Championship: Mr W.Rite vs. Feeble Minded

[Richard Parker]

26-40 lines. due Friday, 11:59 PM eastern time. check in by wednesday. winner goes away with the Gold, and wins season one of LLL. g/l

[Mr W.Rite]

hey feebie


i can manage 34 i guess...

[Richard Parker]

^ 34

edit: cool i was trying too talk to you on aim about line limit, it just seems right for championships to be longer.

[Richard Parker]

ok ,mr write has company and his power's been on & off all night he says. so i will grant him an extension IF he cannot show tonight. in that case i will check tomorrow morning to see if he's posted & post my verse then, if he hasnt i'll be back sunday night. so lets get this done.

[Mr W.Rite]

Ya prepped hard I’m goin 40...but here comes the best part
Figured I’d spot him four lines to give him a head start
.
.
.
.
It’s a fight to the finish, he’ll be catchin left hooks…and right jabs
And I’ll be sendin him home packin….his face with ice bags
You’re fucked…W.Rite’s mad…get another dude to replace him
Now I’m ready for Action…cus that’s who I shoulda been facin
Pleaded to save’em…needs the net to keep him on the right track
Got demodded…then asked me to help him get his life back
Rode me to get here…im’ the shit bro, he’ll do anything to get close
In fact my head can’t get any bigger…w/o making the bitch choke
It was destined to happen…if I were u I wouldn’t invest in this faggot
He’ll hide behinds his looks, with a lock on his medicine cabinet
I beg the question, who are you? But its his rep that beckons
He’s the first, last and only to nominate his self in legends
Come your hardest…you’ll still lose I’ll put ya prayers to rest
If I came half ass
Its cus Nique almost beat u and she was barely dressed
Speaking of Nique, ya flows the same…i’m just stating the facts how
He took her style, not just text….but her dress with the back out
Leaves the text scene a loser…and knowing he’ll place second
And lives in the same box…we used for his going away present
DM don’t need you …get to stepping and leave the rest to us
Held out his hand and I gave him five…quarters to catch the bus
are u a mess or what...mistaken to think this cat can touch me
He’ll lose here…but first to win an Oscar for acting ugly
Sex lifes in question...nothing to hide except this bitch is gay
If his walls could talk...they still wouldn’t have shit to say
Cant explain the loss well.....so I’ll give him the best reason
U didnt lose the final...you just got a rough start for next season
Feeble takes over the league and the good heads upped and left
Beat u and become legend... this is how Evolve must’ve felt
This dude’s a bum...a lazy fuck, so tell me why would I care
And the word on the street is.....that you still reside there
RB hates this fag...but he thinks he’ll make the best, believers
Switched names moved to RM but don’t get respect there either
Get you aim list for votes...knew u weren’t who u claim to be
Bitch im facin u this week...WHY THE FUCK ARE U AIMIN ME
fuck it im’ spent...I cant believe I took a shit on my rival
we’ll even exchange, I’ll give you the L, u just give me the title
Start all the bitchin and whining...how can u be proud of this shit
Six million ways to die and still managed to go out like a bitch

[Richard Parker]

im nicer than you... this bitch is just a fool in disguise
that verse looked so much like a novel you'll win the pulitzer prize
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
i bring fire at haters, u stole my style, u better admire creators ..
only speak if u have sumthin good to say, explains why he's quiet by nature
he's never one to post in threads, still people hype this loner
so when u walked off with the win, how'd u distract the rightful owner
all u have is dr's, u cant compete, its your fault stepping man
ur verses make for a smaller magazine than the assault weapons ban
your anti-social here, and i run cross country but fuck it dude
ur so fast u ditched ur efforts to win & they cant catch up to you
LLL over-rates you.. the course your heading's deception
thats only cuz you're the best man..... at a wedding reception
u act like your a fan of the truth, and you aint the man to accuse
u told me u flip lines, i see ur d/rs now as they chant an excuse

so you thought I was wack? and that I cant key sickness?
bitch, ill stomp a mudhole in your ass and plant trees in it - Pav
just saw this at another site
his > W.Rite's

