10 to 15 lines
no d/r
no biting
no recycl
do a blind spitt who ever finish first just post
due in 30
10 to 15 lines
no d/r
no biting
no recycl
do a blind spitt who ever finish first just post
due in 30
king tissle hires a assassin to kill you my next target.
cut up your funny bone and sell it on the black market.
make yo dumbass my one and only stupid lyrical jester.
dont make me laugh then youll blow up like uncle fester.
your cusins ronold mc donold,your dad bozo tha clown.
they call you the joka fo wack rhymes and your dunce crown.
you too dried up and cant find the lyrical oasis.
and build up your rep like they do on trading spaces.
take up comedy make alot of money cause its demanding.
but yo ass wont last a minute on last comic standing.
i mean shadow dragon onthe first line king tissle is my other rap nameOriginally Posted by shadow dragon
checkin in
wtf is a dragon doin in shadows wut is flame disposed
ill light ya verse up fa ya wit no problem cuzz i kno ur comotose
you aint no shadow i see ur punches comin like there was light
keepin em in tha spotlight i kno u wont make it close or past flyweight
u juss mad cuzz im makin it ive been a king since u were born
you kno i am cuzz when i spit itll leave ya punk ass scorn
now come on whos a bigga nigga not u ur barely house broken
how u gon take me wit out that dick in ur mouff wut r u chokin(has no dick 2 suck)
get my point across no real punches u aint worth that effort
and beat ya liek King Arthur destroy u kno u aint shit muh fucka
homie fuckin bacc up i treat ya like a pimp but get slapped
I have teh dragon panickin cuzz my lines have'em water trapped
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
wow
Joka stop playing wit the kids...
Dragon-Punches very light not hard,Structure good,Flow itte,Word play good,
Joka-Punches alil hard,Structure Great,Flow on point,Word play great,
U won this by a mile
Dragon Bline-take up comedy make alot of money cause its demanding.
but yo ass wont last a minute on last comic standing.
Joka Bline-now come on whos a bigga nigga not u ur barely house broken
how u gon take me wit out that dick in ur mouff wut r u chokin
itte battle but
V/joka
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now drop a honest vote at 1 of my battles in my sig
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yea man ps never do a battle wit Cam'ron beats aiight anyways lets get soem vote sin herre.
uppin fa votes
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
sitll uppin on this shit yo
yo still uppin on this still need the win yall
yo vote on this shit damn
uppin this i need it closed
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
JOKA
wtf is a dragon doin in shadows wut is flame disposed
ill light ya verse up fa ya wit no problem cuzz i kno ur comotose
GREAT OPENER, PERSONAL
you aint no shadow i see ur punches comin like there was light
keepin em in tha spotlight i kno u wont make it close or past flyweight
NICE
u juss mad cuzz im makin it ive been a king since u were born
you kno i am cuzz when i spit itll leave ya punk ass scorn
OK
now come on whos a bigga nigga not u ur barely house broken
how u gon take me wit out that dick in ur mouff wut r u chokin(has no dick 2 suck)
NA
get my point across no real punches u aint worth that effort
and beat ya liek King Arthur destroy u kno u aint shit muh fucka
OK
homie fuckin bacc up i treat ya like a pimp but get slapped
I have teh dragon panickin cuzz my lines have'em water trapped
NICE, LIKIN IT
king tissle hires a assassin to kill you my next target.
cut up your funny bone and sell it on the black market.
make yo dumbass my one and only stupid lyrical jester.
dont make me laugh then youll blow up like uncle fester.
your cusins ronold mc donold,your dad bozo tha clown.
they call you the joka fo wack rhymes and your dunce crown.
you too dried up and cant find the lyrical oasis.
and build up your rep like they do on trading spaces.
take up comedy make alot of money cause its demanding.
but yo ass wont last a minute on last comic standing.
OBVIOUSLY PRE-WRITTEN. CAN TELL BECAUSE YOU HAD TO EDIT TO PUT YA NAME IN IT. ROFL
Tha-joka gets my vote.
hit me up vs onesmallstep
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=161682
Aight both verse were good.
Tha-Joka had good punches, wordplay and rhymes and good vocab
Shadow you had some good punches also and some wordplay could work on it a bith though.
Overall i was feeling Tha-Jokas More
V/ Tha-Joka
damn, thats a dumb question for a poll. or maybe im just dumb. Can a mod change that vote please to tha-joka. sorry
safe........its obvious who won here....dragon just got outclassed......its plain n simple.....tha joka...good finisher.....couldve done more to hurt him tho.....my votes to joka......hit my link....
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