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usual rules, you should know them by now!!
1 hour time limit
checkin in
stick to topicals.. but your true talent holds in quitting,
so don't play yourself...... shit stop the spitting,
i read through your battles... illest lines always the same,
"checking in" your posts after that.. seem to be lame,
drop played.... but it only damaging one of our health,
claim to be a ledge'end.. but stuck on the end of the shelf,
i touch this fuck.. give him the word 'rape' to shout,
kid pushed his luck.. and it got up and knocked him out,
kid gon step to me, shit i gotta another win to collect,
before you entered this thread....
......you was beat by your own rep
Ya rhymes will neva b 'hot',so stop drinkin all that 'sauce',
Ya flow's 'played',its just not in ya blood,so..meno'pause',
Funny how if this 'grim reaper' touched me,he'd die instead,
N its not proof dat ya numba 1,if u wrote it all ova ya head,
No-lin,u won't win,ya just food dat i want off of my men-u,
Crackbaby was born while ya mom had a 'period',so u a 'hindu',
Add a P in ya super,and this flyweight will remain as food,
A'round' here your 'soft',no matter how bad is ya a'tit'tude,
Thinkin u wouldn't get 'ice'd,now u regret it like titanic bein departed,
Fuck ya 'bitter' rhymes,your just men-tally re'tart'ed,
1st up drop a link
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[font=Georgia]this was a pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to Menolin
this was very close though
Menolin
stick to topicals.. but your true talent holds in quitting,
so don't play yourself...... shit stop the spitting,
hot opener...
i read through your battles... illest lines always the same,
"checking in" your posts after that.. seem to be lame,
lol decent..could have been worded alittle better
drop played.... but it only damaging one of our health,
claim to be a ledge'end.. but stuck on the end of the shelf,
nice
i touch this fuck.. give him the word 'rape' to shout,
kid pushed his luck.. and it got up and knocked him out,
not really feelin this
kid gon step to me, shit i gotta another win to collect,
before you entered this thread....
......you was beat by your own rep
decent closer
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the mc
Ya rhymes will neva b 'hot',so stop drinkin all that 'sauce',
Ya flow's 'played',its just not in ya blood,so..meno'pause',
lmao.. nice opener
Funny how if this 'grim reaper' touched me,he'd die instead,
N its not proof dat ya numba 1,if u wrote it all ova ya head,
not really feelin this
No-lin,u won't win,ya just food dat i want off of my men-u,
Crackbaby was born while ya mom had a 'period',so u a 'hindu',
decent
Add a P in ya super,and this flyweight will remain as food,
A'round' here your 'soft',no matter how bad is ya a'tit'tude,
decent
Thinkin u wouldn't get 'ice'd,now u regret it like titanic bein departed,
Fuck ya 'bitter' rhymes,your just men-tally re'tart'ed,
lol nice ..closer
very close to choose but ima have to hand this one to the Mc
no hate
please return the favor in the link in my sig thankz
man nice battle its still kinda one sided
punches/the mc
structure/teh mc
flow/the mc
personals/The Mc
no hate juss the mc came alot harder by playin u of ur name
please return the favor by votin on my other battles
Life Is 10% What Happens To You;
90% How You React To It.
lol@the voting
2cnd up
drop a fair vote and a link
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menolin...
stick to topicals.. but your true talent holds in quitting,
so don't play yourself...... shit stop the spitting,
could of been better
i read through your battles... illest lines always the same,
"checking in" your posts after that.. seem to be lame,
lol...
drop played.... but it only damaging one of our health,
claim to be a ledge'end.. but stuck on the end of the shelf,
lol...
i touch this fuck.. give him the word 'rape' to shout,
kid pushed his luck.. and it got up and knocked him out,
lmao...i kind of pictured this...funny shit
kid gon step to me, shit i gotta another win to collect,
before you entered this thread....
......you was beat by your own rep
decent
The MC...
Ya rhymes will neva b 'hot',so stop drinkin all that 'sauce',
Ya flow's 'played',its just not in ya blood,so..meno'pause',
nah...
Funny how if this 'grim reaper' touched me,he'd die instead,
N its not proof dat ya numba 1,if u wrote it all ova ya head,
not feelin it.
No-lin,u won't win,ya just food dat i want off of my men-u,
Crackbaby was born while ya mom had a 'period',so u a 'hindu',
punch was nice but could of been better...concept/setup was wack
Add a P in ya super,and this flyweight will remain as food,
A'round' here your 'soft',no matter how bad is ya a'tit'tude,
nope...