i got the win securely, ya spittin poorly & finished surely,
i don't have to put you under siege, wise ways did it for me..
u wished for glory, HW title.. back when me & K largo had had it
write wants to trade styles so much i put an embargo on fabric..
im tired & the evenings thru, give me a reason to be beating you
maybe you'll take the belt, after all i aint signing up for season two
i'll whore this fag, crack on this kid.. a meek dreaming user
cuz write gets put down more than a weak team of movers
i heard that winners circle line of urs, so many bitches hating when
they can only flip lines, you've moved on to manipulating them
you needed revenge, committed and declining to quit
write got his pay back, found his I.O.U. & started signing the shit
dont matter ur talent, you'll leave with a fucking concussion
i'd dwell on your skill... but you didnt put much up for discussion
i lack hard personals & punches, im hyped emphatically
while the only thing you lack is the fucking right to battle me
im a jew rebelling against my religion, but still in a doper class ..
so when i drop pass-over, you'll drop from an over-pass ..
salute u goodbye like a gentleman, u get dispatched cuz im godly
so i'll shake ya hand... but it won't be attached to ya body
you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..
pussy never partys at all, its not just in rap he's a bitch
write thought drunk driving was running a taxi for chrit

[Elwood]

write..




It’s a fight to the finish, he’ll be catchin left hooks…and right jabs
And I’ll be sendin him home packin….his face with ice bags
--pretty decent
You’re fucked…W.Rite’s mad…get another dude to replace him
Now I’m ready for Action…cus that’s who I shoulda been facin
--lmao
Pleaded to save’em…needs the net to keep him on the right track
Got demodded…then asked me to help him get his life back
--decent
Rode me to get here…im’ the shit bro, he’ll do anything to get close
In fact my head can’t get any bigger…w/o making the bitch choke
--hmm
It was destined to happen…if I were u I wouldn’t invest in this faggot
He’ll hide behinds his looks, with a lock on his medicine cabinet
--lol
I beg the question, who are you? But its his rep that beckons
He’s the first, last and only to nominate his self in legends
--good
Come your hardest…you’ll still lose I’ll put ya prayers to rest
If I came half ass
Its cus Nique almost beat u and she was barely dressed
--lol nice
Speaking of Nique, ya flows the same…i’m just stating the facts how
He took her style, not just text….but her dress with the back out
--good
Leaves the text scene a loser…and knowing he’ll place second
And lives in the same box…we used for his going away present
--lmao
DM don’t need you …get to stepping and leave the rest to us
Held out his hand and I gave him five…quarters to catch the bus
--good
are u a mess or what...mistaken to think this cat can touch me
He’ll lose here…but first to win an Oscar for acting ugly
--nah
Sex lifes in question...nothing to hide except this bitch is gay
If his walls could talk...they still wouldn’t have shit to say
--lol
Cant explain the loss well.....so I’ll give him the best reason
U didnt lose the final...you just got a rough start for next season
--nah
Feeble takes over the league and the good heads upped and left
Beat u and become legend... this is how Evolve must’ve felt
--lol
This dude’s a bum...a lazy fuck, so tell me why would I care
And the word on the street is.....that you still reside there
--ha
RB hates this fag...but he thinks he’ll make the best, believers
Switched names moved to RM but don’t get respect there either
--heh
Get you aim list for votes...knew u weren’t who u claim to be
Bitch im facin u this week...WHY THE FUCK ARE U AIMIN ME
--lol.. good
fuck it im’ spent...I cant believe I took a shit on my rival
we’ll even exchange, I’ll give you the L, u just give me the title
--hmm
Start all the bitchin and whining...how can u be proud of this shit
Six million ways to die and still managed to go out like a bitch
--decent

nice verse, personals and shit were good..


feeble.



