Okay the "fist hit the screen" punch was funny as hell! And my vote goes to Menolin cause young's punches were kinda used up.
Imperial1
2cnd up
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yo, i think menolin got this one...Young's punches were played n his structure was....pretty fuckin atrocious....while Menolin's verse was good overall...i dont think i need to explain myself further...
V/ Menolin
i would appreciate an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=148295&page=2
i'll hit the links when i get back home from college.
3rd up
drop a fair lin an a vote
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aight
Young BE
The Good- ...
The Bad- structure was horrendous, punchlines didnt hit hard at all
The Ugly- "And i'm done you punk ass boi, i gotta go eat" <prolly the worst closer ever...
Menolin
The Good- punchlines hit hard, better structure
The Bad- wasnt feelin the closer either...
The Ugly- ...
V/ Menolin, cuz of a better overall verse n mo creativity
^lmao, fuck...my bad, i already voted on this shit....
lol
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menolin wins this easily.. much harder punches, came better overall.. much less played then Young B.E. Young you lacked in ya punch quality.. they werent that hard, and werent really hitting.. Menolin was more creative with his hits.. and for that they were much harder hitting and more effective..
V/ Menolin
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