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    Word is Bond Sublime D's Avatar
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    Nature

    a melding of physical glory
    eternal tale of the human story
    rapturous bliss akin to happiness
    only relief from the mental abyss
    closest expirience for man of God
    ephemeral break from life's facade
    spirit, body, and mind intertwined
    every thought of all falls behind
    demuring to the call of the divine
    transcendent joy, objective prime
    blessed action beyond space or time
    primal attraction innundates the mind
    mental distraction, selfish love, be mine
    my enjoyment ranks above yours in line
    you wretched whore, i implore your resources
    to flourish and fill me gorishly, while i bore through thee
    my sword is never sheathed, until you're completely devoid of energy
    bow to me, fall down to your knees, pleasure me, but you shall never suceed
    insatiable, i am, i am man, you are the scarifice, you are my lamb, at my command
    i dam your waters, take down your herds in slaughters, bastardizing your products,
    your suns and your daughters, your trees and leaves, synthesizing any of these
    sympathizing not with your needs, taking more than i need to eat or breathe
    die, wretched bitch, i love to rape thee, and how you berate me
    and think that you can escape me...flooding and quaking
    but only yourself are you breaking, quit faking
    i see your skin, it's increasingly flaking
    i see your kin, mine for the taking
    not until we're through
    i shall remain true
    mother nature..
    I hate you...


    this was my rhetorical insight's piece a few weeks ago...it's based on a picture...you can go there to check the pic...ill post links soon...
    Last edited by Sublime D; October 9th, 2004 at 10:26 PM
    Bittersweet

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    First Off, That structure made my eyes weary. But it looks good, i will give you that. It Flows Very well, Very strong and good message behind this piece. If this is what I have oin store for the future or reading from this site, I am very satisfied. 8/10

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