im nicer than you... this bitch is just a fool in disguise
that verse looked so much like a novel you'll win the pulitzer prize
--nah
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
--meh
i bring fire at haters, u stole my style, u better admire creators ..
only speak if u have sumthin good to say, explains why he's quiet by nature
--good
he's never one to post in threads, still people hype this loner
so when u walked off with the win, how'd u distract the rightful owner
--decent
all u have is dr's, u cant compete, its your fault stepping man
ur verses make for a smaller magazine than the assault weapons ban
--pretty good.
your anti-social here, and i run cross country but fuck it dude
ur so fast u ditched ur efforts to win & they cant catch up to you
--lol
LLL over-rates you.. the course your heading's deception
thats only cuz you're the best man..... at a wedding reception
--lol niceness
u act like your a fan of the truth, and you aint the man to accuse
u told me u flip lines, i see ur d/rs now as they chant an excuse
--good
Quote:
Originally Posted by Siege
so you thought I was wack? and that I cant key sickness?
bitch, ill stomp a mudhole in your ass and plant trees in it - Pav
just saw this at another site
his > W.Rite's
i got the win securely, ya spittin poorly & finished surely,
i don't have to put you under siege, wise ways did it for me..
--good..
u wished for glory, HW title.. back when me & K largo had had it
write wants to trade styles so much i put an embargo on fabric..
--nah
im tired & the evenings thru, give me a reason to be beating you
maybe you'll take the belt, after all i aint signing up for season two
--decent
i'll whore this fag, crack on this kid.. a meek dreaming user
cuz write gets put down more than a weak team of movers
--meh
i heard that winners circle line of urs, so many bitches hating when
they can only flip lines, you've moved on to manipulating them
--lol nice
you needed revenge, committed and declining to quit
write got his pay back, found his I.O.U. & started signing the shit
--lmao
dont matter ur talent, you'll leave with a fucking concussion
i'd dwell on your skill... but you didnt put much up for discussion
--nah
i lack hard personals & punches, im hyped emphatically
while the only thing you lack is the fucking right to battle me
--nah
im a jew rebelling against my religion, but still in a doper class ..
so when i drop pass-over, you'll drop from an over-pass ..
--lol nice
salute u goodbye like a gentleman, u get dispatched cuz im godly
so i'll shake ya hand... but it won't be attached to ya body
--good
you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..
--nah
pussy never partys at all, its not just in rap he's a bitch
write thought drunk driving was running a taxi for chrit
--good


well... good battle no doubt... write's verse had it for me... alot more enjoyable, not to take anything from feeble... dq the vote if you want... but this is how i see it...

v/ Write

[Richard Parker]

^ that all depends who the hell elwood is. lol .

[Jacent.]

Mr. W.Rite

It’s a fight to the finish, he’ll be catchin left hooks…and right jabs
And I’ll be sendin him home packin….his face with ice bags
You’re fucked…W.Rite’s mad…get another dude to replace him
Now I’m ready for Action…cus that’s who I shoulda been facin
Rode me to get here…im’ the shit bro, he’ll do anything to get close
In fact my head can’t get any bigger…w/o making the bitch choke
I beg the question, who are you? But its his rep that beckons
He’s the first, last and only to nominate his self in legends
Come your hardest…you’ll still lose I’ll put ya prayers to rest
If I came half ass
Its cus Nique almost beat u and she was barely dressed
Speaking of Nique, ya flows the same…i’m just stating the facts how
He took her style, not just text….but her dress with the back out
DM don’t need you …get to stepping and leave the rest to us
Held out his hand and I gave him five…quarters to catch the bus
are u a mess or what...mistaken to think this cat can touch me
He’ll lose here…but first to win an Oscar for acting ugly
Cant explain the loss well.....so I’ll give him the best reason
U didnt lose the final...you just got a rough start for next season
Feeble takes over the league and the good heads upped and left
Beat u and become legend... this is how Evolve must’ve felt
RB hates this fag...but he thinks he’ll make the best, believers
Switched names moved to RM but don’t get respect there either
fuck it im’ spent...I cant believe I took a shit on my rival
we’ll even exchange, I’ll give you the L, u just give me the title


Feeble

bring fire at haters, u stole my style, u better admire creators ..
only speak if u have sumthin good to say, explains why he's quiet by nature
all u have is dr's, u cant compete, its your fault stepping man
ur verses make for a smaller magazine than the assault weapons ban
u wished for glory, HW title.. back when me & K largo had had it
write wants to trade styles so much i put an embargo on fabric..
im tired & the evenings thru, give me a reason to be beating you
maybe you'll take the belt, after all i aint signing up for season two
i'll whore this fag, crack on this kid.. a meek dreaming user
cuz write gets put down more than a weak team of movers
i heard that winners circle line of urs, so many bitches hating when
they can only flip lines, you've moved on to manipulating them
dont matter ur talent, you'll leave with a fucking concussion
i'd dwell on your skill... but you didnt put much up for discussion
i lack hard personals & punches, im hyped emphatically
while the only thing you lack is the fucking right to battle me
im a jew rebelling against my religion, but still in a doper class ..
so when i drop pass-over, you'll drop from an over-pass ..
you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..