Thinkin u wouldn't get 'ice'd,now u regret it like titanic bein departed,
Fuck ya 'bitter' rhymes,your just men-tally re'tart'ed,
wack...
blah, this is an easy win for menolin, The MC wtf was this? i seen you
come better then this, i dont know if you just lacked it or just tired or
whatever...menolin had some nice lines i was def feelin and made me
laugh, like the luck line...shits funny...heard it before though, menolin
had some old concepts and funny punches but still wins for coming harder
and having a better verse then The MC.
V/ menolin
aight, decent battle both had pretty nice wordplay but the MCs wuz better
liked menolins flow betta, but da punches didnt hit as hard as the MCs
didnt really c any actual personal so dont kno bout that, n as far as structure goes
they were about da same 2 me
vote-The MC
"i touch this fuck.. give him the word 'rape' to shout,
kid pushed his luck.. and it got up and knocked him out,"
Illest line of the battle. The rest of Men's verse was average or ass. MC's first couplet was aight, but should have been worded better. The wordplay was too redundant and horribly done, so the rest of the verse was ass. Men, clearly, got this with more wit.
Vote: Menoline.
My Battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6&page=1&pp=15
-W1
Hence Forward
axis powers
stick to topicals.. but your true talent holds in quitting,
so don't play yourself...... shit stop the spitting,
gay opener.. very played.
i read through your battles... illest lines always the same,
"checking in" your posts after that.. seem to be lame,
didn't really get this to be honest.
drop played.... but it only damaging one of our health,
claim to be a ledge'end.. but stuck on the end of the shelf,
badly worded.. legend lines are old now.
i touch this fuck.. give him the word 'rape' to shout,
kid pushed his luck.. and it got up and knocked him out,
dopest line yet.. funny.
kid gon step to me, shit i gotta another win to collect,
before you entered this thread....
......you was beat by your own rep
wack closer.. played concept.
Ya rhymes will neva b 'hot',so stop drinkin all that 'sauce',
Ya flow's 'played',its just not in ya blood,so..meno'pause',
no no no.. seriously disgusting attempt at a sex line.
Funny how if this 'grim reaper' touched me,he'd die instead,
N its not proof dat ya numba 1,if u wrote it all ova ya head,
bad attempt at an avvy personal.. didn't punch.
No-lin,u won't win,ya just food dat i want off of my men-u,
Crackbaby was born while ya mom had a 'period',so u a 'hindu',
wtf? didn't get it.
Add a P in ya super,and this flyweight will remain as food,
A'round' here your 'soft',no matter how bad is ya a'tit'tude,
please don't attempt wordplay.. ever.
Thinkin u wouldn't get 'ice'd,now u regret it like titanic bein departed,
Fuck ya 'bitter' rhymes,your just men-tally re'tart'ed,
die slowly.
worse verse i'v ever seen from menolin.. still pissed all over mc.. not a single punch from mc was fresh or effective.. menolin wins on that one decent bar alone..
v/ menolin
hit up the akwai tance link in my sig please.
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drop a fair vote and a link
one of us will hit it up if not 2
3 rd up
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menolin
stick to topicals.. but your true talent holds in quitting,
so don't play yourself...... shit stop the spitting,
didn't like this line
i read through your battles... illest lines always the same,
"checking in" your posts after that.. seem to be lame,
decent personal
drop played.... but it only damaging one of our health,
claim to be a ledge'end.. but stuck on the end of the shelf,
lol.. this made me laugh
i touch this fuck.. give him the word 'rape' to shout,
kid pushed his luck.. and it got up and knocked him out,
1st line, nice comeback, 2nd line, nice punch
kid gon step to me, shit i gotta another win to collect,
before you entered this thread....
......you was beat by your own rep
nice closer
The MC
Ya rhymes will neva b 'hot',so stop drinkin all that 'sauce',
Ya flow's 'played',its just not in ya blood,so..meno'pause',
1st line played, 2nd line.... i was feeling it
Funny how if this 'grim reaper' touched me,he'd die instead,
N its not proof dat ya numba 1,if u wrote it all ova ya head,
1st line is played, 2nd is wtf?
No-lin,u won't win,ya just food dat i want off of my men-u,
Crackbaby was born while ya mom had a 'period',so u a 'hindu',
took me ages to get this one... couldv'e been worded better
Add a P in ya super,and this flyweight will remain as food,
A'round' here your 'soft',no matter how bad is ya a'tit'tude,
No.
Thinkin u wouldn't get 'ice'd,now u regret it like titanic bein departed,
Fuck ya 'bitter' rhymes,your just men-tally re'tart'ed,
1st line was an okay punch, 2nd was better
I think Menolin took this, on the nice personal, the better wordplay and the good comeback to MC's line.
Link's in the sig, fair votes plz.
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