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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    bombarding the rhyme scheme

    the day ur style develops u would of matured to a fetus-
    u the m.c. with no lyrical sight so you'll never see us.
    everything comes at a fee-thats what that fact is-
    even these frees here cost u career wages like back taxes.
    and i dare yall to say something dissing the kid-
    when ur hardest rapper wont breath my name in his adlibs
    for the mic fiends im give them there fix-
    kill u before in a metaphor then murder u on the remix.
    i dont care and never have-son u like ur dad-
    no better yet the m.c. hotter then baghded
    will blaze u next time u rhyme ull be in my shadow taking a sun bath.
    and i master the craft u about as cheesy as kraft-
    i present a comical delivery back slap with raps im shaft-
    so presently im no joke but ur future is making the crowd laugh-
    loud gasps- im the rapper u cant handle with tiatnium clasps.
    as soon as the bell rings i bring verbs and words to sum up everything-
    im about to CRAMP R STYLE PERIOD-u Can tell by my mood swings.
    and i amass the lyrical mass and brain waves so vast when i spit this fast-
    colliding with me- is like a car crash going mach speeds-
    im the only m.c. with ideas serging so quick i catch nose bleeds.
    the only thoughts u leak out is smoking wet to the mouth-
    wrap a dollar to my dick since u ride on the money route.
    and most of u think ur cute with ur 3 peace suite-
    ill hit u with a 3 peace and break ur back obtuse-
    these vaginal m.c. ill rip u pussies loose -
    and like recycled ovaries ur garbage with everything u u produce-
    wonder why i didnt diss before heres my excuse
    if i cant say nothing nice then i stay quiet so play my cd on mute.
    unvail the truth?ur girls a skank-on crank-
    for the doe she'll let even ur pops spank.
    thats not it,.... here's some shit.......
    all of ur groupies are pranks-girls that use to be guys named frank.
    im just trying to be phrank-i appeal to bros with what i got in the think tank-
    even got hoes taking samples of the way i bust flows to the sperm bank.
    u got no game a netcee but has no aim and its a shame that these lames-
    diss so i take a poloroid so they can picture a loss before i rip u out the frame.
    and u aint got a prayer at being a player-rhyme sayers-
    think the funk is something u drown in cologmne and life savors.
    uttering stuttering blunders get subjected to my hunger...
    but with ur rapheal sadeeq physique-
    looking like the cast for dawson creek-
    its no wonder ur days are numbered to expose ur week.
    when i reach the peak of my life im gonna takes my close off-
    pullout and piss the world off.
    and the basis is ur as ghetto as gpc and basics-
    these tastless wanaa bs' dont see my rhymes confuse minds like a self loathing racist.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147595
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147605
    Last edited by noncentz; September 24th, 2004 at 05:29 PM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    fuck i like dthis too
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    your flow was decent... but your punches were pretty bland, and it was a little drawn out..
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    How U Figure Freind I Need The Harsh Truth Inorder To Elivate
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    aight I read half of it earlier n the rest now....punches were above average...some witty ideas...but as elmo said the flow seemed kinda off here and there gotta admit that it's hard to keep a steady flow over such a long piece...well composed...return da favor...pz
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    im wonndering what elmo ment as far as bland punchlines i reread this and saw much more then typical attacks i wonder if he understood the punches and BERLIN im going to ur post now and will critique it i promice
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    i see my lines clearly and i dont see blandness [please tell i need to know what u ment
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    1st line was supa...would've liked tha whole thing if I read it am sure of it...but shyt too long!!

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    thank you still
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    anyone else before i remove this
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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