V/ Mr. W.Rite, pretty dope verses from both, wasn't really up to reading 36 lines though , but damn, Write had some funny ass lines in there & it was just a smoother read while Feeble at some points didn't come with it at all, but he had enough good lines to keep it close, Write mos def earned the LLL title

Dope battle

[Richard Parker]

1-0 write, by no means over. by jacent's vote its really close. keep voting, lets get a lot of votes on this.

[Emerge]

Hey hey, a battle that didn't suck ass.

Write - The only text head that is not wack as fuck.
Evolve used to hold that title.

Anyhow Write just murdered feeble everysingle bar
from Write was quotable. The personals were executed
well. He just came evil as fuck in this. Seriously.

Feeble didn't come bad a couple of meh/wack/blah
lines, but other than that his word choice hurt him.

Write Bodied Feeble with the first 18 lines, those
were his best.


Write would be a sick audio battler...

[Sergio...]

Wizzle


Pleaded to save’em…needs the net to keep him on the right track
Got demodded…then asked me to help him get his life back
DM don’t need you …get to stepping and leave the rest to us
Held out his hand and I gave him five…quarters to catch the bus
Sex lifes in question...nothing to hide except this bitch is gay
If his walls could talk...they still wouldn’t have shit to say
Cant explain the loss well.....so I’ll give him the best reason
U didnt lose the final...you just got a rough start for next season
This dude’s a bum...a lazy fuck, so tell me why would I care
And the word on the street is.....that you still reside there
RB hates this fag...but he thinks he’ll make the best, believers
Switched names moved to RM but don’t get respect there either
Get you aim list for votes...knew u weren’t who u claim to be
Bitch im facin u this week...WHY THE FUCK ARE U AIMIN ME


Fizzy



im nicer than you... this bitch is just a fool in disguise
that verse looked so much like a novel you'll win the pulitzer prize
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
all u have is dr's, u cant compete, its your fault stepping man
ur verses make for a smaller magazine than the assault weapons ban
u act like your a fan of the truth, and you aint the man to accuse
u told me u flip lines, i see ur d/rs now as they chant an excuse
u wished for glory, HW title.. back when me & K largo had had it
write wants to trade styles so much i put an embargo on fabric..
i heard that winners circle line of urs, so many bitches hating when
they can only flip lines, you've moved on to manipulating them




14.vs.12.


W.rite wins barely...

[Nique.]

I've decided to vote since Feeble Minded has taking away almost every vote. This is a championship match and anyone should be allowed to vote because well, it's the ONLY match to vote on. And I know most of the LLL member's won't vote on it, so I will vote. The two vote's that you've disregarded were even broken. So, I'm voting with the dopest breakdown that will ever be witnessed in LLL.

