Shedding Misery

[Benedict]

The dreams of the image you had once pictured in your mind
As your imagination screams,trying to avoid strictured kinds
Mankind can`t erase it,neither can your memory,dark as emery


So you start to shed your misery,
The pain goes and gains,
Starting to rattle veins and brains go insane,


Your mind has a little talk with the image asking why it appears,
The image tells a riddle of a man being stabbed and has been dead for years
The image and your mind have a scrimmage and your mind demolishes the frontiers


Poem for the return of Unknown Skillz

[Poetic Vagrant]

This was a nice little piece. I like the structure. I kinda wanted to get a little more out of this. Seemed kind of unfinished. Nice use of vocab.

[Benedict]

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