Mondo Thugz Collab (Tim C. and Still_Remain)

[Incineratedrose]

"Thoughts of an old cell"

Cold in sweat, under the influence of loneliness
with drawbacks on how I could've provoked this mess
& be free to live old instead, due to all the coke I've spread
King pins found dead, not even good behavior'll get me home in less
don’t show it, but stressed...wishing to backtrack, asap
to substitute the street product with books in my back pack
but that's that, cuz I killed every single chance had
& now the nerdy kids I picked-on are having the last laugh
the once, bad ass...stuck behind these walls, living a fall
& only stuff I've had, is all in the mind & in the grip of my palmhad witnessed it all…to just this cage reading away, feeding my brain
victims laid, snitches in graves, my only wisdom is cane
but what chances do I’ve got now at ‘85 years of age


I’m 85 years old, tears cold, and don’t be mistaken,
My bones are achin, my life, will soon be taken,
By God, the savior, it’ll be my time soon to go,
So I try to stay on track and praise him though-
All of the tears that have streamed from my eyes,
I finally realize, that it’s with him where my heart lies,
So I pray to the father, son, and the Holy Ghost,
Hoping my soul finds you above all and most-
Of all, bring my family too, we all pray to you,
And hope that you take us together, blinded by truth,
And all the demons & temptations in the world,
Please protect her from them all, my little girl,
She is what I pass on, the gift from me and my wife,
Because in our eyes, the purpose of livin’ was to give life,
I ask for forgiveness for turning away when I needed a hand,
You are my backbone God, and without you I can hardly stand,
I know I don’t act like it sometime, and it tears us apart,
But here I stand true, speaking sincerely from my heart,
You are then when its dark, to brighten my day, with a bright ray-
Of light, my time is soon; I grip this bible, and get on my knees and pray

Tim Corleone-Black
Still_Remain-Dark Red


(links)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...57#post1703457
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...67#post1703467

[Endeva.]

thought it was a god collab, kept me reading..... Tims verse brought a smoother transition, yet still brought a smoother flow in the bars.... different styles going together well..... still i liked your ending, but you fucked up the flow with the stretched bar.... but yeah a good colab...' id do better tho.. '

[Incineratedrose]

lol... look just cuz i own you doesnt mean... that..ii own you...