Ya prepped hard I’m goin 40...but here comes the best part
Figured I’d spot him four lines to give him a head start
This was ok, but it wasn't really a punch
.
.
.
.
It’s a fight to the finish, he’ll be catchin left hooks…and right jabs
And I’ll be sendin him home packin….his face with ice bags
This is in fact a punch...not hard hitting, but a punch. And it was wordplay, so it was aight.
You’re fucked…W.Rite’s mad…get another dude to replace him
Now I’m ready for Action…cus that’s who I shoulda been facin
Dope. No, not because of the name, I hate that name. Because well, it was a personal. And the wording was perfect.
Pleaded to save’em…needs the net to keep him on the right track
Got demodded…then asked me to help him get his life back
Lol. Humor punch. Another personal. Is it true? You be the judge of that. Pretty good wording.
Rode me to get here…im’ the shit bro, he’ll do anything to get close
In fact my head can’t get any bigger…w/o making the bitch choke
I despise dick punches. It's played and old. Don't use them ever again. I don't care how beautifully worded it is.
It was destined to happen…if I were u I wouldn’t invest in this faggot
He’ll hide behinds his looks, with a lock on his medicine cabinet
LMAO. I never seen that before. Good punch.
I beg the question, who are you? But its his rep that beckons
He’s the first, last and only to nominate his self in legends
Damn. ANOTHER personal. Personals are 10x doper than punches.
Come your hardest…you’ll still lose I’ll put ya prayers to rest
If I came half ass
Its cus Nique almost beat u and she was barely dressed
True, but the wording could of been better. Decent at best.
Speaking of Nique, ya flows the same…i’m just stating the facts how
He took her style, not just text….but her dress with the back out
LMAO. Word? Better wording than the one above. Although, I don't like the fact that you used the same concept two bar's in a row, so you get an ok at best.
Leaves the text scene a loser…and knowing he’ll place second
And lives in the same box…we used for his going away present
Damn. Wordplay. Double meaning. Flawless. Dope.
DM don’t need you …get to stepping and leave the rest to us
Held out his hand and I gave him five…quarters to catch the bus
BWAH. Your wording is crazy. Never seen that either. Watch this get flipped or re-used differently.
are u a mess or what...mistaken to think this cat can touch me
He’ll lose here…but first to win an Oscar for acting ugly
LMAO. For acting ugly. That's not nice. Good punch.
Sex lifes in question...nothing to hide except this bitch is gay
If his walls could talk...they still wouldn’t have shit to say
Straight punch. No laughter, but it was straight.
Cant explain the loss well.....so I’ll give him the best reason
U didnt lose the final...you just got a rough start for next season
Didn't you say he was retiring above? Your verse has to make sense, so nah.
Feeble takes over the league and the good heads upped and left
Beat u and become legend... this is how Evolve must’ve felt
Word. Pretty good personal.
This dude’s a bum...a lazy fuck, so tell me why would I care
And the word on the street is.....that you still reside there
LMAO. Good punch.
RB hates this fag...but he thinks he’ll make the best, believers
Switched names moved to RM but don’t get respect there either
True, but it wasn't really effective.
Get you aim list for votes...knew u weren’t who u claim to be
Bitch im facin u this week...WHY THE FUCK ARE U AIMIN ME
Is this true? If so, sad. Since I don't know if it's true or not. This is decent.
fuck it im’ spent...I cant believe I took a shit on my rival
we’ll even exchange, I’ll give you the L, u just give me the title
Nah, too simple. Impress me.
Start all the bitchin and whining...how can u be proud of this shit
Six million ways to die and still managed to go out like a bitch
Good closer. I said damn again.

Overall, your verse was damn near flawless. What made your verse so interesting was all the damn effective personals you had. You didn't focus on wordplay or similes or weak metaphors, you just went punch for punch personal for personal and that's what made your verse dope. Although, I think you used me a little too much. It almost got repetitive, but you used it effectively. Dope verse.

Feeble:

im nicer than you... this bitch is just a fool in disguise
that verse looked so much like a novel you'll win the pulitzer prize
I thought you don't feed? You just did. You made a THREAD about this in Emcee Interaction, but this was a good punch.
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
Decent at best. Your wording could of been better.
i bring fire at haters, u stole my style, u better admire creators ..
only speak if u have sumthin good to say, explains why he's quiet by nature
Good punch.
he's never one to post in threads, still people hype this loner
so when u walked off with the win, how'd u distract the rightful owner
What? I wasn't feeling at all.
all u have is dr's, u cant compete, its your fault stepping man
ur verses make for a smaller magazine than the assault weapon
Good punch. Although, i don't believe he has dickriders.
our anti-social here, and i run cross country but fuck it dude
ur so fast u ditched ur efforts to win & they cant catch up to you
our anti-social here? What does that mean? I liked the second line though, but make sure your 1st line has something to do with it.
LLL over-rates you.. the course your heading's deception
thats only cuz you're the best man..... at a wedding reception
I've seen this concept before. It wasn't really effective anyway. And I haven't seen one personal yet.
u act like your a fan of the truth, and you aint the man to accuse
u told me u flip lines, i see ur d/rs now as they chant an excuseQuote:
Originally Posted by Siege
so you thought I was wack? and that I cant key sickness?
bitch, ill stomp a mudhole in your ass and plant trees in it - Pav
just saw this at another site
his > W.Rite's
Did you just quote in your verse? WTH. I'm not a fan of that at all. You could of mentioned it in your line. And the punch itself wasn't effective.

i got the win securely, ya spittin poorly & finished surely,
i don't have to put you under siege, wise ways did it for me..
Decent punch. I understood it, but wise shouldn't been used. Write's 10x doper than him
u wished for glory, HW title.. back when me & K largo had had it
write wants to trade styles so much i put an embargo on fabric..
Dope punch. Seriously.
im tired & the evenings thru, give me a reason to be beating you
maybe you'll take the belt, after all i aint signing up for season two
This is just a fact. Wasn't effective.
i'll whore this fag, crack on this kid.. a meek dreaming user
cuz write gets put down more than a weak team of movers
Eh, wording was atrocious. Could of been stronger.
i heard that winners circle line of urs, so many bitches hating when
they can only flip lines, you've moved on to manipulating them
LMAO. Dope punch.
you needed revenge, committed and declining to quit
write got his pay back, found his I.O.U. & started signing the shit
Nah
dont matter ur talent, you'll leave with a fucking concussion
i'd dwell on your skill... but you didnt put much up for discussion
This was straight
i lack hard personals & punches, im hyped emphatically
while the only thing you lack is the fucking right to battle me
You notice that you lack personals also? Yes, you do. And your second line was a bragging right line, so no.
im a jew rebelling against my religion, but still in a doper class ..
so when i drop pass-over, you'll drop from an over-pass ..
Dope.
salute u goodbye like a gentleman, u get dispatched cuz im godly
so i'll shake ya hand... but it won't be attached to ya body
No.
you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..
Good punch. Good wording. Short and sweet.
pussy never partys at all, its not just in rap he's a bitch
write thought drunk driving was running a taxi for chrit
Worst closer. It didn't even hit.

Your verse was nice, but the main flaw was personals. You didn't have any, while Write's entire verse was straight personals that hit you effectively. You still had your wordplay, but the mixture of direct punches helped you in this battle. Some line's I wasn't feeling and other's I thought were good, with a few dope, BUT, you alway's need a couple of personals in your battle. Write had personals AND punches with little wordplay. I think you attempted personals, but realized you didn't really have any, so that's why you even said it in your verse. Nice verse though.

Now, this was a very good battle, but not legendary only because the variety of punching styles weren't used effectively. Write focused on a lot of personals and feeble didn't really touch upon it at all. Write focused too much on my name at times and Feeble's bragging and wording brought his verse down a notch. Both heated up at some point, dropped a couple of bar's, and was good on most, but when you have personals..I believe that it keep's the reader more entertained because it's actually true. And I know most of thing's write said were true. So, with that said..my vote goes to..,

V/Write







-Nique

[Kaput Mundi]

It’s a fight to the finish, he’ll be catchin left hooks…and right jabs
And I’ll be sendin him home packin….his face with ice bags
okay not much of a punch here more just wordplay
You’re fucked…W.Rite’s mad…get another dude to replace him
Now I’m ready for Action…cus that’s who I shoulda been facin
nasty
Pleaded to save’em…needs the net to keep him on the right track
Got demodded…then asked me to help him get his life back
meh didn't like this much
Rode me to get here…im’ the shit bro, he’ll do anything to get close
In fact my head can’t get any bigger…w/o making the bitch choke
dick head=played
It was destined to happen…if I were u I wouldn’t invest in this faggot
He’ll hide behinds his looks, with a lock on his medicine cabinet
this has me laughing...nice very
I beg the question, who are you? But its his rep that beckons
He’s the first, last and only to nominate his self in legends
lol true
Come your hardest…you’ll still lose I’ll put ya prayers to rest
If I came half ass
Its cus Nique almost beat u and she was barely dressed
good
Speaking of Nique, ya flows the same…i’m just stating the facts how
He took her style, not just text….but her dress with the back out
nice another laugh
Leaves the text scene a loser…and knowing he’ll place second
And lives in the same box…we used for his going away present
nice again
DM don’t need you …get to stepping and leave the rest to us
Held out his hand and I gave him five…quarters to catch the bus
average
are u a mess or what...mistaken to think this cat can touch me
He’ll lose here…but first to win an Oscar for acting ugly
good
Sex lifes in question...nothing to hide except this bitch is gay
If his walls could talk...they still wouldn’t have shit to say
nasty Write
Cant explain the loss well.....so I’ll give him the best reason
U didnt lose the final...you just got a rough start for next season
no way
Feeble takes over the league and the good heads upped and left
Beat u and become legend... this is how Evolve must’ve felt
good/okay
This dude’s a bum...a lazy fuck, so tell me why would I care
And the word on the street is.....that you still reside there
you sorta already used this with the box line okay though
RB hates this fag...but he thinks he’ll make the best, believers
Switched names moved to RM but don’t get respect there either
lol..okay
Get you aim list for votes...knew u weren’t who u claim to be
Bitch im facin u this week...WHY THE FUCK ARE U AIMIN ME
didn't think much of this one
fuck it im’ spent...I cant believe I took a shit on my rival
we’ll even exchange, I’ll give you the L, u just give me the title
again not much..dieing out
Start all the bitchin and whining...how can u be proud of this shit
Six million ways to die and still managed to go out like a bitch
okay







im nicer than you... this bitch is just a fool in disguise
that verse looked so much like a novel you'll win the pulitzer prize
fed but good
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
nope
i bring fire at haters, u stole my style, u better admire creators ..
only speak if u have sumthin good to say, explains why he's quiet by nature
nice
he's never one to post in threads, still people hype this loner
so when u walked off with the win, how'd u distract the rightful owner
not much
all u have is dr's, u cant compete, its your fault stepping man
ur verses make for a smaller magazine than the assault weapons ban
good
your anti-social here, and i run cross country but fuck it dude
ur so fast u ditched ur efforts to win & they cant catch up to you
good
LLL over-rates you.. the course your heading's deception
thats only cuz you're the best man..... at a wedding reception
nope Feeble
u act like your a fan of the truth, and you aint the man to accuse
u told me u flip lines, i see ur d/rs now as they chant an excuse
wording was off but good punch
Quote:
Originally Posted by Siege
so you thought I was wack? and that I cant key sickness?
bitch, ill stomp a mudhole in your ass and plant trees in it - Pav
just saw this at another site
his > W.Rite's
not a fan of quotes
i got the win securely, ya spittin poorly & finished surely,
i don't have to put you under siege, wise ways did it for me..
read the above okay though
u wished for glory, HW title.. back when me & K largo had had it
write wants to trade styles so much i put an embargo on fabric..
laughed good
im tired & the evenings thru, give me a reason to be beating you
maybe you'll take the belt, after all i aint signing up for season two
nope
i'll whore this fag, crack on this kid.. a meek dreaming user
cuz write gets put down more than a weak team of movers
good
i heard that winners circle line of urs, so many bitches hating when
they can only flip lines, you've moved on to manipulating them
good concept but the way you set it up & used didn't make it as nice as it could of been
you needed revenge, committed and declining to quit
write got his pay back, found his I.O.U. & started signing the shit
laughed again
dont matter ur talent, you'll leave with a fucking concussion
i'd dwell on your skill... but you didnt put much up for discussion
average very
i lack hard personals & punches, im hyped emphatically
while the only thing you lack is the fucking right to battle me
bragger
im a jew rebelling against my religion, but still in a doper class ..
so when i drop pass-over, you'll drop from an over-pass ..
nice
salute u goodbye like a gentleman, u get dispatched cuz im godly
so i'll shake ya hand... but it won't be attached to ya body
not much here
you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..
good
pussy never partys at all, its not just in rap he's a bitch
write thought drunk driving was running a taxi for chrit
Feeble?what the fuck?


Nice read from both no doubt BUT I have Write taking the title. He had better punches, a few better ideas and a good consitency.Feeble you had some nice lines but there were like 5 or 6 bars that just didn't hit.



Vote Mr W.Rite

PS Feeble when you ask for a lot of votes on a battle you don't DQ someone's breakdown....

[Richard Parker]

^ PS only LLL is allowed to vote in LLL. idiot .